Revieing currently, but this page is pretty unstable
My Inputs
Improve by adding dhoni's role and performance in the following
Do not touch the infobox many editors here are having their own field day with it. I have fixed it according to all specifications, do not dismiss it as "unnecessary", no. Its been there on many featured articles and it should stay.
There is absolutely nothing about the ICC tournaments. He was a winning CWC Captain, you'd think his wiki would have details. Refer to India at the Cricket World Cup and add, for all four editions.
Playing style should have his unique keeping technique, of which he has given many interviews
few pictures with team-mates
Better thumbnail picture, as it is already getting re-used below
All the above are personal comments and does not have anything to do with GA criteria. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 15:08, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have often seen suggestions being made like these on GA reviews. I havent failed it, I have put it on hold. All these are valid points and go towards the improvement of the article. Pharaoh496 (talk) 15:09, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies. I was trying to give suggestions, but I understand your point. Pharaoh496 (talk) 15:29, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Cleanups:
Few places contain wrong grammar and punctuation.
Minor changes made; Need to be more specific on the instance to work on it. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 15:08, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The [IPL] section medal record has a small win and runner up bar for csk and a very large one for rps.
@Pharaoh496 I have made changes for the specific points you have raised and reverted on the others. If you have further comments, you can point out the same.
With regards to the subjective comments content of the article, other users and yourself can contribute as it has no relevance to the GA review or criteria. Thanks!
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I dont know why but I was not notified of the above message. I will get to it. Pharaoh496 (talk) 17:32, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A bit of the [Early Career] and [Domestic Career] is repeated. I would suggest either merging it to form [Early and Domestic Career] or removing repetitions.
The bit about "Roar of the Lion" is repeated in [Outside Cricket] and [In popular culture]. I would suggest removing it from the former section completely.
"praised for his lightning-fast glove-work" (In [Playing style]); replace "lightning-fast" with a more formal way of conveying the same message.
In the infobox, under the awards; I propose removing everything else other than Padma Bhushan as that is the award Dhoni recieved during his Military career.
Other than this, it does meet the GA criteria. Well done! Pharaoh496 (talk) 15:42, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]