This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to see what areas I should be looking to expand it in or otherwise improve the article. I'm at a loss of where to go next, and since I've created it, it has been rather stale.
Thanks, MBisanz talk 16:44, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
- Galleries are discouraged on article pages. Done
- Expansion ideas:
- Add information about notable events that have taken place here.
- Design.
- The grounds around it.
- Are there any book sources on the center?
- External links section should come after the references section. Done
- "It was built by Xerox in 1974 under the name of Xerox Document University (also known as the Xerox Conference Center)[3][2]" I would put inline cite 2 before inline cite 3. Done
Dabomb87 (talk) 23:21, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]