- Comments
- "Alf Common, The first..." - no capitalisation needed for "The". Done
- Jimmy Montgomery's years are wrong in the lead. Done - Ouch, i got that one way wrong, I must have been asleep.
- "...for the club, two, Danny Collins..." - needs rewording. Done - Reworded.
- I'd change the "Statistics are correct as of" bit to the last game, which was on 11 May 2008. Even though it will probably need updating tomorrow... Done - Changed.
- Not sure about the column titles "SAFC profile" and "Country profile". Maybe "Club source" and "National source", or something along those lines. Done - Changed.
- Are the internationals players those who played for their country whilst at the club or during their whole career? Comment - Only whilst at the club.
- You may be aware, but a few internationals, like Sandy McAllister and Charlie Thomson don't have country profiles. Done - McAllister didn't play for Scotland while at Sunderland, I mistakenly bolded the country, and have added Thomson's profile.
- Shouldn't Bert Johnston's nationality be bolded? Done - Bolded, must have missed that one.
- Jimmy Montgomery's link is incorrect - it links for Len Ashurst. Done - Added correct link.
- Consecutive footnotes should be ordered numerically, so "[10][5]" needs fixing. Done
Cheers, Mattythewhite (talk) 10:14, 15 August 2008 (UTC)Reply[reply]
- More comments
- "...in the clubs 100..." - apostrophe needed in "clubs". Done
- "...of them includes current..." - I'd change "includes" to "including". Done
Nearly there now.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 23:32, 15 August 2008 (UTC)
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