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= June 22 =

== 07:21, 22 June 2024 review of submission by Belleandpoppy ==
((Lafc|username=Belleandpoppy|ts=07:21, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:Karen_Annette_O'Brien))
When will my wikipage be reviewed?  Its been a while since i submitted it. [[User:Belleandpoppy|Belleandpoppy]] ([[User talk:Belleandpoppy|talk]]) 07:21, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:The relevant criteria are [[WP:NAUTHOR]] and [[WP:NACADEMIC]] you need to establish how she passes one of them and  "she lives in the beautiful beach side village of Bundeena" is hardly neutral tone. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 07:58, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Belleandpoppy|Belleandpoppy]], you'll notice that at the top of your draft there's a notice reading in part "This may take 4 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 3,321 pending submissions waiting for review." Often drafts that are an easy "accept" or "decline" get reviewed quickly, because it doesn't take long to look through them. So your best bet for shortening the wait time is to make it an easy review.
:Having a look at your draft, I would strongly suggest you spend some of the waiting time looking for some better sources. You can keep editing it while it waits for review, and the reviewer will just look at what's on the draft when they first see it. Remember that you need sources that have [[WP:42|significant coverage of the subject, in reliable sources, that are independent of the subject]] in order to establish that O'Brien is [[WP:NOTABLE|notable by Wikipedia standards]]. With that in mind, looking over your current references, here is how they measure up in terms of proving notability:
:-anything hosted by an institution she is affiliated with cannot be used; it's not independent (refs 1, 2)
:-anything written by O'Brien cannot be used; it's not independent (refs 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)
:-interviews cannot be used for notability, only to establish basic uncontroversial facts about her (for example her birthday, partner's name, etc) (ref 5)
:-references must contain significant coverage of the subject, as in the article/book/etc must be about ''her'' and not a petition (ref 5)
:-articles citing work she has written, but not speaking about her as a person, cannot be used (ref 9)
:Ref 10 might be usable, but it's behind a paywall so I can't review it. Hopefully you can compare it with the others and get an idea of whether it will be a solid reference.
:In summary, you might have one reference that can be used; you need at least three that meet the [[WP:42|golden rule]] to have any chance of proving notability. As an Aussie myself, I am always thrilled when people want to add articles about fellow Aussies, so please do not take this as an effort to dissuade you. I want you to have the opportunity to find the kind of sources Wikipedia needs so that this article can be published. If you find more sources and aren't sure whether they're reliable, you're welcome to comment on my talk page and we'll have a look together. Good luck with your search and happy editing! [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 05:10, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 10:24, 22 June 2024 review of submission by 86.169.132.52 ==
((Lafc|username=86.169.132.52|ts=10:24, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:Harry_Lister_Riley))
I'm hoping you can help me with this article on chemsit Harry Lister Riley.
The person here I have tried to add a biographical page for here, linking to your existing article on the chemical process "Riley Oxidation" named after him died in the 1980s before the days of wide use of the internet and consequently there is not much of a digital footprint for him.  The details I have found come in part from an entry in a 1972 edition of Who's Who, and earlier local Yorkshire newspaper cuttings I've got hard copies of from the 1940s and 50s. Is there any way to reference these? [[Special:Contributions/86.169.132.52|86.169.132.52]] ([[User talk:86.169.132.52|talk]]) 10:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:Yes, sources do not need to be online. Please see [[WP:REFB|referencing for beginners]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 11:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:Note that we need a minimum amount of information for offline cites, and we use specific templates for citing them:
:*Periodicals use ((tlx|cite news)) or ((tlx|cite magazine)) and require the publication name, edition (e.g. 1 Jan 1924), article name, article [[byline]], and the pages the article is on.
:*Books use ((tlx|cite book)) and require the title, author, publisher, year of publication, page(s) being cited, and either the [[ISBN]] or the [[WorldCat|OCLC#]].
:—[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 16:49, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

