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Reviewer: AmericanAir88 (talk · contribs) 15:08, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Tinton5:, I believe we have met. I will take on this mammoth of an article and will ensure a premium and thorough review. I apologize for the almost ONE YEAR wait, but we have a lot of work ahead of us. AmericanAir88^(talk) 15:08, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Major issues

• Tags:I see an "Update tag", plenty of "Full citation needed" tags, some "Dead link" tags, an "unreliable source" tag, and a "trivia" tag. This could become an immediate failure if not addressed per the criteria. Please address these.
• Copy violations: [1] and [2]. The first one may be copying the article, but the second one is from a SPS.
• Dead links: References number 33 and 34 are dead.

Major reference issues

• Reference number 40 is a Self Published Source and has a tag on it.
• Reference number 15 is also self published, but could possibly work if you give a rationale.

Issues

• Some refs have a {!} template for the ref titles.
• Second half of "tolls" section has no citations.
• Some WP:WEASELWORDS such as "is considered"
• An entire trivia section

More to come

Impressions

@Tinton5: We have a lot of work cut out for this article. There are numerous issues that could currently qualify this for a immediate failure. However, knowing your edits and your dedication, I will give you a chance. I do not believe in quick fails unless they are absolutely needed or the editor does not show any dedication. Tinton, I believe in you, but it is going to be a ton of work. AmericanAir88^(talk) 15:23, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tinton5: You coming back? Its been 3 days and we have a ton of work to do. If you don't respond on time. I will fail this as a result of the major issues and your absence. AmericanAir88^(talk) 16:32, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi American Air yes I have been rather busy lately but when I get home I will work on this. Tinton5 (talk) 18:58, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tinton5: Thank you. Any update? Failing will occur if the review does not get attention as a result of the surplus of issues. AmericanAir88^(talk) 16:05, 22 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tinton5: Final alert. Today is your last day before I fail the GAN. The amount of work needed to be done is a lot. AmericanAir88^(talk) 13:27, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Conclusion

@Tinton5: I apologize. but the lack of interest and the several issues have been present during this review. You said you would do it and I gave you another week. I am going to have to ✗ Fail this nomination. Feel free to nominate this again once the issues are fixed and you are present. AmericanAir88^(talk) 15:21, 26 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]