The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was no consensus. This discussion will not reach consensus no matter how much longer it is left to run. There is evidence of canvassing, but even if I ignored that, the discussion below gives no clear result for deletion or retention. I suggest that the article appears (from the discussion) to require a bit of cleaning up - try this ovr the next few months, and if there are still issues worthy of a deletion discussion, open a new one at that time. Fritzpoll (talk) 12:00, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Mongolia during Tang rule[edit]

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No real sources unless you count primary ones, or "Smith, p. 4711" or "Cambridge History of China, vol. 11" without page number. Some rather strange claims (like Chinese conquered the Russian steppe), a somewhat unclear reference to the Khitan people who were far from dominating in the area at the time - and whose exact ethnic affiliations are not really as clear as that strange reference seems to imply - and a lot of stuff that has no obvious relation to Mongolia at all. Most of the content for this article has been removed from Han Chinese a while ago (like here by myself or here by someone else). Valid content - for several decades in the 7th century, the Göktürks were subjects of the Tang dynasty - is treated much better in Tang Dynasty#Turkish and Western regions, Protectorate General to Pacify the North, History of Mongolia#Turkic_Period and Göktürks. Yaan (talk) 17:57, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • Turn into redirect to History of Mongolia#Turkic_Period. This seems more appropriate than the others, even if just because of the word "Mongolia" being contained in the article title. Yaan (talk) 17:57, 19 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Relisted to generate a more thorough discussion so consensus may be reached.
Please add new comments below this notice. Thanks, Ron Ritzman (talk) 00:00, 24 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

