- Bear with me as I'm not the most seasoned reviewer but after been taken through the wringer of FLc reviews for some months now I think I got the hand of it and the criterias and it's time to give back.
- Isn't it "the Guitar Hero series for the Nintendo DS portable console" and not "to"?
- The lead contains no sources at all, which would be okay if it mainly contained information repeated later on, but practically none of the information is repeated, which means that there should be some sources on the lead.
- I'm a bit confused by the three different table formats, one has "master recording" the others do not? the year, artist and song column are not the same width, nor are any other repeated column types. For instance while the "Master recording" column is missing in the next two lists they still have 6 columns and could easily be the same size.
- in the lead text for the "Guitar Hero: On Tour setlist" table you mention 20 were exclusive and 6 were used through out - no indication of which were unique? No source on where this information comes from? And technically there are not 26 tracks but 31 all together (English version + 5 "International replacements").
- No key for the table explaining what "Year" means, is that the original recording year? what if it's not a master cut is the year then something else? I have not reviewed lists of this type before so I don't know if it's standard to not have a key here?
- What does "tier" mean in this context?
- Should "Ça" sort as "Ca"??
- The text does not mention why "JPN" is included in the "primarily English speaking" version?
- It's not until "Guitar Hero On Tour: Decades setlist" that I realize that if "master recording = no" then it's a cover version, it would have been helpful to include in the section where it's actually relevant.
- "The setlists are different for the North American, UK
release and European releases"
- N/A is not explained until the second list, yet used in the first?
- Why is the third list differently formattet than the other two? First two use "N/A" and white when they're not in the version, while this useds yes/no and color indicators, it's not consistent.
- I cannot find a source for the "European" and "UK/Australian" versions of the Guitar Hero On Tour: Decades setlist??
- Same with the "Guitar Hero On Tour: Modern Hits setlist", no sources for the European and UK versions.
- On the lede, while its true none of the information is repeated, it's also the case little of the lead is filled with facts that I would consider disputed or otherwise explained in the actual series article. I could add references, but I don't be believe it necessary.
- A general note on the tables - I did first fix the column widths to be consistent. That said, because of the three games have a different way of presenting the songs, the differences are unfortunatley obvious. Only the first game has master vs cover recordings (the other two are only master) so this column is only needed there. Decades has diffferent tiering for different region releases, but no master recordings, so it is better presented as it is. The Modern hits table is yet again different because now the tiering is gone (a song is either in the game or not) so the yes/no templates work best here, but that does lead to the color differences.
- The "Ça" is how the song track is spelled (it's a French group, so...)
- on some of the OR-iffy spots - these numbers are calculated simply by looking at the various lists. It is synthesis, but it is not a stretch from valid sourcing.
- All other points should be addressed. --MASEM (t) 06:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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