Problems I See[edit]

I see many problems with this article.

  1. It doesn't have a lead section.
  2. It's mostly unreferenced.
  3. The only article that links here is industrial design.
  4. It's uncategorized.
  5. It's mostly redundant with the information in electric guitar#history.
  6. The bulk of the information was written by one editor.
  7. The list at the bottom is possibly a way to prevent orphanage of other articles.

Given these problems, I propose the article be scrapped and whatever unique, verifiable information (which may be nothing) be salvaged and merged into electric guitar, Fender Musical Instruments Corporation, or other appropriate articles. — Ultor_SolisT 21:57, 2 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've cleaned it up a bit. A pretty interesting topic, but a lot to improve.83.87.170.234 (talk) 12:46, 15 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ghastly article -- deletion might be too good for it. Trying to take on a big topic with enthusiasm and a severe lack of actual knowledge. Overwhelmed bythe grandiosity, beginning (literally) with Electric guitar design is a type of industrial design and winding tragically downhill.
Augh, another ugly puppy I have to put on my rescue list. Please, someone, take it away...
Weeb Dingle (talk) 09:07, 10 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Upon re-review, and seeing that nobody's stood up in defense, I support removing this article entirely. It adds to no discussion, and it resembles nothing more than a failed term paper. Until that happy day, I am going to remove some of the more septic portions.
Weeb Dingle (talk) 02:05, 16 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In good faith, I have taken a few swings at reworking this article, but I do not know that it can be salvaged. In any case, I do not see that I am suited to the task, and may instead simply recommend it for deletion.

If it is going to persist, it MUST show some effort at attempting an overview or summary of the underlying philosophy and motivation of, well, electric guitar design. Off the top of my head, a few suggestions: Les Paul, Leo Fender, Doc Kauffman, Seth Lover, Paul Bigsby, Trev Wilkinson, Paul Reed Smith, Ken Parker, Grover Jackson. Plenty has been written about them all.
Weeb Dingle (talk) 08:28, 6 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

claims about "the first"[edit]

To reiterate my comments at Talk:Electric guitar:

Give it a thought.
Weeb Dingle (talk) 04:51, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]