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Jessica Chastain on screen and stage[edit]

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Nominator(s): Krimuk|90 (talk) 08:53, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

After a long hiatus from Wikipedia, I am back with my 19th FLC nomination on the lovely Jessica Chastain. Hope to receive constructive criticism, as before. Krimuk|90 (talk) 08:53, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - based on comprehensiveness and coverage. I don't find it very detailed, and that's partly because each table is quite short because of her comparatively few film appearances compared to others. I don't think it represents the best of Wikipedia, and it's quite premature in my opinion. I would rather see a longer list. I don't see why it's not just called "Jessica Chastain filmography" either. The wording of the current title sounds more like it should be a prose article, not a list, and that's actually what I was expecting to see when I clicked on the Wikilink. I find the lead a bit choppy too. it's just short, successive sentences that aren't that interesting to read, and it's more like a chronological re-telling of what we can gather ourselves from the list. I'd rather see more about the characters she has played and critical responses, awards and nominations, not just what year she was in each film.  — Calvin999 12:21, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: "_______ on stage and screen" is frequently used for actors and actresses with theater credits. A common alternative is "_______ performances". Snuggums (talk / edits) 23:23, 28 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • I know, but for me it sounds more like it should be a prose article. Using 'filmography', we know it's a table or list.  — Calvin999 09:19, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, Calvin999, your reasoning for the oppose are based on your personal opinion and not on an existing criteria. I urge you to read the FL criteria before such a drastic opposition to the nomination. I'm sorry but "it sounds more like it should be a prose article" is not a strong justification. Also, no filmography list provides a list of critic reviews - however, this list, wherever possible, and without being tedious to read, provides details of her major award wins and nominations, as well as the critical and commercial performance of her most notable films. It is in no way just a bland listing of her playing "x" in film "y". Please familiarise yourself with the standard followed by the film, TV and theater appereance listings of actors (such as Meryl Streep on screen and stage - a list that I wrote with Dr. Blofeld) that we follow out here, and I'd be happy to follow up on more legitimate concerns. Cheers! --Krimuk|90 (talk) 10:32, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
They are my reasons. I don't think the lead is broad enough in its coverage or that it is detailed enough. It's not engaging or interesting. You could also illustrate the article with some images, surely (and I don't mean by adding multiple pictures of Chastain; the second one is completely pointless). With regard to Streep's, Wikipedia:Other stuff exists comes t mind; no two lists are the same or can be the same, each one is different. Having said that, I actually found Streep's interesting to read. Unfortunately, I do find Chastain's a bit of a bland listing of "x" in "y". Another problem with the title is that it's not reflective of the content. Only one sentence in three paragraphs says about her stage work. I'm sorry that you're quite clearly rattled by my opposing, but I don't think this list represents the best of Wikipedia as a whole. I don't think this list meets 1, 2 ,3a or 5b of the criteria, either in part or fully in places. How's that? I'd actually say this list could be merged with her bio, which is a problem regarding criteria.  — Calvin999 10:37, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Look, I'd be willing to make amendments/improvements to the article - that's the entire purpose of the FLC process. But you've got to be more specific about what needs changing; something like "not engaging or interesting" doesn't exactly help this nomination. Could I request the coordinators or some other editors to weigh in on this matter, please? --Krimuk|90 (talk) 14:53, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Streep's one to me has more of an engaging and interesting flair to it. I enjoyed reading it and I found it informative. I didn't get the same feeling when I read Chastain's; it read more like a burst of short sentences. It's meant to be Chastain on stage and screen, but only one sentence out of three paragraphs actually mentioned stage work. I think also her comparatively shorter career doesn't help as there is less to draw upon and write about. But therein lies another issue for me which is bigger: I think this article could be easily merged into her bio. Lots of actors have select filmographies, and I think that the same could be applied to Chastain's. For me, that is a big problem, because I don't think it warrants its own standalone list at this point in her career because it's quite short. It's nothing to be taken personally, no nomination of any kind gets no criticism or feedback. It's not a critique on you, remember that.  — Calvin999 16:46, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The readability of the prose in the lead may be a valid point (I've not read it, so make no judgement myself), but the title is not a problem, as the format is used in several other FLs. – SchroCat (talk) 08:32, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – The nominator has been indef. blocked. —Vensatry (Talk) 07:57, 14 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from NumerounovedantTalk 06:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Numerounovedant
  • I agree that the lead could use some polishing, but with no major issues.
  • The first sentence might look better if you add her stage credits to it as you did in that of Meryl Streep.
Some of her notable stage appearances are already mentioned in the first and third paragraphs.
you can mention an "American film and stage actress" or something like that.
Added.
  • Please help me understand the role of - "As a final-year student at the Juilliard School, she was signed on for a talent holding deal by the television producer John Wells." here.
Okay, so while she was in her final year of school, a producer signed her on for roles in TV shows that were produced by him.
  • "From 2004 to 2010," - "Early in her career" maybe?
It's better to be specific I think.
  • " Her next film roles were in Stolen (2009), a critically panned mystery-thriller, and in The Debt (2010), in which she played the younger version of Helen Mirren's character." - maybe a little about "the role" you mention, just a suggestion to improve the relevcance of the sentence.
She had a minor role in Stolen, so I don't think it adds much to the lead.
Then you should mention that she played a minor role. You don't want to attribute a critically panned movie to her resume with a minor role! Plus the sentence itself raised a question in my mind (as a reader) of her role in the movie.
  • "Chastain's breakthrough in Hollywood came in 2011 when she had six film releases." - The year 2011 turned out to be the breakthrough year for Chastian" or something similar to that maybe. Your version somehow makes it sound like the number had something to do with her breakthrough.
Agreed. I tweaked it a bit.
  • " leading lady" - "female lead"?
"Leading lady" is an acceptable term.
Yes, but it's usually used to refer to a role where the lady is the protagonist of the film, I don't think that is the case here.
Not really. If you see the wikilinked article it says it also refers to "the actress who plays a secondary lead, usually a love interest, to the leading actor in a film or play."
Yes it says an "informal way" to refer to the... See, it is a trivial issue, and I don't want it to come in way of the flow of the rest of the Lead. It comes out odd to the reader because she was neither an established actress back then nor played a central role for the film, so I think it's better if the article omitted the "Leading lady" reference.
  • "in 1960s America" - " in America in the in 1960s America"?
"1960s America" is quite correct actually.
  • "Chastain received her first Academy Award nomination, in the supporting actress category."
Not sure what you mean here, because the additional comma would make it grammatically incorrect.
I misread it, I though you had a comma there. Please ignore!
  • "$747 million-grossing" - "top grossing"?
Better to mention the figure, isn't it?
I don't know, it reads awkwardly to me. You could ask for a second opinion here.
  • "and played Maya, a CIA intelligent analyst, in Kathryn Bigelow's thriller Zero Dark Thirty. The latter was a partly" - "She played Maya, a CIA intelligent analyst, in Kathryn Bigelow's thriller Zero Dark Thirty, a partly fictionalized account.
The sentence would be a bit too lengthy if I don't split it.
  • "and garnered Chastain"- "She received a"
"Garnered" is quite correct actually.
I think I couldn't get my point across here. What I meant was that this sentence reads better if separated - "In 2012, she voiced the character of Gia in the $747 million-grossing animated film Madagascar 3: Europe's Most Wanted, and played Maya, a CIA intelligent analyst, in Kathryn Bigelow's thriller Zero Dark Thirty." Mainly because you talk about Zero Dark Thirty in the para further and it's better to keep it as an independent entry!
Yeah, I've split the sentences.
  • "in The Martain"- "in another science fiction film The Martian
I deliberately did not mention "science fiction film" so soon after I used it to describe Interstellar.
Fair enough.
  • The rest of the list looks good! I hope my comments help make parts of the article better. NumerounovedantTalk 06:34, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the comments, Numerounovedant. Krimuk|90 (talk) 09:27, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I replied to your comments. Also if you feel it to be appropriate here, I suggest you add the Richard Roeper's comments post "Mama", describing her as "one of the finest actors of her generation." It would add to her credits, if you think it's appropriate. NumerounovedantTalk 12:41, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
That's an interesting point, but I'm not sure I'd like to repeat that quote here, since it's already being used in the lead section of her biography. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 02:15, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
When the last three points have been addressed (The "minor role", "Leading Lady", and the gorss issue) I'd be happy to support the nomination! Good work! NumerounovedantTalk 04:06, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I've tweaked the two sentences to address your first two concerns, but I must insist that there is nothing wrong in mentioning the gross figure for Madagascar, since it is her highest-grossing film. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 05:43, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Krimuk90: Support All my comments were resolved, Good Luck with the nomination! NumerounovedantTalk 06:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Numerounovedant. :) Krimuk|90 (talk) 06:38, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support I'm sure neither the nominator nor the delegates are going to worry much about what Calvin999 has to say. The list is clearly comprehensive and of FL standard and you wouldn't want to bloat it with excessive prose anyway.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:08, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much, good doctor. :) Krimuk|90 (talk) 12:37, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment by Dan arndt (talk)

