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The result was delete. MBisanz talk 07:42, 28 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Solar system basic

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The article is a fork of Solar System, using the content from that article to create a Simple Wikipedia-style article. This will in all likelihood lead to serious complications in maintaining both articles in parallel. In addition, it needlessly duplicates what is already available on Simple; certain sections (such as "Dwarf planets") appear to have been copied from Simple based on similar formatting and text. (For reference, there were lengthy discussions last year at Talk:Solar System regarding the merits of simplifying the article in this way.) Ckatzchatspy 08:22, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think we need a fairly compelling reason to make such an 'executive summary' given that Wikipedia doesn't normally do so. You say the traditional lede is too short, but the current lede of Solar system is a lot shorter given the size of the article than many ledes. Given that and the current length of Solar system basic, I'm not convinced that you can't achieve your aim better by just lengthening the lede. Olaf Davis (talk) 09:57, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The Guidance on the lead says it should be no longer than 4 paragraphs. I did not say the lead is to short, I said it lacks the capacity to be useful for this particular article - hence the need for an executive summary. HarryAlffa (talk) 12:56, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
What is it about this particular article that you feel can't be adequately summarised by a lede, then? Olaf Davis (talk) 13:58, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It can't do in 4 paragraphs what the Wikipedia:Lead section says it should do; "summary of the important aspects of the subject". I also feel that an executive summary (as Solar system basic is meant to be) would be an excellent idea, to overcome this limitation. I've also taken the opportunity to try to layout the structure of the document to reflect the structure of the solar system itself, which I think makes a better article. HarryAlffa (talk) 19:03, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I still don't understand what's special about this particular article that means it needs a longer than usual lede: all you've said is that it can't properly summarise it, but not why. If on the other hand you think this a common problem to many articles, perhaps the best course of action would be proposing a change to WP:LEDE or the idea of 'executive summary' articles at the Village pump. Such a change seems too significant (and given the above comments too far from uncontroversial) to enact without a wider search for consensus. Olaf Davis (talk) 09:10, 24 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.