Commenting on lede alone
- Since he isn't the captain for T20I team you could add a note saying that he leads only the Test and ODI side
- In the infobox you've linked everything except Australia
- For the quote attribution must be given to the author rather than ESPNcricinfo
- Period should come within quotation as it's a part of the quoted material; also suggest you to include "Clarke" with in the quote
- "one of their cricketers of the Year" -> why is "Y" in Year capitalised
- the highest score in an innings -> the highest individual score in an innings
- between the teams is unnecessary
- seventh Test captain, test repetitive
- Not sure, given your first comment. No harm in clarifying it. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:20, 20 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- You've already clarified saying that it was the 100th Test hosted by SCG —Vensatry (Ping me) 02:33, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Not sure you saw this comment —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:16, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Well I have to say the facts are separate, one is about the number of tests at the SCG, the other is about captains scoring triple centuries. I see no issue here. Better to be verbose than ambiguous. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:19, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Linking cricket ground is unnecessary to me, though others might have different views
- including eight at venues outside Australia -> including nine at venues outside Australia
- Ref #14 doesn't really support the claim
- Ref 15 does. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:24, 20 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- "He has scored Test centuries at thirteen cricket grounds" is neither supported by any of the refs. —Vensatry (Ping me) 13:24, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Are you cryptically trying to tell me it should be 15? The number maybe wrong but the sources certainly back up the quote. Number fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:29, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref #15 is for his "nine at venues outside Australia". Don't know what's the use of ref #14 (It links to centuries at home venues) —Vensatry (Ping me) 14:05, 26 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Which one references 15 grounds? What's the use of ref #14. You get to understand what am saying? —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:15, 26 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Combined, they reference the "15 grounds". Add 9 away (ref 15) and 6 at home (ref 14). Alternatively, remove the references altogether from the lead and leave it to the list itself which has individual references for matches that are home/away. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:17, 26 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Ahhh, that will confuse the reader for sure. I'd suggest you to go for specific refs. for all claims or remove them as they can be verified in the table —Vensatry (Ping me) 10:06, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Well I didn't think it was that confusing, a home list and an away list. But never mind, I've replaced it with a single source. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:15, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- His highest ODI score is 130 runs against India at the M. Chinnaswamy Stadium, in 2002 -> His highest ODI score is 130 runs against India at the M. Chinnaswamy Stadium, in 2007
- The last sentence needs to be rephrased
—Vensatry (Ping me) 11:01, 20 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the comments Vensatry. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:32, 20 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
More comments (re-visit)
- I don't think the No. column needs to be sorted, as we have a separate column for date
- I don't see this as a huge deal, but I'll unsort it just for you. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:41, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- It was just a suggestion. You may apply sortability for that column too —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:14, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- It's fine. It's done. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:16, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry to disagree, but I do believe the No. column should be sortable. I was fiddling with the columns and wanted to return to it's original state, but could not. I later realized they were chronological, but I can see others having the same issue. Mattximus (talk) 17:02, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- He has never scored a Test century batting at no. 4
- Inn. for his second Test hundred is 2
- The values of Inn. and Pos. for his second ODI ton are interchanged
—Vensatry (Ping me) 02:33, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks again Vensatry, good spots all of them. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:41, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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