The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was Keep. No consensus exists to delete the article. Eluchil404 (talk) 02:33, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

--Loodog (talk) 21:10, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Previous non-admin close rationale below, AfD reopened per DRV request

The result was Speedy keep. Speedy as in fast. SNOW and IAR. Rationale. There is no real reason to delete. Article violates no policy, and is well sourced. Proper title so no merge. Stand alone so no redirect. Consensus has been reached thus far. No reason to prolong. Also, so this is 100% clear, and no one feels its necessary to provoke argument over this close, I will cite, albeit, and essay.

  • Snowball clause closes, where it is absolutely obvious that no other outcome other than keep is possible. Recommended criteria to use: (a) six or more participants have supported keeping the page;
Taken from Appropriate closures: bullet point three on NAC. SynergeticMaggot (talk) 08:14, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]


A More Perfect Union[edit]

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I do not believe this speech is notable enough to warrant its own page. The relevant material could be merged into Barack Obama presidential campaign, 2008, where it already receives substantial attention. Wikipedia is not a news source, and it is relatively likely the notability surrounding this speech is only temporary. The page should be deleted RWR8189 (talk) 03:48, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think it is premature to delete A More Perfect Union. Several commentators, including Keith Olbermann on MSNBC, have compared it to Martin Luther King Jr.'s I Have a Dream. Randi Rhodes on Air America thinks this speech might be one for the history books. Granted, such judgments are premature, but the deletion of the A More Perfect Union article is also more premature. Let's give it a few weeks and see if the speech makes a lasting impact. --Dr.enh (talk) 04:00, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

General comment on changes in article. Just a quick note to point out that the article has expanded considerably (including many more assertions of notability) from when this AfD was started. At that point the article looked like this, whereas as of now it looks like this (more discussion from media and pundits, response from academics and religious leaders, more than double the number of citations from reliable sources, etc.). Not trying to twist any arms here, but delete voters who commented soon after this was listed for AfD might want to take another look at the article and see if they still think it warrants deletion.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 06:38, 21 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Note to closer: If consensus is to delete, please copy the page onto a subpage of my userspace. Celarnor Talk to me 23:00, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