== 14:43, 22 June 2024 review of submission by NDLaity89 ==
((Lafc|username=NDLaity89|ts=14:43, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:AfricTivistes))
how to find a version of wikipedia in french ? [[User:NDLaity89|NDLaity89]] ([[User talk:NDLaity89|talk]]) 14:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:((u|NDLaity89)) go to https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikip%C3%A9dia:Accueil_principal [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:55, 22 June 2024 review of submission by Rainbobrain ==
((Lafc|username=Rainbobrain|ts=16:55, 22 June 2024|draft=User:Rainbobrain/sandbox))
Hi, I was wondering why my submission was denied. The company I own and run is the source for the information. The company is explicitly dedicated to the study of this phenomenon.  [[User:Rainbobrain|Rainbobrain]] ([[User talk:Rainbobrain|talk]]) 16:55, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Rainbobrain|Rainbobrain]]: this draft was declined for the reason given in the decline notice, namely that it is not referenced. You may well be an expert in this subject matter, but even then, we don't want to hear what you know about it, but rather what reliable published sources have said. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:((ping|Rainbobrain)) I would also [[WP:Contentious topics|not edit in]] [[WP:Requests for arbitration/Pseudoscience#Contentious topic designation|this topic]] as a new editor. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Rainbobrain|Rainbobrain]] what do you mean by ((Tq|"The company I own and run is the source for the information."))? <br />
:That statement clearly confirms [[WP:COI]] which you haven't yet declared. Please go through [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:UPE]]. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 18:05, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
:((HD/WINI)) [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:02, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 17:21, 22 June 2024 review of submission by 118.179.205.98 ==
((Lafc|username=118.179.205.98|ts=17:21, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:Shamim_Hossen))
He is an important Bangladeshi journalist, lyricist, dramatist and actor about whom this article is written. People constantly want to know information about Shamim Hossen. So I want Wikipedia to have an article about this person. I want your advice in this regard. thank you

 [[Special:Contributions/118.179.205.98|118.179.205.98]] ([[User talk:118.179.205.98|talk]]) 17:21, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:I can't assess almost all of your sources (language barrier). I will, however, note that anything he writes, says, films, commissions, semaphores, interpretive-dances, etc. is useless for notability ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:33, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
* Well, I have moved on the draft for a quick check. But what I have found is the subject is not even borderline notable. You have just done [[WP:REFBOMB]] on the draft with same ref in multiple claims that failed [[WP:V|verified claims]]. Kindly go through [[WP:NMUSIC]] and [[WP:REFB]]. I am well aware about Bangladeshi media. Most of them use to publish with payment. Should I provide evidence? For your check here is one [https://weeklyblitz.net/advertisement-tariff/|?] and check for the paid article section. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 17:48, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

== 18:34, 22 June 2024 review of submission by Kharavela Deva ==
((Lafc|username=Kharavela Deva|ts=18:34, 22 June 2024|draft=Reference))
To perfect the references area by using variable and reliable sources. [[User:Kharavela Deva|Kharavela Deva]] ([[User talk:Kharavela Deva|talk]]) 18:34, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:'''Courtesy link:''' [[Draft:Anuvadi Svara]] [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 05:13, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 19:37, 22 June 2024 review of submission by Uglykidboe ==
((Lafc|username=Uglykidboe|ts=19:37, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:Llblgen_Pro))
Hi I am new to Wikipedia, and started to edit recently. 
I was asked to replace my references with independent reliable references in my draft. I believe I did that, can you please verify my draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Llblgen_Pro
Appreciate the help
Thanks  [[User:Uglykidboe|Uglykidboe]] ([[User talk:Uglykidboe|talk]]) 19:37, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Uglykidboe|Uglykidboe]]: if you believe you have sufficiently addressed the reasons for the decline, then please resubmit your draft, that way you will get another review. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:58, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 19:47, 22 June 2024 review of submission by Faisalpkavil ==
((Lafc|username=Faisalpkavil|ts=19:47, 22 June 2024|draft=Draft:Faisal_Kavil))
Kindly inform what I need to do to accept this submission.  [[User:Faisalpkavil|Faisalpkavil]] ([[User talk:Faisalpkavil|talk]]) 19:47, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

:Left 'm my standard deletion notice. [[User:Deepfriedokra|&#45;-  Deepfriedokra]] ([[User talk:Deepfriedokra|talk]]) 20:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

