I'll get started on this one today. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:51, 1 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
This is a well-written article, not much to quibble with.
Lede
"Star Breweries also produces THB Fresh, a shandy (locally called panaché), with less than 1% alcohol, THB Special (6.2% alcohol), and THB Lite, a low alcohol beer (1%)." This sentence has some confusing commas. I'd suggest using semi-colons or more parentheses.
"...a type of mushroom is added..." That's an interesting detail. Do you know which kind of mushroom?
Unfortunately, the source material doesn't specify. I'd like to know too! - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
That's too bad. It will have to remain a mystery! --Coemgenus (talk) 12:25, 2 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Images
File:THB.JPG concerns me. The license says it's the uploader's own work, but it looks a lot like the company's advertising. Do you know any more about it?
Agreed, I'm doubtful it's original work. I've replaced the image. - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it doesn't appear there are any active versions of these pages anymore, though they're available cached. Otherwise I would provide updated links. - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The best thing to do in that case is to change the "url=" field to "archive-url=" and replaced the dead link with the address for the archived version. --Coemgenus (talk) 12:28, 2 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I just added them for you. Passed! --Coemgenus (talk) 13:43, 4 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]