GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Vincent60030 (talk · contribs) 10:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take up this one. I'll be back soon no worries. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 10:48, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

General comments:

No worries. I'm in a similar position. I had hoped to review two articles in the pile before you finished this review and I haven't reviewed one yet.Dave (talk) 21:59, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

The reference says "first greenfield railroad". I was concerned that "greenfield/brownfield" is an industrial term that may not be understood by a general reader, so I attempted to capture the same spirit but without the word greenfield. I welcome any suggestions for better wording, or if you disagree that greenfield is an industry term, lets discuss. I did find that Wikipedia does have an article that discusses greenfield/brownfield Greenfield project is probably the proper article, but Greenfield land explains the concept better, so maybe keep the original wording but wikilink? Dave (talk) 19:41, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Moabdave: I think you misunderstood the issue here. The issue is that the reference does not cite the statement that it is the largest, not about the greenfield brownfield term. Sure I do not mind that you change the term greenfield to something else. I’ll give another look when I am available again. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 03:00, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Past efforts

I can do this. I have the book for source 6. It has one chapter dedicated to this rail line. I've debated expanding the Uintah Railway article using a summary of this chapter. I'll look into it. Dave (talk) 19:51, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I re-read the source and they had an interesting, but trivial detail about the Uintah Railray. I added it to both articles. It may or may not be appropriate for this article (I'll let you decide that) but I had fun reading and writing about it, so we'll see. Dave (talk) 21:16, 21 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't believe so. I don't have access to these journals. Long story short, as originally written these statements were sourced to the site utahrails.net. I asked someone else's opinion and they thought I relied too much on that source, and had access to the journals and changed the references. If you'd like I can add the utahrails.net references as backup sources. The concern is utahrails.net is a WP:SPS. If anybody takes the time to read it would see the author is an expert on the subject. As such I think I could defend it's reliability. Still, it would come up at a FAC review, should the article progress that far.Dave (talk) 19:51, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Current effort

Agreed. Done. Dave (talk) 19:55, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I believe I've addressed all issues above, except for the optional expansion of the paragraph on Uintah Railway. I will do it, just need some time. It's optional anyways ;) Dave (talk) 03:31, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I will hopefully take another look when I have the capacity as I still am not able to haha. Have to settle all of my deadlines on assignments. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 08:35, 13 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done with that optional part. ;) Dave (talk) 21:16, 21 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Vincent60030: I know you're busy but where are we at with this? Dave (talk) 07:33, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Moabdave: Apologies again for the very very late response. Hmm there has been an update to the article. Will there be further updates to this news? I will go ahead and finalise it. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 13:57, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Other than the aforementioned concern of stability, it should be good to move on :D Hope to hear from you soon. Great work! VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 14:07, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not that concerned. There will be minor updates as either the lawsuit or construction proceeds. But I think the article will be overall stable until the line is open. Obviously the article will need a major overhaul once the line is open, but that's unavoidable, and frankly, based on past experience still a few years away. Dave (talk) 15:40, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sure thing! going to happily pass this. Congratulations ya VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 12:16, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:46, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Map of the preferred route under consideration
Map of the preferred route under consideration

Improved to Good Article status by Moabdave (talk). Self-nominated at 02:11, 18 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything looks good here. Krakkos (talk) 09:33, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]