Comments
- Lead image caption is fragment so no full stop required.
- Isn't there a tournament style infobox that could be used here or do you think that's unnecessary...?
- " champions of the Premier League and the winners of the FA Cup. " this is the current arrangement, as you expand later, perhaps you can make that clear here too?
- Added "presently contested between …" in the first sentence. —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:57, 20 July 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- You don't mention that the FA in the title means Football Association, nor relate the trophy to that organisation...
- Specified in the first sentence that they are the organisers. —Bloom6132 (talk) 18:21, 20 July 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Don't think you need to link Canada.
- Double is overlinked (and differently).
- "runner-up finishes " feels like an odd turn of phrase for the losers of a one-off cup contest...
- "The 2017 edition will be contested by Chelsea and Arsenal." probably needs a citation and worth just saying it'll be at Wembley once again...
- Any thoughts on the criticism of the contest as reasonably meaningless? This article is mildly interesting in that regard.
- Yes – I've added several refs to support that criticism and juxtaposed it with several historical moments in the final paragraph. —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:15, 21 July 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Brighton and Huddersfield need A's in their FCs in the summary table.
The Rambling Man (talk) 11:49, 20 July 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: thanks for your feedback; I hope I've addressed your comments satisfactorily. —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:15, 21 July 2017 (UTC)Reply[reply]
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