Here's a few comments to get the ball rolling. (see what I did there?)

• There's one picture of him at Commons (File:Mohammad Azharuddin Sangeeta Bijlani.jpg) - different versions of this picture have been used on his article and a few others.
  • Will try to upload a new version of the file before using it here —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 06:13, 14 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "He was the first cricketer to cross 9000 runs..." → "He was the first cricketer to score 9000 runs..."
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "...remained the leading run-scorer until retirement." → "remained the leading run-scorer until his retirement."
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Azharuddin was named the Indian Cricket "Cricketer of the Year"..." → "Azharuddin was named by Indian Cricket as their "Cricketer of the Year"..."
  • Doesn't make a big difference. The next sentence follows the same pattern —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Azharuddin made his Test and ODI debuts during the 1984–85 tour of England." → "Azharuddin made his Test and ODI debuts during England's 1984–85 tour of India."
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Reaching his century in 62 balls,[15] In a match winning effort, Azharuddin set the record for the fastest century in the format.[16]" → "Reaching his century in 62 balls,[15] Azharuddin set the record for the fastest century in the format.

[16]" (it also looks as though these two references should be swapped around - #15 is the list of fastest centuries and #16 is the match scorecard)

• Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "His highest score of 153 not out was achieved in the later part of his career against Zimbabwe; he was involved in a record partnership of 275 with Ajay Jadeja." → "His highest score of 153 not out was achieved in the later part of his career in a match against Zimbabwe, during which he was involved in a record partnership of 275 with Ajay Jadeja."
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Just a general query (and I may be wrong on this, so bear with me!) - in the two tables, why is the Score column rendered as the row header? Would it be better to have the century number as the header instead?
  • Similar lists are modeled like that —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Reference #4 has a hyphen in the title, please change this to an endash.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:07, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers, ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 14:33, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nice job. Just a couple more minor points:

• "As of March 2013..." - consider replacing the month and year with ((Monthyear)); this should update this statement automatically and save anyone the job of having to manually update it every month.
• "Azharuddin photographed in 2009." → "Azharuddin photographed in 2009" (as the caption is a short 'noun phrase' description rather than a full sentence, the full stop (period) isn't needed here, according to WP:CAPTION)
  • Replaced with a complete sentence —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 13:47, 14 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Azharuddin scored his maiden Test century at the Eden Gardens and went on to score four more centuries till the end of his career at this venue." → "Azharuddin scored his maiden Test century at Eden Gardens and went on to score four more centuries at this venue."
• "...when Sachin Tendulkar overtook the feat" → "...when Sachin Tendulkar overtook his total" (or perhaps "...when Sachin Tendulkar overtook his score")

Cheers, ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 12:36, 14 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• All done and thanks for your comments —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 13:47, 14 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Link batsman first time.
• "9000" vs "8,648" comma consistency!
• Should link Test cricket first time of the use of "Test".
• " a century of 74 balls " perhaps "a century from 74 deliveries"?
• " has the fifth highest number" you said "joint-fifth" in the lead.
• "after his debut" his ODI debut?
  • Given the fact that he made both his Test and ODI debuts during the same tour, I don't think it's needed. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:38, 24 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Test 19 sorts out of order when sorting by score.
• If you're using, surely you should be using Vadodara?
• Retrieved dates should have consistent format.

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:35, 23 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed all —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:38, 24 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• In Tests, he made centuries against all nations except the West Indies and Zimbabwe. At that time!! Not against Bangladesh so the sentence should be rephrased.
  • Added a note for clarity —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 20:33, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• The following year, he scored 108 in a man-of-the-match... → Which year?? You've not mentioned the year in the previous sentence.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 20:33, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Reaching his century in 62 balls,[15] Azharuddin set the record for the fastest century in the format.[16] → Which is definitely not a record at the moment, so it should be mentioned.
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 20:33, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• ''later part of his career in a match against Zimbabwe.. → No need of in a match, I guess
  • Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 20:33, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Link BBC and ESPNcricnfo at 1st instances. Zia Khan 01:13, 2 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • BBC is already linked. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 20:33, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • BBC is linked twice! Zia Khan 16:20, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
      • Pardon me, but I could not find it. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 19:00, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
        • Why are publishers for refs 1 and 2 different? Zia Khan 19:20, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]