@Dan arndt: Both your comments have been addressed, though I'm not sure how to include the key as a separate row. Thanks for reading the list! :) --Krimuk|90 (talk) 09:51, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I will try and see if I can fix the table for you -
don't know why its bolded - will work on it.
Thanks!
Done. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 10:26, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Well, several films have different names during production, but the name with which it is theatrically released is the only notable one.
Then maybe a footnote explaining that when it was first screened in 2009 it was called Stolen Lives but was renamed prior to its theatrically release - otherwise the notes column makes little sense.
Generally, films have more than one producer. Each one of them are still the "producer", so I think it's fine.
It would be preferable then for a footnote to be included to this effect, as not all films have multiple producers.
According to IMDB, it released as The Dark Fields only in Australia. It also had different release names for other international markets. Is this notable enough to be included?
Maybe it is because I'm from Australia but you're right it doesn't need to be included.
It was given a theatrical release in the US as The Color of Time, but premiered in film festivals as Tar.
Similarly to my preceding comments about Stolen, there should be a footnote provide greater explanation about the alternative names.
As above.
As per my comments on The Westerner.
Already mentioned this. Added the year of release in the footnote.
Maybe reword the footnote as 'entitled Salomé, was separately released in 2013.'
It wasn't really a short film, but a 40 second spoof for NYT. Is this notable?
You're right it isn't notable and shouldn't be included.
According to this, she wasn't a part of this episode. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 03:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
and yet there are these screenshots from that episode and IMDb which appear to indicate otherwise.
Dan arndt, all done. :) --Krimuk|90 (talk) 08:22, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support All my comments have been addressed. Best of luck with the nomination. Dan arndt (talk) 08:37, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking the time out to review this. Much appreciated. :) --Krimuk|90 (talk) 08:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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