• Done

• Consider linking "try" and "field goal" appropriately.

  Done

• " Australia has scored the " well, players who play for Australia have...

  Done

• "by Bryan Fletcher[2] and Robbie Paul[3] in " move those refs to the end of the sentence.

  Done

• " in 2008," easter egg link, try "in the 2008 tournament".

  Done

• "Ian Schubert,[9] Damien Blanch[10] and Chris Taripo[11]." similar comment, and last ref goes after punctuation.

  Done

• Avoid overlinking, e.g. Australia, Slater, Hayne and Holmes all overlinked in the lead.

  Done

• "Field Goals" section, -> goals. And a sortable table of one is a bit odd.

  Done the unsorted the table. Renaming field goals to goals wouldn't make sense as goals mean a different thing in rugby league.

• Multiple table: Years should be Tournament(s).

  Done

• Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be en-dashes.

  Done

• Where is all the tabulated content reference? No sign of inline references.

  Done

That's it for a quick run through. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:14, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man Thanks for your review. Do I need references both in the lead and in the table or will just one suffice? WDM10 (talk) 18:37, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "played in various intervals since 1954" => "played at various intervals since 1954"

  Done

• Need to wikilink tries and field goals

  Done

• "This is a list of players" - TRM did not mean that you should simply move this wording to the second sentence, he meant that it should not be included at all.

  Done

• "The first player to do is was" - something wrong here

  Done

• "higher ranked teams against lower ranked teams" - there should be hyphens in higher-ranked and lower-ranked

  Done

• "Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored six people have achieved it twice" => "Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored, six players have achieved the feat twice"

  Done

• "These being Ian Schubert, Billy Slater, Akuila Uate, Manu Vatuvei, Jarryd Hayne, Suliasi Vunivalu and Valentine Holmes." - this is not a complete sentence. Probably need to join this to the sentence before.

  Done

• "10 people have scored " - a sentence should not start with a digit

  Done

• "Valentine Holmes is the only player to score 5 and 6 tries respectively in a single game" - respectively is not the right word here. I think you mean "Valentine Holmes is the only player to score both 5 and 6 tries in a single game"

  Done

• Also, 5 and 6 should be written as words, as they are under ten

  Done

• Many of the rows in the table have no reference

  Done

• The Boulevard should sort under B, not T

  Done

• I think refs look better centre-aligned

  Done

• Ref 4 has no work/publisher

  Done

• Neither does ref 10

  Done

• Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:21, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Done

• Inconsistent use of BBC Sport/bbc.co.uk as the work

  Done

• Telegraph.co.uk should probably simply be The Daily Telegraph, to be consistent with other official websites of newspapers

  Done, I made telegraph.co.uk The Daily Telegraph (UK) and I made dailytelegraph.com.au The Daily Telgraph (AU)

• All the best, ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:36, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]