Comments from Mattythewhite
- "to become the first "Portuguese champions"": perhaps remove the quotation marks, or reword to "to become the first champions of Portuguese football"?
- "five consecutive top finishes": I think "five consecutive top-place finishes" would read better.
- "The club's attendance records since moving to the Estádio das Antas in 1952 are also included": as are the records since moving to the Estádio do Dragão.
- I thought the way it was included every venue since moving to das Antas, but I added do Dragão to make it clearer. Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Looking at MOS:BOLD, I don't think we can justify using bold for the total number of wins or for the records further down the article.
- Boldface removed; used extended footnotes to point out competition record wins instead. Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- There's a few players whose names should be written out in full, including Drulović and Folha.
- Fernando Gomes needs a wikilink in the first instance.
- Would it be possible to have a table for players with the most appearances for Porto?
- I cannot find a single source with such a list, but I can try to assemble the various items from different sources. Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Added a table with a ranking list that is provided by a single source (see table caption), and further per-competition stats are sourced individually for each player through this same source ("Ref" column). Parutakupiu (talk) 20:43, 29 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Per WP:OVERLINK, we should not link to the "names of major geographic features and locations". Therefore, I would remove the country wikilinks in the tables.
- So far, I've never seen that being extensively applied for tables, but I've removed the links (together with the flags). Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- "Top goalscorers in international club competitions": source was published in 2012, yet the table includes a player who played after then. Another source is needed.
- "National teams": does this section refer only to caps earned while with Porto? If so, could this be stated?
- Clarified that. I also changed the section heading to "International caps". Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- There are a few articles linked more than once, e.g. 1942–43 Primeira Divisão, which is linked three times.
- "currently ranks currently": "currently" used twice.
Thanks, Mattythewhite (talk) 17:49, 26 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- Thank you! Parutakupiu (talk) 12:07, 28 October 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]
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