please note that all "delete" votes on this page are the result of canvssing by User:G Purevdorj, evidence is at the bottom of the page —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.164.128 (talk) 23:40, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This non-signed user vandalized my talk page with the non-sense content with the offensive remarks, i.e. "GenuineMongol, you got owned", before G.Purevdorj notified me of the existence of such article. Are there any alive administrators out there to stop this vandal spitting all over the Mongolian related pages? See Talk:Mongolia. I removed the same remark from my talk page. See the history of my talk page. I am all for the deletion of the article. --GenuineMongol (talk) 04:16, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Delete Gantuya eng had earlier (while the text is now below) already given the same vote, so this one isn't valid. G Purevdorj (talk) 09:14, 26 February 2009 (UTC): That non-signed user has been vandalising Wikipedia since mid-December. Some editors call his behaviour "Chinese Chauvinism", but to me his behaviour seems to be even worse and very unhealthy. Sorry if it sounds like personal attack, but his behaviour reminds me a pathological condition rather than any form of an extreme political stream. Gantuya eng (talk) 08:47, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep This is an important subject, and the article should be improved apon. -download | sign! 00:01, 24 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
WRONG-accordinig to WHITE MAN Kenneth Scott Latouretter Han chinese emperor Tang taizong owned the gokturks and khitans, and was crowned khagan of the gokturks and since gokturk territory controlled mongolia, he owned mongolia. last time i checked, he wasnt chinese. Kenneth Scott Latourette has a PHD in oriental studies at yale university, unlike you.
The Chinese and their History and Culture" by Kenneth Scott Latouretter FOURTH REVISED EDITION 56892 Library of Congress card number- 64-17372 Printed by Macmillan ISBN 0-8160-2693-9 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.155.153.147 (talk) 20:48, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
note that G Purevdorj has canvassed at least six pro mongolian editors starting from this edit. taking a look at all his next edits, he is trying to hide the blatant POV canvassing by switching into mongol language. all the other people who voted "delete" have a message left by him on their talk pages to hurry here and vote delete. as they all work primarily on mongol related topics and have pro mongol POV, these votes have to be struck out.
You don't make sense on this point. Users working primary on Mongolian-related topics can also considererd to be more knowledgable than editors that don't know what the article is about. And while you point out that Gantuya eng clearly opposed this article from the start and so notifying her (albeit not in this fashion) was very obviously justified, you ALSO argue that her argument should be stuck out because she was rallied! You may notice that it is the Mongolia-related editors that actually address content, while the other editors are just impressed by some references that they cannot assess. G Purevdorj (talk) 09:07, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
G purevdorj, read wP:CANVASS on yo ur actions —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.160.245.73 (talk) 04:09, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
WRONG-accordinig to WHITE MAN Kenneth Scott Latouretter Han chinese emperor Tang taizong owned the gokturks and khitans, and was crowned khagan of the gokturks and since gokturk territory controlled mongolia, he owned mongolia. last time i checked, he wasnt chinese. Kenneth Scott Latourette has a PHD in oriental studies at yale university, unlike you.
The Chinese and their History and Culture" by Kenneth Scott Latouretter FOURTH REVISED EDITION 56892 Library of Congress card number- 64-17372 Printed by Macmillan ISBN 0-8160-2693-9
Gantuya eng correctly pointed out below that this article is trying to ignite hatred between Chinese and Mongolians, and you're obviously quite aware that you're continuing in this vein. You don't need to be Chinese to do so. Eg it would be possible to detail the systematic bias persisting in a sinology originally devoid of ancillary sciences. G Purevdorj (talk) 08:27, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Lautorette had a PHD inj oriental studies and is not sinocentrist. otherwise he wouldnt have tried to convert them to christianity. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.138.30 (talk) 21:06, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
physical area of mongolia was ruled by tang dynasty. and latouretter said the khitans were mongols, and he had a PHD in oriental studies at yale university, unlike you —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.155.157.126 (talk) 04:10, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Canvassing Please note that this editor was contacted here Ikip (talk) 07:38, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Please note message on article talk page:
Unhealthy behaviour of the "author" of this "article" in the talk page of User:GenuineMongol and other factors justify the AfD nomination of this and as well "article" "Tibet during the Tang Dynasty". These are actually a well-veiled form of vandalism. Gantuya eng (talk) 04:11, 20 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
You can't justify an article being deleted, because you don't like the editor. Dream Focus 07:58, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
At least for User:Gantuya eng, this AfD appears to be a personal vendetta against another user for "unhealthy behavior". Ikip (talk) 08:04, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Canvassing Please note that this editor was contacted here Ikip (talk) 07:38, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
which incidently has a single source written by a MONGOL? obvious unreliable source exposed right away —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.164.128 (talk) 23:42, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Latouretter has PHD in oriental studies at yale univesity, and he says the Khitans are mongol. It is also said by liguists that khitan language is a proto mongolic language. Linguist list groups khitan language subgroup as mongolian OWNED
Khitan language and Mongolian language are equal siblings of the same language family and none of them is ancestral to the other. The modern ethnic group of the Daurians are thought to be the genetic descendants of the Khitans. In one of the articles related to the Chinese history I was disappointed to read that the Khitan state is described as one of the Chinese dynasties rather than one of the nomadic empires. Even I expressed my opinion in the talk page of that article. Gantuya eng (talk) 03:03, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
i provided a source, yet Gantuya eng fails to show one. this means everything she just said was original research.
G_Purevdorj isn't the first initiator of the deletion of this article. I had already expressed my deletion suggestion in the talk page of the article before he wrote me in my personal talk page. He has the right to exchange opinions with other editors and he is always welcome to write in my personal talk page. Gantuya eng (talk) 03:08, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
NOTE- wikipedia policy forbids the kind of activity USer:Gantuya eng said was okay for USer:G Purevdorj to do
Actually a mongolian people, the khitan, did live in mongolia at the time, along with the gokturks, tang taizong brought them under tang rule, see the source i put in my other comment —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.138.103 (talk) 06:01, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Please let us know what are the research findings of the article. Mongolia can't be ruled by Tang, when they did NOT exist AT ALL! Mongolia was founded by Genghis Khan only in 1206. Khitans are not ancestors of Mongolians, but relatives of Mongolians. Please don't let your emotion take over your decision. Please be reasonable and consider the acts of the vandal on my talk page and other Mongolia related articles. --GenuineMongol (talk) 13:15, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
khitan is a mongolian language keneth scott latourette, PHD in oriental studies at yalu univeerstiy, says khitans were mongolians. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.160.245.73 (talk) 04:07, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

