*Comments
- "To that end, it owns over 40 former churches" Since this is a complete list, why not just give the number?
- "In the financial year ending 31 March 2009" In might be an EngVar thing, but financial year instead of fiscal year sounds strange to my ears.
- I think us Brits are far more used to "financial year" for what it's worth! (quick check on the BBC website search engine seems to imply a 10:1 financial:fiscal ratio roughly)... The Rambling Man (talk) 20:09, 9 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Well, then, ignore this one. As my user page says, I can't keep EngVars straight, even when I'm talking/writing. Courcelles 20:14, 9 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank goodness we're all different......!! The Rambling Man (talk) 20:34, 9 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref 46, why the "Published 2004"? None of the other books contain this, is there a reason?
- "about half of them in England and half in Wales." This still reads strange, It'd be nice to have a version that doesn't repeat the word "half". Perhaps, '...it owns xx former churches, divided roughly evenly between England and Wales'?
- I second this. It's better than before, but Courcelles suggests a good compromise... The Rambling Man (talk) 20:34, 9 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Courcelles 20:08, 9 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Response to Courcelles. Good points; I've dealt with Ref 46 (and also for consistency done something similar with the second Ext link). But I should be grateful for advice on the other points.
- We can avoid financial/fiscal either by simply deleting the "offending" word, or by saying "In the 12 months up to ..." Which do you think is preferable? The source does not use either word (did not realise it would cause a USA/Brit problem!).
- I have a problem with the source and the numbers it quotes. On the home page here it says "over 40 former places of worship". In the Notes for Editors here it says "40". But when you go to the details the English page here has 19 former churches etc., while the Welsh page here has 20, making a total of only 39! So how do you think this would be best managed? Incidentally, I should already have added something like "as of August 2010" because there may be future additions; I will do this when we decide on the best option.
Peter I. Vardy (talk) 10:23, 10 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- PS I have e-mailed the charity who confirm that the numbers quoted above (19 + 20) are currently correct but that further vestings are in the pipeline.--Peter I. Vardy (talk) 17:03, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Further response I've now clarified the numbers and deleted "financial".--Peter I. Vardy (talk) 10:19, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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