Edit request 28 September 2018[edit]

I am an OTRS volunteer posting this request in behalf of a company representative who requested changes in OTRS ticket 2018092010006951.

Request is as follows:

The correspondent indicated that more change requests may come in. I have asked him to introduce himself here and continue. ~Anachronist (talk) 04:43, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 29-SEP-2018

  Edit request implemented  

  1. The entire lead section was insufficiently paraphrased from the source material and was removed/replaced with the proposed text.
  2. As the replacement text was not linked to any of the sources given in the prior text, these references were removed.[a] The one source maintenance template was placed in the article, taking the place of the more citations needed template. The section templates noting no sources were left untouched.
  3. Duplicate Wiki-links, common wiki-links, and those which did not link to the given title were de-linked to clear the sea of blue.
    Regards,  Spintendo  06:39, 29 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

  1. ^ The removed sentence which contained the three references stated: "The company has also been extensively involved in professional racing, and designs, engineers and builds its own race cars, i.e. chassis and components." As this sentence was insufficiently paraphrased and removed, and because a similar, properly paraphrased replacement was not offered — the three references attached to it were removed.