*Strong delete: Have you checked those "plenty of references"? Gantuya eng (talk) 08:56, 26 February 2009 (UTC) Why not 3, while you're at it? yandman 09:07, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Classifying editors of Wikipedia as "pro mongolian" again indicates the vandalic attempt to ignite hatred between the Mongolian and Chinese people. Then, do you mean that those who are to keep the article are "pro chinese" or "anti mongolian"? Gantuya eng (talk) 09:01, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

1. Talk:Mongolia during Tang rule#Non-standard citation format
2. Talk:Mongolia during Tang rule#Difficult-to-parse text
3. Talk:Mongolia during Tang rule#References
While I can appreciate the plausible worth of an article about this subject, the blunt fact remains that the draft proposed for deletion is quite unworkable. I attempted to improve it by removing the weak parts -- and in the end, there was no substance remaining. I also attempted to enhance it's coverage by importing verifiable material from Horses in East Asian warfare ... but I don't quite see how that gesture can be construed as a sufficient reason for keeping this article without the investment of more work. --Tenmei (talk) 19:45, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The issues with citation format, test, and references are matters to be addressed by WP:Cleanup, not deletion. With respects to User:Tenmei, that he failed does not presume others will not succeed. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 23:01, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The AfD was initially based on this version of the article -- here. No substance, no citations, useless references. The only thing this article had going for it was the subject and title. Was I wrong to try to figure out how to improve it? --Tenmei (talk) 00:59, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I fully apprecite your good faith attempts ro bring it into line with standards. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 04:20, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
response to non standard citation format: i actually dont need those sources, because they say the same as the Book written by the yale guy with the PHD. in english, of course —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:43, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
response to diffucent to parse text: i forgot to put the book reference" the chinese and their history and culture" in the right place. it clearly states that the Han chinese emperor Tang taizong of the tang dynasty defeated the gokturks, and khitans, incorporated their territory (including mongolia) into tang dynasty, and was given the title by the gokturks them selves after he defeated them. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:38, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
i actually DO NOT NEED the chinese references, because the book "the chinese and their history and cultre" already says what the chinese references say already, they are extra. there is not issue with the references —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:35, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
geographical area of mongolia existed at that time, and so did mongol khitan people, they lived in mongolia, see the source i posted. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.160.245.73 (talk) 04:05, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Stop and regroup[edit]

This AfD-thread seems a little bit like a car collision in an uncrowded intersection -- a crash involving two vehicles traveling at low speeds.

Stop and regroup If I may summarise, it looks like:

I don't see any bias in the AfD itself; I do think that the bias in the original article was problematic in a way that was obvious to Mongolians but not so obvious to non-Mongolians. But given that the article is now very different, I'd like to ask the Mongolians who've !voted if they can answer:

