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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 05:16, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Infobox: Production code cite?
• Lede: I'm not sure reference 1 is really needed
• Lede: After the initial 'also voiced by MacFarlane', just go straight to '(MacFarlane)'
• Lede: "both in their firsts in the Family Guy series" This doesn't make much sense. Try "their firsts for the Family Guy series"
• Lede: Comma after 'Besides Sinatra…"
• Lede: 'TV' -> 'television'
• Plot: Just a quick question… Is the proper capitalization for the club "pLace", or is that a typo? If so, add ((sic))
• Production: Change the parenthetical 'Stew-Roids' fact into a separate sentence.
• Prouduction: Switch the last two refs in the second paragraph so that it goes [2][6]. It just looks prettier. ;)
• Reception: Explain what a Nielsen rating is (like you did on the others)
• Reception: Italicize AV Club
• References: Use consistent dating styles
• Refs 3 and 6 should use en-dashes (–) instead of dashes (-)
• There's some double parenthesis in Refs 7 and 8
• References: Ref 2, 3 and 6's publishers should be Yahoo! TV
• References: Cut the 'Yahoo! TV' part of the title out of Refs 2, 3, and 6
• References: Italicize The AV Club in 9
• References: Ref 10's publisher should be Zap2it (linked), and the work should be TV by the Numbers (also linked)
• Categories: Alphabetize these bad boys.

That's all. Sorry about the half-month delay. Real-life got in the way. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:01, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed your concerns. Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 21:15, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]