The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 04:05, 23 August 2008 [1].
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Comments by Realist2
Support:Read through article, corrected some errors, looks good on my end. Overall a very neutral article too. Just as good as Michael Jackson. — Realist2 00:42, 19 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Reply You misunderstood my comment, I didn't ask to include unencyclopedic prose. What I meant was that I thought the caption would be better off as an introductory sentence, as opposed to "Jackson covers her breast after Timberlake removed the right breastplate of her bustier.", which doesn't set a context to the unfamiliar reader. I think just adding "at the Super Bowl XXXVIII halftime show in February 2004" should do the trick. indopug (talk) 15:36, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've restored the incorrect changes.
See WP:MOSDATE; solo years are not linked. See WP:DASH and WP:HYPHEN
You changed all of the correct hyphens in words to endashes, and linked solo years: [2] I restored them to the correct version before your changes. [3]
Emdashes are not spaced on Wiki; I've corrected those now.[4] That is:
becomes:
The choices for punctuation on Wiki are spaced endashes ( – ) or unspaced emdashes (—); the article had spaced emdashes ( — ). I haven't yet had a chance to look at the page numbers; this has taken me more than an hour. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 06:48, 22 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]