"The video received positive reception from the few critics that reviewed." do you wanna say something like this Live Intrusion received positive reception from the few critics that reviewed the video.?
"including a picture from the mid-1990s who had "Slayer" carved onto their forearm." do you mean this including a picture from the mid-1990s , about a fan, who had "Slayer" carved onto their forearm.?
Also, is it really necessary to have the prices of the release(s)?
I think it really just adds to the article and really isn't necessary, but the article's size is so short, so I think it looks better with as much information that I can get. CrowzRSA21:25, 3 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Critical Reception
Not sure what "marginal" means, can you wiktionary it? [1]
Notes, I'm going to put this On hold for you to work on the concerns, everything else looks fine. You should have no problem fixing the article in less than a day! Good luck. AJona1992 (talk) 21:12, 3 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Its alright, just wanted to know why. There seems to be a problem with the section Personnel, the ref#15 code seems to be broken. Can you fix that, real quick? Thanks, AJona1992 (talk) 21:34, 3 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]