- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:10, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
In the Ploughed Field. Spring
... that history of the painting In the Ploughed Field. Spring, starting from the 1840s, is unknown? Source: Брук, Яков Владимирович; Иовлева, Лидия Ивановна (2005). Государственная Третьяковская галерея — каталог собрания (in Russian). Vol. 3. ISBN 5-93221-081-8. p.73
Created by Golden (talk). Self-nominated at 09:13, 2 May 2022 (UTC).
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I assume good faith on the references. I think that the image could be used though. I also think that the hook should say "the history". SL93 (talk) 15:50, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
I was going to update the original hook to add "the" as SL93 suggested, but ended up striking the hook, as it is not adequately supported by the article. It looks like there's a 50 year gap in its history between the 1840s and 1893, when the painting was bought by the gallery where I believe it still resides (if I've read the article correctly), so the most recent 129 years are known. Actually, for a GA, the information is somewhat confusing. The painting's name seems to have changed a number of times during the 1830s through around 1840, a period oddly described as in "the first few decades after its completion", so it had to have been known initially, if forgotten for much of the rest of the 19th century. I think a new hook is needed. There are also statements in the article that don't add up: "he lived in Tronikha from 1819 to 1832" and in the next sentence, "spent half of his life in Tronikha"; as he died at age 66, this latter can't be true. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:50, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- I will try to fill in that information to make up for not connecting those dots if the nominator has trouble, but I'm not sure what I can do with English sources. SL93 (talk) 18:03, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- BlueMoonset, I am pinging the GA reviewer AryKun to see if they have any ideas on moving this DYK nomination forward. SL93 (talk) 19:24, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- It appears that I made a mistake in the hook. The history of painting from 1840s to 1893 is unknown. The linked source supports this. However, I forgot to include this sentence outside of the lead. It's now fixed. Perhaps the hook could be changed to something along the lines of: "... that the history of the painting In the Ploughed Field. Spring, from 1840s to 1893 is unknown?" — Golden call me maybe? 19:35, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- I don't see a painting's whereabouts being unknown for 50 years as an interesting subject for a hook. Something else entirely would probably be better. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:26, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
- How about: "...that the mother character in the painting In the Ploughed Field. Spring is believed to personify Spring?" (2 English, 1 Russian source for this cited in the article) — Golden call me maybe? 08:30, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: Forgot to ping, sorry. — Golden call me maybe? 07:56, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- Golden, I was able to check the Figes source but not the other two that support "personifying Spring", and it didn't mention "Spring" at all; indeed, Figes calls her a "peasant goddess" and "mother of the Russian land", both a far cry from the ancient goddess Flora. I'm leery of hooks that favor one theory over another, and if the article is going to mention the one goddess, it should probably mention the other. (The "is believed" phrasing can also be a problem, because it's vague: is it art historians, art critics, and where does the belief come from?) I like the article, but it doesn't seem to have an obvious hook to it. Maybe that the mother character has been likened to those two goddesses? SL93, any thoughts? BlueMoonset (talk) 04:31, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- Spring is mentioned in both of the sources you did not check. There is no other goddess that the mother figure has been compared to—Flora is the personification of spring. So there's no favouring one theory over the other. But I'm open to any other ideas you have for the hook. — Golden call me maybe? 07:53, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- I'm willing to just go with the expert, the nominator, on the personifying part. SL93 (talk) 16:39, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
- I can't reconcile the Figes source with the other theories, particularly that while Golden says
there is no other goddess that the mother figure has been compared to
, Figes does, as I noted, call her a "peasant goddess", which is not the goddess of spring. (Flora is indeed a goddess of spring, so I have no objection to the personification part.) So citing Figes in the article for the "personifying Spring" phrase is, I believe, problematic. SL93, if you have read the Figes yourself and you're not concerned about this goddess difference and are willing to give the ALT1 hook (restated below) an AGF tick, that should finish things. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:03, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: The term "peasant goddess" here does not refer to her being a goddess of peasants, but rather to her being a goddess in a human peasant's form. The mother is still only compared to a single goddess, Flora. Regardless, I have no objections to the alternate hook. — Golden call me maybe? 06:08, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: I would be glad to approve ALT1 once the information is in the article. The article makes it seem that that it isn't just "believed". SL93 (talk) 17:34, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- Also, I don't believe it is just "believed" anyway. I also don't see how "peasant goddess" refers to a goddess of peasants. There are two other references used and not just the Figes source anyway. SL93 (talk) 17:38, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- I have removed the Figes citation directly after "personifying Spring" since there's nothing in Figes that draws this comparison even remotely—he's heading in a different direction entirely. Since I gather that the two sources I can't see do make the comparison, what remains is fine. SL93, since no one knows Venetsianov's actual intentions when painting it, I'm also fine with "believed", since these are art historians and/or critics rendering their own judgments well over a century after the painting was created. To make a blank statement in Wikipedia's voice without the "believed" would be problematic, so perhaps there needs to be some wordsmithing in the paragraph. (The article does have "as if she", which may be sufficient, though I believe there is a word missing after "she".) BlueMoonset (talk) 19:24, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- Yep, there was a missing word; Fixed now. I think the "as if" should be sufficient enough to indicate that this is not the painter's own interpretation. Let me know if there needs to be any other change. — Golden call me maybe? 19:28, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
Approving alt1. SL93 (talk) 19:33, 12 June 2022 (UTC)- Just to say the form of the title, with the full stop/period, is really unusual in English. Do any sources by mother tongue Anglophones (like Figes) use it? I would expect a colon or dash. It's also not grammatical. Once you start using full stops, you need one at the end too. Johnbod (talk) 19:58, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
I assume good faith on the references. I think that the image could be used though. I also think that the hook should say "the history". SL93 (talk) 15:50, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
