''and is among the four largest, most successful orders, along with the Hymenoptera, Diptera, and the Coleoptera Does the reference say stat it is one the four "most successful" - if si then it needs attribution in the text, if not then "successful" is a weasel word
''holometabolous, or undergo complete metamorphosis. suggest rephrasing - e.g. "holometabolous, meaning that they undergo complete metamorphosis. " they are not alternatives, but are the same thing.
The males of some species in the butterfly family Nymphalidae, the fore-legs are greatly reduced and are not used for walking or perching ungrammatical
The abdomen, which is less sclerotized than the thorax explain "sclerotized" or better still use a more accessible word.
The word "sclerotized", has already appeared earlier in subsection "Head" where it has been linked and explained in the manner suggested by you, hence it is not required to do this for every subsequent occurrence of the word. May we consider this as done?AshLin (talk) 05:41, 26 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
(b) OK, what I want you to do is to read this out aloud, a sentence at a time and see where the prose can be rendered more literately. When you have got the prose into reasonable shape, I will complete the review. Currently it is not fit for GA. I am watching this page so please respond here *at the bottom of the page) when the copy-edit is complete.
OK, I think this passes muster now. If you wish to take this to FAC, please consider the article length, currently 110Kb, and a through copy-edit to really polish up the prose. Listing as GA. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:12, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]