"He made eight appearances in total for the club" infobox says 11, but then there could be some confusion with when the transfer window took place.
He signed for Blackburn at the end of the window so played all the league games in august for United. I've added in a bit more info to clarify. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"By May 2011, a number of Premier League and Championship teams had enquired about acquiring Slew's services, with United turning down a £500,000 offer from Fulham.[14][15][16][17]" four refs? Why?
One links to their academy team for the youth FA cup and one to the parent club for the league appearance. Not sure what else I can do about that? Open to suggestions? Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Slew signed for Premier League side Blackburn Rovers on transfer deadline day, Blackburn paying a fee of £1.1 million for the player,[4][20] and Slew signing a four-year" yuck. Rephrase. Don't repeat Slew, no need, and try not to have such a mammoth sentence.
I don't think you need to relink things in every section (e.g. Championship).
I was under the impression you should link on fist instance within sections (as someone jumping straight to that section, particularly on mobile, won't have seen a link earlier n the text) although this seems to be a moot point so have removed as advised. Bladeboy1889 (talk) 12:14, 1 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fair point for mobile browsing, I hadn't even thought of that. Sorry to waste your time on this point, if you want to put the links back, that's just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]