The bane of my Wiki-existence, this list is back at FLC for now the fourth time. Sorry if it looks a little bare-bones without pictures, but the list is already a whopping 109kb without them. The list is consistent with all of the other lists of NHL players and features every player to ever don the Hawks uniform. There's a few redlinks, but its certainly not overbearing. Teemu08 (talk) 18:18, 21 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure that there is too much I can do about this. If you take a look at all of the other player lists, it is a very comparable lead. ([2][3][4][5][6][7] etc.). A few of these articles have some information on players who are, for example, members of the hall of fame, but that information is redundant to other articles on the Blackhawks. If you have something in mind by which to expand the lead, I would gladly incorporate it. I've never had a problem getting in a featured list with 2+ paragraphs before, however. Also note that another user has added some more information to the lead which may make it more satisfactory. Teemu08 (talk) 00:00, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well, FL is becoming more and more prose-demanding these day. But I think you have expand it considerably and the 2 paragraphs look fine, so I change to weak oppose.—Chris!ct 00:49, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment
Why no table of content at the top?
Fixed, although it kind of adds some choppiness. Teemu08 (talk) 01:12, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I don't understand the layout. At first, you group the Goaltenders in one table and then group all other positions into another. Why not have five sections about players of each of the five positions?
Goaltenders and skaters have completely different statistics and therefore couldn't be in the same table. Additionally, as you may find, some players played multiple positions. Teemu08 (talk) 01:12, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Color should by accompanied by symbols
I've bolded lines with players who have played this year. The Stanley Cup winners should already be distinguishable based on the year listed in the "Stanley Cup Winner" column. Teemu08 (talk) 01:20, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well, WP:ACCESS requires that colors be accompanied by symbols to alleviate problems with color blindness.—Chris!ct 01:45, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well based on my experience writing and reviewing FLs, color should be accompanied by symbols per WP:ACCESS. Take a look at recentlypromotedFLs. I am not sure if boldface will suffice but I will ask other reviewers' inputs on that.—Chris!ct 04:56, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
In the interest of time I just switched out the bold for crosses. Teemu08 (talk) 19:09, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Matthewedwards asked me to revisit this FLC due to recent criteria change and I still think it fulfills the criteria, so I stand by my support.—Chris!ct 05:02, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose -- Lead lacks, referencing is very scarce, and the formatting of the table also lacks to not meet WP:WIAFL standards.--Best, ₮RUCӨ 00:59, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- Much better than when I first saw it, the table and references check out up to standards, as does the lead. However, I would like to see the lead expanded a bit more, I just think its too short IMO.--Best, ₮RUCӨ 20:41, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments - For an idea of how to expand the lead, one good example is Nashville Sounds all-time roster, which states what players have won important awards. This might be a good way to squeeze out a third paragraph. The lead needs references for facts not covered in the list itself. Also, I'm unsure of the reliability of Hockey Goalies.org. I've seen that site questioned at FAC before. Giants2008 (17-14) 20:22, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
From WIAFA: "(a) a lead—a concise lead section that summarizes the topic and prepares the reader for the detail in the subsequent sections". Player awards are not mentioned anywhere in the subsequent text and therefore would be irrelevant in the lead. For what its worth, I plan on spinning off award winners into their own article once I'm done with this one since there's so many. Teemu08 (talk) 21:52, 22 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
If you are looking to expand on what's in the list to improve the lead, here are some ideas: number of players by nationality (not all, just the most prominent outside of Canada, which is obviously number 1), how many players have won the Stanley Cup with the team, etc. Have any jersey numbers been retired? If so, that could be added.
At this point, the lead is probably long enough. It was more of a concern earlier on in the nomination. Thanks, though. Teemu08 (talk)
"Seasons" comment in the key should be in a footnote.
I know images would make the article large, but for a list like this, you have to have at least a lead image, if not one or two. A few isn't going to make a huge difference in size but will do a heck of a lot for Cr.6.
Lead picture added. Unfortunately, there's not much in the way of pictures of Blackhawks in uniform. Teemu08 (talk) 14:13, 24 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Hope this helps. KV5(Talk • Phils) 23:57, 23 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Don't separate symbols from their entries (no space between dagger and name, etc.). If you think it looks cramped, superscript the daggers.
I tried this and it looks terrible. How about a non-breaking space instead? Teemu08 (talk)
The issue isn't breaking; it's having a symbol next to its entry. It's just proper writing. Did you try superscripting? I've used that with a degree of success at List of Philadelphia Phillies team records and other tables. KV5(Talk • Phils) 16:19, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Anything new on this front? KV5(Talk • Phils) 00:43, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Additional comment: "The franchise has had thirty-four players selected as captains"→34 per WP:MOSNUM. KV5(Talk • Phils) 12:50, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"at least one match for the franchise, either in the NHL regular season or in the playoffs." Are you sure it should be "match" instead of "game"? I think this article should be using American English.
