• "each of which he won at five times" => "at each of which he won five times"
  • Changed to "at both of which he won five times." Harrias ^talk 17:58, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• "won 9 races at Renault, 7 at Williams and 5 at Ferrari" - I would say either "with" or "for" each team. Saying "at" makes it sound like Renault, etc, are places.
  • Changed to a mix of both. Harrias ^talk 17:58, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• Also, shouldn't those numbers be written as words, given that they are less than ten?
  • No, per MOS:NUMNOTES, because they are comparable values to the 31 given before. Harrias ^talk 17:58, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref 3 lists no work/publisher
  • Added. Harrias ^talk 17:58, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
• That's all I could pick up - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:44, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Cheers ChrisTheDude. Harrias ^talk 17:58, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A WikiCup submittable review.

• "in 1980 with" not keen on the easter eggs. At the least I think you should write out the first one fully.

Expanded the first to "1980 season". Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Image caption needs a full stop.

Added. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• McLaren is mentioned six times in the first five sentences, mildly repetitive.

Trimmed some mentions. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "world championship with" plural.

Sorted. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• " featured particularly notable race incidents and collisions occurring between the two" probably no need at all for "particularly notable".

Removed. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "He missed out on the world championship in 1990 " quick repeat of "in 1990", maybe "that season" instead?

Changed. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• A little odd for me, you cover his world titles before his first win, yet this article is about his wins. I wonder if it'd be better the other way round.

The intention was to summarise Prost himself, before going into detail on the wins. I take it that you don't feel that it works? Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "won seven races in 1993 to win" won .. to win... again, a bit repetitive.

Changed to "won seven races in 1993 to claim" Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• ", at both of which he won five times" maybe "winning five times at both"?

I mean, that does sound like it was written in English, so sure... Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• You could mention that he won one of his races by a mere fraction of a second?

It was a team 1–2 though, and I'm pretty sure that it was team orders to hold position, so there isn't much relevance to the margin. Harrias ^talk 10:01, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Autodromo Nazionale Monza" our article calls it "Autodromo Nazionale di Monza"

Fixed. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Not sure Phoenix Street Circuit should be thus capitalised, it's just a "street circuit" in Phoenix, not like a track.

Fixed. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Circuit Zandvoort" doesn't need to be piped to a redirect back to itself.

Got the pipe the wrong way around, sorted. Harrias ^talk 09:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:45, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Cheers, replied to each above. Harrias ^talk 16:07, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It looks good. I'm ambivalent about the ordering of the first two paras. Certainly if I'm the only one noting it, so I'm happy to cap and support. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:48, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from MWright96

• Be consistent in how you spell the word teammate. For example it is spelt as teammate in the first paragraph whereas it is spelt as team-mate twice in the second paragraph

• Done, converted all to "teammate". Harrias ^talk 09:08, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "but fell out with the team," - maybe briefly explain Prost fell out with Renault?

• Added. Harrias ^talk 09:08, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Prost won four times in 1989 as he won the world championship for the third time," - try to avoid repetition of the word "won" too closely

• Changed second instance to "claimed". Harrias ^talk 09:08, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "He missed out on the world championship that season after Senna intentionally crashed into him during the final race of the season." - repetition of the word "season"
• "after Senna intentionally crashed into him during the final race of the season." - If I can recall it was the penultimate race of the season. Also the F1 Hall of Fame source incorrectly states this. Please find another reliable source that backs up the statement in bold.

• Dealt with both of these. Harrias ^talk 09:08, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That was all I could find. Nice work! MWright96 (talk) 13:46, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for the review, I have responded to each point above. Harrias ^talk 09:08, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]