The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 20 January 2020 (UTC) [1].Reply[reply]
List of Austria international footballers (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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I currently have one FLC active however, it currently has three supports and no outstanding comments so I believe it's OK to move ahead nominate a new page. This is another international player list, this time a slightly longer one given the history of the nation. I believe it meets the standards of the previous lists and is ready for FLC. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 16:50, 29 August 2019 (UTC)Reply[reply]
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@Kosack:, I am happy to help find an alternative source, if I can be of any use. What is the eu-football link sourcing that the other two refs at the top of the table aren't? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:33, 16 December 2019 (UTC)Reply[reply]
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of all-timethis phrase is superfluous everywhere it appears. Also, why is it hyphenated when it's not used as an adjective? - Removed
Austria has played 777 international matches since its debut. The use of "since" implies this tally does not include the team's debut match, when in fact it does. Reword to "Austria has played a total of 777 international matches" or similar. Also, the tally has changed over the course of this nomination so you may wish to update it.
forced to wait nearly two yearsWhat does "forced" mean here? Was someone or something actively preventing Blum from participating in internationals? If not, reword. - Reworded
unbroken consecutive spell"unbroken" is a synonym for consecutive, use only one or the other. - Removed
most goals scored in a single match by one player in the nation's history-> "most goals scored in a single match by an Austrian player". - Reworded
Might add some more comments later, this is just from a brief examination. – Teratix ₵ 06:49, 5 January 2020 (UTC)Reply[reply]
First of, I am part of the 2020 WikiCup and will be getting points for this as long as it is a comprehensive review. I also have my own FL candidate I just posted yesterday and as such is helping pay back for the input of other FLC reviwers. Looking at the age of the nomination I sympathize as I've had several die on the vine over the years. Let's hope this doesn't happen here.
composed of FIFA World Cup and UEFA European Championship and- to me there seems to be a word missing or something? is it
FIFA World Cup and UEFA European Championship matches?
I will come back and look at the prose as soon as possible, but I wanted to give my input for this right away. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:44, 12 January 2020 (UTC)Reply[reply]
...an unbroken spell of fixtures between November 1948 and May 1956- if that means consecutive then why not simply write that? I had to read it three times to get it (granted I am slow ;) ) - Reworded
Statistics updated following match played on 19 November 2019.- but the accessdate for the sources state "25 August 2019", if the table was udated based on the data in the sources I believe the "Accessdate" should be updated to make sure it's clear. - Updated