"who were known as the Black Hawks from their inception until 1986"
"who was the team's goaltender for their first Stanley Cup win in 1934"
For consistency, the blue rows should also have a symbol.
Image caption: "He is the franchise leader in goals with 604." Comma after "goals".
General references should usually be placed above the inline citations.
"Centre" and "Defenceman": As I said, US English should be used per WP:ENGVAR. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:56, 26 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:35, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The site has a bibliography which reliable sources and they have a strict policy of only accepting official documents to add stats etc. This source has been deemed reliable for many previously featured articles. -Djsasso (talk) 12:29, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Good enough for me! Dabomb87 (talk) 22:26, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments addressed. Hockeygoalies also cites their sources [8] and has been deemed reliable for other featured lists. EDIT: upon further review, I'm just going to delete it. While it was a big time-saver, the information there is redundant to the other sources. Teemu08 (talk) 15:55, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Hockeygoalies is still being used as an inline citation. Also, you've mixed ((citation)) with the ((cite web/news/journal etc.)) templates; these should not be mixed. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:26, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Good call. I've swapped it out for a source from the official website. Teemu08 (talk) 03:41, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment I think that current and former captains should be denoted as such, as it is important information to know. This renders List of Chicago Blackhawks captains unnecessary, which is in line with the stricter content forking guidelines of the new FL criteria, which is about to be instituted. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:29, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Do you mean simply by colour coding, or by the addition of an extra column? I'm still not entirely sure if the captain's list is considered content forking because of length concerns and a list of captains does have independant notability (although maybe it's just because I'm a hockey fan). I included the List of Vancouver Canucks captains in my audit because it is reasonably short and the players list is 63,602, so a merge might be realistic whereas the Blackhawks are a much older team. These sports lists are tricky ones to judge though. Unlike the musician awards list, there is at least a standard where every team has these lists and they aren't just arbitrarily split off. -- Scorpion0422 16:13, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Captains are players, yes? Would it be possible to add footnotes to the player list, saying "player was team captain from X season to Y season"? Dabomb87 (talk) 16:50, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Agree. I suggest adding both the color code and footnotes to denote who are captains.—Chris!ct 17:56, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Now that the new criteria has passed, I'll merge the captains into this article. It will take a little time though, so cut me a little slack on this one. Teemu08 (talk) 14:32, 6 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Update Captains have been merged into the article. Teemu08 (talk) 16:45, 7 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Would it be possible to note which players have been inducted into the Hockey Hall of Fame? -- Scorpion0422 16:13, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008
Comments - Looks much better than when it first came here. In addition to denotations for captains and Hall of Famers, I'd like to see a couple of other things done.
"when the team won their second championship in 1938." For correct tenses, change "their" to "its".
In the next-to-last sentence of the lead, there's a space before the reference.
Picky, but why are the reference dates using international formatting in an article on an American subject?
I'd like to see references 4 through 6, which aren't purely citations, moved to a new Notes section; the current Notes section could then be changed to References. The primary benefit would be an improvement in the formatting of reference 6.
Otherwise, good job getting this up to snuff. Giants2008 (17-14) 23:23, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments addressed. Teemu08 (talk) 15:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
There was apparently some confusion with the first comment. We still have "The Blackhawks...have won the Stanley Cup three times in its (their) 83-year history" and "the team's goaltender for their (its) first Stanley Cup win in 1934." I know it's difficult to understand tenses sometimes, but it's important for our readers. Just remember to match a singular with a singular, and vise versa, and everything will be fine. Giants2008 (17-14) 22:21, 7 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, I think I am definitely confused about the tensing. I am under the impression that American English treats plural proper nouns as if they were plural nouns (this issue comes up a lot with American v. English musical groups). I am not sure I understand why the tensing in the lead in reference the Hawks would be anything but plural. Teemu08 (talk) 02:43, 8 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The "Hawks" are plural (many hawks), but "team" is singular (only one team). Dabomb87 (talk) 03:38, 8 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, OK, that makes sense. Teemu08 (talk) 03:44, 8 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Would still like to see Hall of Famers denoted in some way, but I think it meets the standards as is. Nice work on such a long list. Giants2008 (17-14) 23:11, 8 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I confirm my support after the criteria changes. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:18, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Despite the new FL criteria, this list is still up to those standards. My Support for promotion stands.--Truco 14:57, 9 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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