The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Scorpion0422 21:53, 21 March 2009 [1].


List of Scotland international footballers[edit]

Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk), Jmorrison230582 (talk)

Yesterday I noticed that the first FLC for this article had seemingly stagnated and that outstanding issues weren't being addressed. I therefore decided to get involved and fix up all the outstanding issues, which I believe I did, only to then find out that the FLC had in fact already dropped into the failed log before I'd started! After obtaining Matthew's blessing, however, I have re-nom'd the article myself, as I believe all the outstanding problems from the first FLC had been addressed. Hope that all makes sense :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:26, 4 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Support. All of the problems which i had found in the article that were added to the previous FLC have all been dealt with as Chris has mentioned above. Eddie6705 (talk) 17:48, 4 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Comments

  • In the opening sentence, "the first official international match" needs a reference: the match in question has its own article, Scotland v England (1872), so you might well find one there :-)
  • Denis Law being joint-top scorer made me ask "who with": could you work Dalglish's name into that sentence somehow?
  • Key. Not sure the as-of date should be in with the definition of pink(?)/asterisk;
  • and, the positions key looks really awkward, with the centred heading miles to the right of the position names.
  • Should the Mac/Mc names sort together? like we use ((DEFAULTSORT:Mackay, ...)) to get all the Mackay/MacKay/McKays sorted together in category lists.
  • John Wark's caption needs a full stop.

Stuff I raised at the previous FLC has been satisfactorily resolved. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 18:33, 6 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

    • All done. All the Macs/Mcs now sort as "Mac", which means that Lou Macari gets sorted in with them as well, but I don't think there's any way round that..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:26, 7 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Support All issues resolved, list satisfies criteria. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 09:16, 9 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:08, 13 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
  • Unrelated to the article, do you think you should put Jmorrison's username in the nominator line?
    • Done, he has replied to state that, although he doesn't plan to do any more work on the article, he is happy with the renomination
  • UEFA European Championship redirects to UEFA European Football Championship.
    • Changed
  • "maintains a roll of honour for all players"
    • Changed
  • "including the players who were selected but" Add "for" after "selected".
    • Changed
  • Image caption: "Darren Fletcher became Scotland's youngest captain for nearly 120 years when he led the team against Estonia in 2004." I think you mean "in", not "for".
    • No, I mean "for". In British English, to use "in" in that sentence would render it grammatically incorrect.
  • Is this list not redundant?
    • Probably. Until you mentioned it, I wasn't aware that article existed. Its existence doesn't affect whether or not this one meets FL requirements, though, surely....?
  • Many thanks for your comments -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:05, 9 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:23, 8 March 2009 (UTC)Reply[reply]

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