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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 15:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are my comments

• "Originating from an area of disturbed weather on June 19, 2011, several hundred miles south-southeast of Mexico, Beatriz gradually intensified." no need for 2011 IMO.
• Wikilink Mexico in lead.
• Lead should be one paragraph due to lack of impact.
• "However, the overall effects of Beatriz were limited and the rains were largely beneficial in mitigating a severe drought." I'd changed that to "Overall, effects of Beatriz were minor and the rains were largely beneficial in mitigating a severe drought."
• "Three hours after classification, the depression strengthened Tropical Storm Beatriz, the named storm of the 2011 Pacific hurricane season." Is it more or is a word missing?
• Why isn't the recon flight mention in the MH?
• Wikilink Mexico in MH if you wikilink Guatemala/
• Any damage totals?
• Why ins't the SNM report used in the article?
• I think you got the ref and work fields mixed up. Isn't NHC the publisher and NOAA the work?

Otherwise, it's good. I am leaving this nomination on hold. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:53, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]