The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was delete. As an exercise in self-promotion for a non-notable film.  Sandstein  08:31, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Gimme Head: the Tale of the Cuyahoga Valley Bigfoot

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A C movie with references that are nearly as bad as the film purportedly is. Nothing of any substance - all very local or very, very niche or blogs. Fails WP:GNG  Velella  Velella Talk   10:12, 16 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This debate has been included in the list of Film-related deletion discussions. Cabayi (talk) 10:24, 16 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Note: This debate has been included in the list of Ohio-related deletion discussions. Cabayi (talk) 10:24, 16 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry User:Salander44... while you may certainly make what arguments you wish, only one "keep" per editor. Schmidt, Michael Q. 20:25, 16 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • If this were to be deleted without a "userfy" or "draftify" suggestion, you could create a new draft using the article wizard, or you could ask at Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion for it to be restored and moved to user or draft space. Restore and move preserves the text and history. In either case it would be well, after having found enough additional sources to clearly establish notability, to ask at Deletion Review for authorization to move back to mainspace. Or an AFC reviewer could authorize that, if clearly informed of this discussion. DES (talk)DESiegel Contribs 01:10, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove superfluous comments. Thank you for your advice and help, User:MichaelQSchmidt. Would it be possible to remove the paragraphs which have the "strikethrough"? I was not aware of the single "Keep" post policy, and moved the content to my main comment. The strikethrough comments are now superfluous. I would remove them myself, but want to avoid compounding my errors. If you or another user would not be comfortable making that deletion (of the "strikethrough" comments), could you authorize me to do so? This comment could be removed in the process, since it too, would be superfluous. Removing the comments would result in a much cleaner Deletion page. Salander44 (talk) 23:40, 16 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • No, Salander44 Comments once made should not be removed, and once replied to or a later comment has been made should not be edited except to corect typos and invalid markup and the like, or to strike through content. The original strike through could have been done on just the 'keep" not the rest, but it has been done now and further editing would not be helpful. There is no need for "a clean page" as long as people's commetns are clear. DES (talk)DESiegel Contribs 00:54, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • comment if the decision here is to userfy then the closer could and should simply move the article to user space, and place ((userspace draft)) on it to mark it as a draft. Another option is to "draftify", that is move it to draftspace instead. In that case ((subst:AFC draft| <username>)) should be used. I'll want to check the sources myself before giving my own view. Note that more sources, if available, can be added while this discussion is in progress. DES (talk)DESiegel Contribs 01:00, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yup, and if deleted, I can move the content to a work-space for you at User:Salander44/Gimme Head: the Tale of the Cuyahoga Valley Bigfoot so you can continue work and seek input before seeking its return. Schmidt, Michael Q. 01:08, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References


Examples of writing in the article that are promotional in tone and unreferenced include:
"It has developed a cult following in Akron and Cleveland, Ohio." [says who? unreferenced]
"...mocumentary [sic] from first-time Director Logan Fry. [2nd mention of his name in consecutive sections] This Triple-B movie (Blood, Boobs and Beast) is definitely not for the kids; but it is seen as becoming a cult classic dues [sic] to its humor and production values." [purely promotional unreferenced verbiage].
"The producers refer to it as 'a movie made for the not-so-sane, and the unabashedly adolescent. And definitely for those who love boobs.'" [Lacking substantive reviews as explained in the Guideline WP:NFO#Other_evidence_of_notability: "1.The film is widely distributed and has received full-length reviews by two or more nationally known critics," the article is padded with the flack-style text quoted here.
"But is the shaggy monster really Bigfoot, or just some devious psychopath in a gorilla suit?" [More press kit writing by the screenwriter-producer-director-Wikipedia author]
DonFB (talk) 11:27, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
From start to finish, the whole effort (the movie and the Wikipedia article) is a pure vanity project. That's ok for a movie, but not an article in this online encyclopedia. The article does not meet the General Notability or Film Notability guidelines.
Notability is the real issue here, but to suggest that a vast body of films are not, at least in part, “vanity projects” is to live a life in blinders. We all know that filmmakers are a modest and self-effacing lot.
"It has developed a cult following in Akron and Cleveland, Ohio." [says who? unreferenced]
References to “cult classic” can be removed until substantiated in print or online.
"...mocumentary [sic] from first-time Director Logan Fry. [2nd mention of his name in consecutive sections] This Triple-B movie (Blood, Boobs and Beast) is definitely not for the kids; but it is seen as becoming a cult classic dues [sic] to its humor and production values." [purely promotional unreferenced verbiage].