If someone in America and they have watched channels other than Nikelodeon and MTV, they know the speech by it's title. I've been bombarded with it almost constantly here. Celarnor Talk to me 05:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm in America and watching channels other than Nickelodeon and MTV, and I know the speech by its title only because I participated in this AfD. Note that the New York Times transcript of the speech is titled "Barack Obama's Speech on Race", not "A More Perfect Union", and the introductory sentence says: The following is the text as prepared for delivery of Senator Barack Obama’s speech on race in Philadelphia, as provided by his presidential campaign. Note that the title is not identified as such. The NYT's main article about the speech doesn't mention the title at all. Maybe this speech will turn out to be historically notable, and maybe this will be the title under which it becomes historically known. But its title is not yet as famous as implied above. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 06:22, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I know it because it was being discussed on CNN as such while I was in the dining commons here on campus, the pdf available on our school's Promethus system is "amoreperfectunion-obama.pdf" with bold text at the top, there was a debate about it in the bookstore and library when I went to go pick up this quarter's textbooks. It was in the Wall Street Journal with the name. The consensus of the name is quite clear. Celarnor Talk to me 07:26, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Obama's website calls it "A More Perfect Union". I think eventually more news outlets will pick up on that, especially after they look it up on Wikipedia and see that we've called it that. --Hemlock Martinis (talk) 07:11, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Dr.enh. Yeah, I was very hesitant to create an article for this speech, but I also feel that this a very significant speech that needs to be chronicled in WP. You say this isn't notable? Turn on the TV! Google Obama in the news category. People all over are talking about this. It's all over the news. It's all over the Internet. I went to the grocery store and saw cashiers and customers talking about it. THIS IS AN IMPORTANT SPEECH. Again, yes I know it was probably too early for me to create the article, but I believe that over time, this speech is going to be a landmark for not only Obama's presidential campaign, but also the state of America heading into the election even if Obama doesn't make it. We should give this article time, and you will all see why this article is well deserving of an article on Wikipedia. As for Metropolitan90, this is the official title of the speech. It is referred to as this title on his official website listing, as well as all of the media coverage. I mean, come on, if an article like "Mel Gibson DUI incident" or "Posh and Becks" have their own Wikipedia articles, why is this being considered to be deleted? This is a lot more interesting, historic, and relevant than Mel Gibson and a one-time drinking binge and a burned-out soccer player that is married to a Spice Girl. KEEP THIS ARTICLE I don't mean to be offensive while defensive, I'm just stating my case. Thanks. conman33 (. . .talk) 04:36, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
ON THE OTHER HAND I hear cashiers and customers at the grocery store also talk about astrology read in "respectable" newspapers. These observations do not mean that I nor any reasonable person would ever find their comments adding weight WP:UNDUE to the "importance" of astrology or its analysis by non-astrologists. --Firefly322 (talk) 17:34, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The notability guidelines clearly state that a short burst of news coverage does not automatically confer notability. In the context of a nearly two year long political campaign, it is likely that this speech will be regarded as little more than a footnote or "flavor of the day" news coverage in the long-term.--RWR8189 (talk) 05:11, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I would say it is highly unlikely that, whatever happens in this campaign, this speech will be merely a "footnote." It is far more likely that passages from it will appear in future history textbooks, even if Obama loses the nomination.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 05:45, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hillary's "tears" were temporarily notable. They get no article. So much of political news in particular is fleeting.--Loodog (talk) 15:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Clinton's tears were not notable. For one thing, "she cried after a momentous primary/caucus" IS notable; however, it doesn't deserve it's own article unless a vast amount of analysis shows up around it enough to give it substantial prose beyond what appears in her campaign page. That is the case here; the speech is notable now, will continue to be so, and as an encyclopedia, it should be kept. Celarnor Talk to me 19:32, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The absence of potential articles is no reason in itself to delete an existing article. Also, I believe the intention behind "not news" is to prevent every petty theft, rain shower, and campaign stop from getting its own article just because it was briefly mentioned in local or national media. It is not to prevent genuinely notable subjects from being written about. Joshdboz (talk) 17:03, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It's also to prevent Wikinews from being supplanted by Wikipedia. --Hemlock Martinis (talk) 18:20, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Keep. This speech is garnering much media attention, and is important to Senator Obama's campaign. (Yeah, I basically just said "me too" to the above comment; it's a valid point though.) Yonisyuumei (talk) 06:51, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Linking to a policy without comment is not much of a comment. My discussion of the future is obviously not the rationale for why I think this should be kept, it was an additional thought I added at the end which I think is worthy of consideration though not the reason this is a keeper. As I clearly stated, the reason this should be kept is because it easily passes our notability guidelines at WP:N. Could you explain to me how it does not? That is the only thing at issue here.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 18:02, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you everyone. I'm glad I'm not alone in this and that the article is "notable" to others. conman33 (. . .talk) 06:29, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Cg-realms, I agree. I hope that we can expand and focus more on the speech instead of the controversy. So far, I'm really the only one who has substantially helped to beef this article up, so it's gonna take some more effort. conman33 (. . .talk) 06:35, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You used the future tense. Wikipedia is not a crystal ball. We don't include entries on the basis of expected notability, since there's no science to that kind of prediction. It's a bunch of news commentators trying to strike up interest in their story.