- Lead
In 1979, after playing in some local groups, he joined hard rock band, Samson, where he rose to fame; but departed two years later to become Iron Maiden's lead vocalist. -- Remove the comma before Samson
- Despite reaching the top 30 in many countries, the album was "somewhat of a disappointment", which failed to "come up with anything truly groundbreaking", except for "Tears of the Dragon"—released as single, along with "Shoot All the Clowns". -- add a before single
- Tribe of Gypsies departed to continue with their work and Dickinson tracked down a new band, with whom was released the double-disc live performance, Alive in Studio A. -- no need for the was
- In 1996 was released the third album, Skunkworks, which marked a "highly approved stylistic shift." -- comma after 1996, and the beginning needs rewording because it makes no sense
- From a concert in Spain, were recorded both, an EP and a live video,—released only in Japan—under the name Skunkworks Live. -- this also makes no sense
- The next year was released a semi-concept album on alchemy, The Chemical Wedding, described as a "modern metal aesthetic". -- the next year was released make no sense
- In late 2001, was released a "best of…" album, which included rarities and two new songs, "Broken"—released as single—and "Silver Wings". -- ___(what?) was released?
- On May 23, 2005, Dickinson released his first in seven years, Tyranny of Souls—which included the single "Abduction". -- his first (what?)
- Live/compilation/video albums/box sets
The notes are not complete sentences, and as a result do not warrant full stops
- Singles
- Does the general ref verify those singles that did not chart?
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- Okay, but what is verifying their existence?--Truco 13:36, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "Man of Sorrows" and "Killing Floor" were Japanese release only, therefore they couldn't chart. Now I'm looking for the other two. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 15:56, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- But what verifies those Japanese's tracks existence? --Truco 18:18, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "Killing Floor" - reference here in allmusic. Aciddent of Birth's cover was created by Derek Riggs, who also created the "Man of Sorrows" single cover. see here Rockk3r Spit it Out! 04:47, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I removed the two singles that had no reference. Rockk3r Spit it Out! 19:22, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- References
All done Rockk3r Spit it Out! 04:50, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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