Check for Provide an accessible overview (MOS:INTRO): Done
Major Point 1: Plot "In this episode, offender profiler Frank Black (Lance Henriksen) investigates the initial outbreak of a deadly virus, and discovers that his employers, the Millennium Group may pose a danger to his safety." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 2: Production "The episode was written by Glen Morgan and James Wong, and directed by Dwight Little." & "The Fourth Horseman" was written under the belief that the series would soon be cancelled, and inspired in part by the outbreak of bovine spongiform encephalopathy in the United Kingdom." (summarised well in the lead)
Major Point 3: Broadcast and reception "It premiered on the Fox network on May 8, 1998." & "The episode has earned positive responses from critics, and was seen by approximately 4.61 million households during its initial broadcast." (summarised well in the lead)
Check for Relative emphasis: Done
Major Point 1: Plot "In this episode, offender profiler Frank Black (Lance Henriksen) investigates the initial outbreak of a deadly virus, and discovers that his employers, the Millennium Group may pose a danger to his safety." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 2: Production "The episode was written by Glen Morgan and James Wong, and directed by Dwight Little." & "The Fourth Horseman" was written under the belief that the series would soon be cancelled, and inspired in part by the outbreak of bovine spongiform encephalopathy in the United Kingdom." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Major Point 3: Broadcast and reception "It premiered on the Fox network on May 8, 1998." & "The episode has earned positive responses from critics, and was seen by approximately 4.61 million households during its initial broadcast." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
Grapple X, I'm very happy and inspired to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article:
Thanks for the quick review! Which paragraphs do you feel should be rearranged? I've tried to keep separate subjects separated, especially major scene changes in the plot section, but I could probably merge some of them together. GRAPPLEX00:27, 19 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, Grapple X, very much for writing such excellent articles. I feel that the last paragraph of the plot section "That night, Black answers a ..." can be merged with the previous one. But I'd leave that to your good judgement. --Seabuckthorn♥22:44, 19 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]