--Loodog (talk) 15:49, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • A short burst? Correct me if I'm wrong, but that policy is intended to address the fact that any event will be followed by at least some news posts. Front-page editorials in multiple national papers aren't quite the Podunk Gazette, nor is this a "short burst" by normal media standards. MMZach (talk) —Preceding comment was added at 19:44, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Speeches worthy of coverage range from I Have a Dream to Checkers speech. This isn't some stump speech - this is a major and prominent address on race, given in terms of rare frankness, at a major turning point in a historic presidential campaign. My only concern here is a "crystal ball" violation, wherein we attribute historical prominence to a speech before history has passed judgment - but in this case, I think we are well served by having an article right now, and will almost certainly continue to be well served in the future. Mr. IP (talk) 15:57, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This !vote is based on opinion, not policy. The speech is clearly notable given our guidelines at WP:N and no delete commenter has been able to argue otherwise. Loodog may think "it's just some politician's speech among countless others by countless other politicians," but that is not at all what dozens and dozens of news articles, politicians, religious leaders, and political commentators who are commenting on the historic nature of this speech think. Those are reliable sources (a number of which are already cited in the article) and we base our decision on whether to keep this or not on the depth of coverage in those sources (which is incredibly extensive) not on the fact that a few editors here think this was just "some speech." They are entitled to that opinion, but it has no bearing on this discussion, which should revolve solely around the question of notability as described in our notability guidelines.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 17:57, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Mr. IP's comparison to the Checkers speech is appropriate, I think. There is a precedent of including unique and notable campaign speeches. I would also draw comparisons to the Pound cake speech, since it is also regarded as a significant turning point in race relations in the United States. --Hemlock Martinis (talk) 17:47, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You seem to have been urging a greater degree of coverage of the Wright issue in the Obama article. Given the extent to which that article has already been given over to the Wright issue, it makes sense to have a separate page here in order to avoid bloat, no? Mr. IP (talk) 16:52, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think that's an anomaly. My newspaper has the entire speech printed, plus pages of commentary. The official video has already gotten over one million hits on YouTube. Frankly, Wikipedia is going to look silly for having a deletion template on the article while the speech is getting so much attention. Zagalejo^^^ 17:16, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • USA Today featured it as their cover story. My personal local newspaper covered the fifth anniversary of the Iraq War (which is today), and I suspect that story is the reason it's not on everyone's front page today. --Hemlock Martinis (talk) 17:39, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • WP:UNDUE does not apply. The article can exist without putting undue political weight on the side of Obama. WP:SOAP is a desperate grasp at finding something to delete this under. As a presidential candidate, he has far more effective ways of getting his extremely notable speech to people other than sites that try to get it deleted simply because they have it on their site and don't believe it should be there. It's being covered by pretty much anything that does news. The only thing left is WP:NOT#NEWS, and it's already become something more than just a speech. Commentators are analyzing it to death, so it's more than just the speech in and of itself. Cheers. Celarnor Talk to me 18:32, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's not news because commentators are analyzing it to death?--Loodog (talk) 18:35, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's not news because there's more significance attributed to it than it's delivery alone. That is, reports ON the speech have occurred, making it more notable than reports that just RELAY the speech. Celarnor Talk to me 22:15, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The question here is notability. Could you please explain how this speech does not meet our guidelines for notability? Because it seems obvious that it does, and the only real argument for deletion is that it does not. Could you please elaborate?--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 18:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure if the user is aware of it, but WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS WP:ATA#CRYSTAL, WP:IDONTLIKEIT obviously come into play here. Wisdom89 (T / C) 18:26, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Apart from this being just a vote, Speedy merge isn't an option unless it's a bad faith nomination (which it could be; see others above me) and it is abundantly obvious that it belongs within another article and no one disagrees with you. In this case, most everyone disagrees with you. Celarnor Talk to me 19:15, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Please see WP:IDONTKNOWIT. Wisdom89 (T / C) 19:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It is notable because it has garnered wide media attention, not because of a given person's political leanings. I'm not even a member of a political party; heck, I didn't vote in our primaries because my party didn't front a candidate. WP:SOAP seems suspiciously like a desperate grab at trying to come up with something to delete this under. The candidate has much better ways to advertise himself politically. Also, apart from that, AfDs are not for deletions because of the content of an article unless it is unsourced negative information about a living person. For things with content that needs to be fixed, there are numerous tags that can be applied to the article. Or you can be bold and fix percieved errors yourself. Celarnor Talk to me 19:19, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe it'd be better to organize arguments along main points:

