Ref #3[2] leads just to a book listing. as the book is 125 pages long, we need page numbers for these cites. As it is a US Congress document presumably it is available online somewhere?
As I cannot access the other references, I shall assume good faith.
Administration section is completely uncited.
Ref #15 - Strategics textbook, 9th grade is not accepatble as a reliable source.
Military section is uncited
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Military section is over detailed. A prose summary is all that is neccessary. We don't need to know how many underpanst the army had!
The Geography section should be converted into prose with a description of the geography, rather than tables which add little to the understanding.