--Zeborah (talk) 06:43, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Due to Tenmei's efforts, the bias has lessoned somewhat. While the first version was just chauvinism, the contemporary content of the article might be subject to critique. I've just given some points on the talk page, but without looking up some literature (which I cannot do before the 6th of March), I won't be able to properly assess some parts of the article. But probably some other people of the Mongolia work group will know more about this than I do. Anyway, any title of this article that contains "Mongolia" (maybe besides "... in the area of modern-day Eastern and Central Mongolia") will be unacceptable. You would have to name political or ethnic entities that existed then. G Purevdorj (talk) 09:19, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Response to purevdorj-- The khitans did inhabit mongolia, as noted in latourette's book, and he calls them "khitan mongols" Khitan is also classified as mongolian by linguists, there for, during the tang dynasty, mongolia was then a territory primarily inhabited by Mongols as a linguistic, historical and cultural group, and also under tang control, as even the LOTC source points out, parts of CENTRAL mongolia, which even by greater mongolia terms, would be in modern day outer mongolia. meanwhile, purevdorj has provided zero sources countering these sources. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.155.153.147 (talk) 20:22, 27 February 2009 (UTC)
These Wiktionary definitions may help us clarify responses to Zeborah's timely and reasonable questions:
* [ during]
*Tang Dynasty
  • [ rule]
In this context, I notice that there is a corollary article -- Mongolia during Qing rule ...?
What needs to be done next? --Tenmei (talk) 16:45, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Wiktionary is NOT a WP:RS
your "wiktionary" definitions are not sourced, AND other wiki projects are not WP:RS's —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.155.153.147 (talk) 20:22, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
This sort of "gaming the system" complaint is unhelpful, counter-productive. Any benefit-of-doubt is devalued by the fact that an anonymous participant's objection is unsigned. Anyone who is well enough acquainted with Wikipedia's policies to hazard using WP:RS to discredit the use of Wiktionary in this thread seems demonstrably sloppy at best in "forgetting" to sign his/her contribution. --Tenmei (talk) 21:16, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
i really dont want to waste my time with the four extra tildes because sinebot does it anyway, and i dont need to think about it. and about gaming the system, its not my fault my ip isnt static. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.160.246.158 (talk) 03:20, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
G Purevdorj and Tenmei, thanks for your answers. It looks to me like a bit of a culture clash: to me I see a country's name as referring primarily to the landmass, so it makes sense for me to talk about New Zealand in the tenth century even though there weren't any New Zealanders. Whereas it sounds like G Purevdorj sees "Mongolia" as referring primarily to the people, so it doesn't make sense to talk about Mongolia before the Mongol nation actually formed.
The Mongolia during Qing rule article is different because there really was a Mongolia by that time no matter how one looks at it.
"Central Asia", as suggested on the talkpage, sounds like a reasonable compromise for the Tang article to me. (With appropriate clarification within the article.)
And, anonymous-person, Sinebot is for people who forget to sign or don't know better, not for people who are too lazy to type four characters. It may look like it happens by magic but it still takes resources to do it, and it's just rude to take that for granted. It's also a bit rude to take part without bothering to create a log-in, but that's not what "gaming the system" is about: "gaming the system" means using the letter of policy to advance your argument in a way that detracts from the spirit of policy, which is to work together in good faith to achieve something we can all agree on. So, your defense of Latourette and the term "Mongolia" notwithstanding, do you have any objection to the term "Central Asia"? --Zeborah (talk) 04:20, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I also think that Central Asia would make more sense. The current article topic is a bit like "Luxembourg in the Roman Empire". Of course it can make sense in some way, for example if you are writing from a local Luxembourgish perspective, but it is nonetheless a somewhat strange way to look at things in a general encyclopedia. And it would even be ambigous - does it only deal with the country Luxembourg, or also with the Belgish province?
I guess Central Asia would widen the scope of the article. The current article seems to deal primarily with relations between the Tang and the Eastern Turks, maybe the renaming (if there is a renaming) could rather go into that direction. Yaan (talk) 11:23, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I second the proposal to use Central Asia instead of Mongolia. --GenuineMongol (talk) 12:03, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Just a note that at this point User:Enerelt has renamed the article as Inner Asia during the Tang Dynasty (a redirect is still in place from the old name). --Zeborah (talk) 08:27, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Canvassing[edit]

Nothing in this "canvassing"-thread is altered. It is temporarily "collapsed," which arguably minimizes it as a distraction.

This collapsed format serves a constructive purpose by focusing attention on Zeborah's comments and questions.

Extended content
You're a nuisance. As you rightly say, I didn't rally any disinterested editor, and therefore my behaviour is accurate. In the cases where I wasn't sure about the actual opinion of the editor (eg Angarag), I put it completely neutral and didn't make any suggestions. G Purevdorj (talk) 01:41, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
apparently your not reading policy. [1] — Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.164.128 (talkcontribs)
Here is the message, copied 6 times, can someone translate what it means?:
Message:
Hurry to Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Mongolia_during_Tang_rule#Mongolia_during_Tang_rule and write down your opinion. Iim muuhai novshiin oguuleliig ali hurdanaar ustgah heregtei shuu. Eniig uldeemeer hun hojij bolohgui!!!
Ikip (talk) 07:43, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Your statement is not correct. I did use this post to address the Mongolian editors whom I knew to share my position, that is, three times. As I didn't use Mongolian for secrecy, but did address every editor in his native language, I shall translate it myself:

  • "It's certainly necessary to erase such a worthless article as fast as possible. Those who want to keep it may not succeed!"