  1. Continued Notability after this election
  2. WP:CRYSTAL being violated in assumption of relevance on the future (e.g. "historic")
  3. WP:NOT#NEWS being violated
  4. Possible US-centrism and assumption of relevance in the rest of the world

If people would reply along these points, we can get each to consensus maybe faster.--Loodog (talk) 19:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

We've already done that, but for the sake of consensus, I'll coalesce everything here.
  1. Wikipedia isn't a crystal ball. You can't say it will be less notable later, since you don't know that. It is, however, notable now, judging by the massive amount of media coverage and analysis.
  2. See above point.
  3. WP:NOT#NEWS is to prevent fleeting things like the news story about the woman with 12 cats who got evicted and is suing the landlord from becoming notable. It isn't intended for large-scale events like this.
  4. WP does not know borders. If it is notable and relevant somewhere, then it deserves placement.

Cheers. Celarnor Talk to me 19:51, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, the title is official. It is so listed on his own web site. Celarnor Talk to me 20:42, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
If speeches by McCain and Clinton get this level of coverage and discussion then we should by all means have articles on them, but so far this has not happened. And this is not about MLK so I don't know why people keep bringing that up. Who here has said this is the "second coming" of MLK or Lincoln? That has nothing to do with the issue at hand. No one is saying this speech is as important as "I Have A Dream." I did not compare this speech to MLK's and thus cheapen MLK's legacy (what a strange thing to say). Those arguing for keep are simply saying it is a notable speech by our notability guidelines. References to Lincoln and Dr. King have no real bearing on this discussion so let's please stay focused on the issue of notability for this speech.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 14:32, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I see that there is a related link on Google News. It is Obama pastor's words ring familiar in Chicago. It's seems that it is the pastor's words which are memorable, not Obama's apologia for them. Colonel Warden (talk) 08:07, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Please keep WP:OTHERSTUFF in mind. Celarnor Talk to me 16:27, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed. Other stuff "may form part of a cogent argument...". We get bombarded with lots of coverage of the primaries and campaigns every day but it is just a routine media circus. It would be a good policy to confine coverage of such campaigns to WikiNews and only create articles here when they are over and decided. Colonel Warden (talk) 16:36, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Why should we have to wait to give clearly notable material coverage? I can't link to it at the moment because it hasn't shown up on Google Scholar yet, but my school's journal search subscription already lists TWO scholarly articles regarding the speech by political science professors. Why throw out so much material just because it's current? Celarnor Talk to me 16:59, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, because all the arguments on the talk page say "No, Obama's too black for his speeches to be notable."--Loodog (talk) 16:38, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Added note: If there is an urgent need to delete this, to elevate the notability bar for this particular politician's article, any thoughts on these?  : President Forgets to Chew His Food ; US President Who Won't Speak English  ; President Tumbles Over Girl Friend's Dirty Laundry  ; Presidential Hopeful Commits Identity Fraud ; Presidential Hopeful's College Homework Censored. Professor marginalia (talk) 17:57, 20 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment on article traffic. Not exactly a keep rationale per say, but according to this handy little tool this article was viewed over 4,000 times on March 19th. Just as a point of comparison, the Hillary Clinton article was viewed a little over 9,000 times that same day. Most articles are viewed far, far less than that - anything over a thousand in a day is pretty significant I would say. Though I'm not going on any policy here (those arguments have already been amply provided), the fact that this article got 4,000 views the day it was created suggests to me that it might be worth keeping.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 06:53, 21 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yes, as Celarnor says, there are only two days of traffic data and the second shows nearly 3,000 views. I'm not really trying to convince the "flash in the pan" argument editors of anything, I'm just trying to point out that there has clearly been significant interest in the article. It's not a rationale for keeping, I just thought it was worth pointing out. I'm sure in a few weeks there will only be a few hundred hits a day at best as is the case with the majority of our articles (which have that or far, far fewer hits).--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 20:23, 21 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Good analogy, but I must (well, not really must, but I will!) point out in the interests of historical accuracy that Nixon was not running for president in 1952, the year of the "Checkers speech." The objective of the speech was to address accusations about financial impropriety and thus prevent Ike Eisenhower from removing him from the GOP ticket. In that regard Nixon was successful, and of course he served two terms as VP before losing to JFK in 1960.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 02:41, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

-I will say that it needs to undergo a serious overhaul in terms of the organization and presentation of its contents, though.

