The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 07:48, 30 January 2013 [1].

Neftchi Baku PFC in European football[edit]

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Nominator(s): --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have improved this article considerably and I think it meets all FL-criteria. I am nominating this for featured list as I believe, that after quite some work, it's ready for FL Status. --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose not ready, try a peer review

Lead is too long, try four paras max.
Why is the list title used in prose to start the lead?
Don't bold links in the lead.
"5 ... 5 ... one" -> WP:MOSNUM says be consistent, either words or numbers in a sentence for comparable items.
The 5 and 5 and 5 and 1 and 1 and 1 add up to 13, not 12, you need to explain the difference.
"The club has an excellent European cup record," POV.
Overlinking, e.g. Baku.
"In 2012-13, Group stage" as a title, not good and if you use year ranges, comply with WP:DASH.
Why isn't the list in chronological order?
" 30-08-2012." isn't a date format you should use in prose, captions or otherwise.
The right-hand table isn't explained at all.
Table doesn't comply with WP:ACCESS most notably MOS:DTT.
Season years were delineated in the lead with an en-dash, in the table with a slash. Be consistent.
Need to check the "result" graphics are readable by screen readers. Not sure they're necessary, would suggest an aggregate score and an explicit Won/Drawn/Lost result.
Lots of the Key is irrelevant not used.
"Participations" not even sure if this is English.
Refs need consistent formats, access dates, correct publication dates, publishers etc.

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:34, 18 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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