“[M]ocumentary” is a recognized alternate spelling (see Wiktionary) [1] but can be easily changed to meet individual editorial preferences. The “dues” misspelling was an auto-spellcheck error and easily fixed. I believe that the second mention “of Director Logan Fry” was the result of a wikipedia editor change, since it was not in the original article in that form. Because of early issues relating to promotion, I had already removed other references which might be deemed promotional. To my credit, I did not seek to add a profile portrait. See, for example: The Sound of Music (film) and Titanic (1997 film). The phrase “This Triple-B movie (Blood, Boobs and Beast) is definitely not for the kids” can be changed in favor of language that appears in the film itself: “Trigger Warning! Grizzlehead is a Triple-B Film ‘Blood, Boobs and Beast’ - Not Intended for any Audience Easily Offended by Blood, Boobs and Girls Without Heads.” See trailer for alternate title of the film. [2]
"The producers refer to it as 'a movie made for the not-so-sane, and the unabashedly adolescent. And definitely for those who love boobs.'" [Lacking substantive reviews as explained in the Guideline WP:NFO#Other_evidence_of_notability: "1.The film is widely distributed and has received full-length reviews by two or more nationally known critics," the article is padded with the flack-style text quoted here.
Wikipedia has articles for Mondo Trasho and Nightbeast, and a cursory review of the films referenced in List of cult films would yield many better examples of bad films, and probably more than a few questionable articles. Wikipedia also continues to maintain an incomplete article for Schlock (film) whose only references that I can see is IMDb, Rotten Tomatoes and Youtube, and doesn't even rise to the level of referencing a single blogger. Wikipedia also continues to maintain articles for films that have received solely local reviews, many now leading to dead links, and nothing more recent that 2102-13 Made in Cleveland. Poorly-made, tasteless movies, and articles nearly as flaky as the movies they document, are not outside the pale of wikipedia, nor are films that have received only fleeting local attention four and five years ago.
"But is the shaggy monster really Bigfoot, or just some devious psychopath in a gorilla suit?" [More press kit writing by the screenwriter-producer-director-Wikipedia author]
Positive suggestions for improvement would go much further than flame wars which are a waste of time for everyone. I do take the the film seriously, but in case anyone misses the point, the article is about a film that is gross, tasteless, sophomoric, adolescent and yes, even flaky. It does have an audience, but it is definitely not a film in the same league as Sound of Music or Titanic (1997 film). That doesn’t preclude notability. Salander44 (talk) 19:06, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Salander44 (talk) 20:58, 17 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thank you, User:NZ Footballs Conscience. When I first published the article, I became aware of the COI issues, and did see that "COI editing is strongly discouraged on Wikipedia" WP:CONFLICT. Clearly it's not prohibited, but there were other measures that I could have followed more carefully. I did try to declare my COI by adding that I was the author of the article, but that wasn't correct, either. I had thought that "Wikipedia is a free online encyclopedia with the aim to allow anyone to edit articles." Wikipedia. I misunderstood. Salander44 (talk) 01:47, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • You are welcome. Wikipedia is for anyone to edit articles, it is just careful about COI because most of the time when people try write articles they have a vested interest in, it is hard to do so without getting caught up in Wikipedia Policies. Someone with your knowledge and background is welcome here and I would encourage you to edit other articles like the ones you have pointed out to try bring them up to requirement. NZ Footballs Conscience(talk) 01:58, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Whoa, User:NZ Footballs Conscience. Re: "I would encourage you to edit other articles like the ones you have pointed out to try bring them up to requirement," I'd love to give it a try, but I'm running on fumes now, and I'm not sure I can do it within all of the Wikipedia rules. I know for sure I could add additional references for at least two of the articles without breaking a sweat, and Schlock (film), in particular, is a favorite (I was directed to it by one of the subject film's reviewers). I'm just afraid I wouldn't do it right. Salander44 (talk) 03:33, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Never one to avoid a challenge, I made my first revision to Schlock (film), User:NZ Footballs Conscience. Nothing too dramatic, just five references to Production. I didn't remove the "Citations Needed" tag. Not my job, but hope a master editor will. All quality refs. I'll watch the film again (it's in my little film library), and add more to Plot. Give me a bit of time for that. (Question: Does that need references, too? If I write the Plot section). More changes to come if I'm doing it right. And, hey, don't tell me all I need for my own film is a few quality references, like I added for Schlock (film) (TV Guide and The Washington Post). Not gonna happen overnight. Salander44 (talk) 05:29, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks. At least one other Wikipedian made major edits to the subject article, for which I am grateful, and I'm grateful for yours as well. Just as many have helped me here, I will do my best to edit at least a few articles in the outré sci-fi, comedy-horror and schlock film categories, Schlock (film) being the first (thanks to Cordless Larry (talk) for his guidance and supervision). While John Waters, Ed Wood, Jr., Don Dohler and their ilk may be anathema to some, they bring inexplicable enjoyment to others. And it's the people who attempt to do what they have no training to do, have no right to do, and face failure more often than success, that we owe the advancement of culture. Salander44 (talk) 18:02, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.
  1. ^ https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/mocumentary
  2. ^ https://vimeo.com/195570722
  3. ^ https://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/gimme_head_the_tale_of_the_cuyahoga_valley_bigfoot
  4. ^ http://www.imdb.com/title/tt6022940/fullcredits?ref_=tt_cl_sm#cast