Comments short and sweet but, in my opinion, can withstand existing as a separate list.
- I think you could afford to put "English Twenty20 cricket champions" in bold as you're not linking the key terms until after that.
- Daily Telegraph is actually The Daily Telegraph.
- I do have a tiny niggling wonder if you could have something along the lines of a History section which describes the various finals, but that may be better served in a List of English Twenty20 cricket championship finals?
- As I said above, I think something like that would be better served in the parent article(s), but yes, the finals specifically would probably be better placed in a specific list of the finals: should such a page be deemed notable. Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Lead image caption probably could use (players celebrating the 20xx victory) or something to put the image into better context.
- The issue is that the photo is specifically of them celebrating their semi-final win in 2012. Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- You could have "(pictured celebrating their semi-final win in 2012)"? The Rambling Man (talk) 16:57, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Perhaps worth noting that the B&H was an ODI competition with 40(?) overs, so the shortening of the matches came about naturally since half as many overs were played?
- "the Friends Provident t20" looks funny to my eyes, that you link Friends Provident and then have t20 unlinked afterwards. Would consider "the 'Friends Provident t20'...".
- Done, though for consistency have also done it for the B&H, Twenty20 Cup and FLt20. Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- "each team was allowed two overseas players" not sure you need to repeat "overseas players".
- Consider linking Quota players for "overseas player". I've never heard of "quota player" but the article does a bit of a job on explaining what you mean.
- Done, nice find, I've been looking for something decent to link that to for ages! Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- "qualified for the Champions League Twenty20," (I'd say who that was) and how did they get on?
- I'm not sure on this one; given that the information provided here provides an easy way to check which teams it was, it would seem slightly superfluous to list the counties in the lead, and information on how they did I would think is more detail than is needed in this list article, but you could convince me? Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Essex CC isn't linked in the table.
- Which then poses the awkward question, should all the top scorers etc have their county linked?!
- Linking these two points together: good point! I have linked the counties wherever that county was not the winner or runner-up, how's it look? I'm not against linking them all if it will be a visual improvement: it does look a little random at the moment! Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- Not sure that "(Ordered by..)" should have a capital O each time. (And "... Runs" and "... Wickets" etc).
- That's how they copy from the source. I'm not against changing them, but I don't see that it does much harm either way. Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- No, it doesn't really do any harm, but I tend to apply the rules of grammar to ref titles as well as article content. Although I must admit that I can't find that in MOS anywhere, so I guess it's just a personal pref... The Rambling Man (talk) 16:57, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref 3 should use an en-dash, not a hyphen in the title.
The Rambling Man (talk) 17:13, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
As usual, thanks for your comments. A few of my replies probably require some further thought and discussion, so I look forward to your continued input. Harrias talk 11:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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