keep - possibly revisit in 6 months, but this speech has received much attention nationally and internationally. Deletion would be premature. c'mon Tay Zonoday rates to get a page on his song (not released, but only a youtube phenom, mind you) Chocolate rain http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chocolate_Rain, which I would submit, is of much less historic significance and notability. --Boscobiscotti (talk) 06:38, 22 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
By what notability standards in our policies is a speech, or anything else, required to have received "sufficient independent analysis of any social impact?" And how is the fact that this speech is not as notable as "I Have A Dream" relevant to whether or not we keep it? We do not have special notability standards for speeches, and you don't seem to disagree that the speech has received significant coverage in reliable secondary sources independent of the subject, which is our general standard for notability.--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 22:49, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Again, this would be true if and only if the speech's notability was not independent of the campaign; if it was just received and analyzed as a campaign speech, it's place would be on that page. However, it has notability independent of the campaign, as it has analysis and coverage beyond the campaign itself, analyzing the speech as a speech and not as a campaign item. Celarnor Talk to me 22:55, 23 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
To me, the majority of the sources, and indeed an entire section of the article, deal with the impact of the speech on voters and in the context of the election that is being fought, meaning it only adds notability to the campaign at the moment. As such, it is notable on in connection with the presidential campaign itself, and until it has received more in depth coverage of a wider impact, I can't see how it warrants an article on its own. That should not preclude its creation at a later date if it influences policy or becomes the subject of academic discussion at some later date. Fritzpoll (talk) 11:49, 24 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The majority of the sources? What does that have to do with anything? Just because the majority of sources deal with one aspect of something doesn't mean we should ignore other aspects of it. That is simply inane. Sources such as the NYT have shown that it is becoming the subject of academic discussion. Celarnor Talk to me 15:32, 24 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Well, not so much inane, as a figure of speech. All the ones I saw indicated it was all in the context of the election, though I'll happily concede I may have missed one. I'll have a look at the linked source and comment again. Fritzpoll (talk) 16:45, 24 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I also want to address another issue which has been raised by a few people: the notion that this is "merely" a US-centric subject, and thus not worthy of an article in Wikipedia. What rubbish. Apparently, the fact that Mr. Obama's campaign is of tremendous (I dare say, unprecented) interest to people in all parts of the planet has escaped the attention of these editors. So for their benefit, I would like to offer a selection of newspaper headlines (from Google news) from countries other than the US or Canada:

  • Obama names our pain

Jamaica Observer, Jamaica - 15 hours ago

  • LETTER OF THE DAY - Obama race speech greatest since MLK

Jamaica Gleaner, Jamaica - Mar 21, 2008

  • Obama speech was a Lincoln moment

Business Daily Africa, Kenya

  • Obama's speech on race rings true for Britain, too

The Guardian, UK

  • Barack Obama Disowning racism

Economist, UK

  • Barack Obama: "A More Perfect Union", part 2

Wiener Zeitung, Österreich

  • Obama tackles America's race issue head on

Irish Times, Ireland

  • Senator Barack Obama’s Race Speech: Reactions from the Community

Asian Week, CA - Mar 20, 2008

  • The Liberal Side of Color Blind: Obama’s Post-Affirmative Action ...

Asian Week, CA - Mar 21, 2008

  • Obama battles back in reverend's race

Sydney Morning Herald, Australia

  • Together we can move beyond racial wounds

Sydney Morning Herald, Australia Mar 19, 2008

Obviously there have been many more articles besides these. In short, the entire world took note of this speech. Cgingold (talk) 02:00, 25 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Actually a G-news search for "Obama" and "speech" reveals several hundred hits just for today. It seems about half of the stories on the first page of hits are substantively about the speech in some way. But at this point I don't know what to say to someone who reads the article in its current form and still thinks this speech was not notable (reaction from everyone in the country including politicians, academics, and religious leaders, millions of YouTube hits, "clinches" the critical Richardson nomination, discussed in university classes, talked about in Easter sermons in black churches, and all this covered by literally hundreds of secondary sources - we're well past the notability bar here.)--Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 21:01, 25 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
They also stopped putting things about Ich bin ein berliner in the headlines after 1963. That means absolutely nothing. Celarnor Talk to me 22:57, 25 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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