This contrasts to the text I posted to those two editors whom I didn't know to be partisan:

User:G Purevdorj, you seem to be fairly new at editing wikipedia, but you can't do what you did. You can post a "neutral" message on the talk pages of articles, and on wikiprojects (which are groups of like minded editors), but you can't post such slanted messages on users talk pages. Yes, the rule doesn't make complete sense, in that you can post on one type of page the same message as you cannot on another page, and it tends to favor veteran editors who are well organized and have taken over a wikiproject, but such illogical, though necessary, rules, which are:
  1. selectively applied and enforced
  2. condone one type of behavior while condemning another, and
  3. which favor veteran editors over new editors
...are the norm on wikipedia.
Note, there are penalties to post a message like this:
"It's certainly necessary to erase such a worthless article as fast as possible. Those who want to keep it may not succeed!"
...anywhere on wiki. Ikip (talk) 08:19, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've been editing wikipedia for some time, but I usually kept away from arguments based on ideology and never before had to address an article whose mere existence constitutes what should be considered vandalism. I agree that the choice of language wasn't ideal, and I shall try to choose something more politically correct next time. Eg "As this article might indeed merit deletion and I consider this question of high importance, I would greatly value if you could contribute your opinion in order to clarify this issue". But as far as I understand the policy linked above, I am well entitled to address individual editors (even a number of individual editors) whom I know to be knowlegdable on a topic. You may notice that I didn't rally anyone not affiliated to some degree with Mongolian HISTORY (eg I didn't rally anyone whom I just knew to be Mongolian), and as I contacted 4 editors whom I considered partisan and 3 editors whose opinion I did not know (you can clearly see that from my post to InMongolia), my intent not only to influence but also to improve the discussion should be discernable. G Purevdorj (talk) 08:37, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

its sort of obvious that a user called "inmongolia" would vote delete for this article no matter what you tell him and you know this —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:32, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Collecting people sharing his opinion is the right of G_Purevdorj. Go and tell a parliamentarian "Stop building a faction on a certain bill". His approach is fully valid and democratic. He didn't force anyone. If some of those who received a message from G_Purevdorj don't agree with him or lazy to participate in this discussion, they a free not to participate or even to vote to "keep" (because they get aware of the discussion). Gantuya eng (talk) 09:29, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Hardly. Wikipedia isn't a democracy, and we try to avoid politics here. We don't tolerate overt faction building either. Moreover, there are no votes on an AfD: participants give arguments, debate them etc.. and the closing editor judges which arguments are better. yandman 10:38, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
1) So you "try to avoid politics here". What the author of this article has been doing in Wikipedia since mid-December is clearly politics. Classifying editors into "pro mongolian" is also politics. Forbidding anyone to be "pro mongolian" is what?
2) Anyone has the right to invite potentially interested editors to participate in a discussion. Gantuya eng (talk) 11:13, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
NOTE- wikipedia policy forbids the kind of activity USer:Gantuya eng said was okay for USer:G Purevdorj to do —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:47, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
NOTe- Gantuya eng denies that mongolians existed before 1200s AD. and yet she contributed to this article, which has the name "mongolian monarchs" for people that existed before 1200 AD, at least over 1,000 years before that. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.136.193 (talk) 20:52, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

While there might be cause to delete or merge this article, this doesn't appear to be a good faith effort to get a broad consensus; rather faction building like 162 said. Now if some of those references indeed demonstrate the topic's notability, then it needs to stay whether or not the article is in good shape. --Kraftlos (Talk | Contrib) 10:42, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm surprised that people completely uninterested in the topic of Mongolian or Chinese history are voting here. Isn't that like peasants faithfully voting for MPRP? Gantuya eng (talk) 05:52, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ganyuya eng shows complete disregard for policy in this edit, claiming that a warning not to post mulitple votes on this AFD and keeping civil was "vandalism", —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.84.138.103 (talk) 06:11, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Is it possible that a mere format change may help us move towards consensus? --Tenmei (talk) 19:58, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.