= June 23 =

== 00:30, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Belleandpoppy ==
((Lafc|username=Belleandpoppy|ts=00:30, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Karen_Annette_O'Brien))
I asked recently when my wikipage would be reviewed as it has been two months since I submitted it.  I would be grateful to receive a response to this question. [[User:Belleandpoppy|Belleandpoppy]] ([[User talk:Belleandpoppy|talk]]) 00:30, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Belleandpoppy|Belleandpoppy]]: for the record, you most recently submitted this draft on May 13; it is now June 23. As it says on top of the page, reviews ((tq|may take 4 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 3,310 pending submissions)). It is impossible to answer your question, as this depends on when a reviewer picks up your draft – could be today, could be weeks from now. Please be patient. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:55, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 01:00, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Rijomamo ==
((Lafc|username=Rijomamo|ts=01:00, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Ricardo_Jose_Martinez))
Dear Wikipedia team,
I am writing to inform you that my recent article submission to Articles for Creation has undergone a review process. Unfortunately, I regret to inform you that it has not been accepted at this time. The reason provided by your team for the rejection was as follows: "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources."
I would like to inquire about the specific requirements for reliable sources that are necessary for the acceptance of my article. I have included inline citations with links to the official websites of the relevant companies, where the information in the article is stated. Additionally, I have provided links to websites that showcase interviews with the person the article is about, and other relevant sources. Despite these efforts, it appears that the article still fell short of meeting the necessary criteria.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide further guidance on what exactly needs to be addressed in order to meet the requirements for article acceptance. I am eager to make the necessary revisions and resubmit the article for reconsideration.
Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,

Rijomamo

P.S. What criteria are used for acceptance? Are there alternative sources that I can use? Any suggestions to improve source credibility?
 [[User:Rijomamo|Rijomamo]] ([[User talk:Rijomamo|talk]]) 01:00, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Rijomamo)) '''''Every''''' claim that could '''''potentially''''' be challenged by a reasonable person '''''MUST''''' be cited to an [[WP:Reliable sources|in-depth, independent-of-the-subject source]] that [[WP:Verifiability|explicitly corroborates the claim]] or, failing that, removed wholesale. [[WP:Biographies of living persons|This is not negotiable]], and slapping a source at the end of the paragraph is not enough. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:41, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::((ping|Rijomamo)) And after actually scanning the draft rather than skimming it, I have tagged it for [[WP:Criteria for speedy deletion|speedy deletion]] as [[WP:SPAM|blatant promotion]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 06:51, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:Hi @[[User:Rijomamo|Rijomamo]]! You might not have spotted it, but the words 'reliable sources' in your decline notices are a link to a lot of information about the kind of sources you're looking for. We often sum it up as [[WP:42]] or [[WP:42|the golden rule]]: you are looking for '''significant coverage''' in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent of the topic'''. You are trying to establish that this person is [[WP:NOTABLE|notable by Wikipedia's standards]], which don't always match what you might think makes someone notable. So let's have a quick look at your current draft.
:First, you'll need to learn about how to do citations. Once you've found some reliable sources, read through [[WP:REFB|referencing for beginners]] before adding any to your draft. You must get this right so that people reading the article can verify your sources and be sure that you're accurately recording what the sources say. Since you are writing about a living person, you also '''must''' read [[WP:BLP]], the rules for articles on living people. If you don't follow those rules, parts or all of your article will be removed very quickly. 
:Okay, now we're finally onto the sources! Here's what you have:
:-Refs 1, 2, 7, 10, 11 are promotional and appear to have been written by Martinez or his publicity team, so they cannot be used (not independent)
:-Ref 3 is a list of credits, which cannot be used (not significant coverage)
:-Ref 4 is an interview, which cannot be used for notability; you can only use interviews for basic biographical facts like his birthday (not independent). This citation is also completely wrong, because at the moment it's saying that Martinez wrote the article, which he did not.
:-Refs 5, 6 are images of diplomas, which cannot be used (not significant coverage and probably not something you want everyone on the internet to see in any case)
:-Ref 8 is a list of people, which cannot be used (not significant coverage)
:-Ref 9 doesn't mention Martinez at all
:-All the rest of the references are pages about other artists altogether, and are absolutely useless
:Unfortunately, you have no reliable sources. 
:As a last note, it seems to me that your username suggests you might be '''Ri'''cardo '''Jo'''se '''Ma'''rtinez '''Mo'''ra. If that is in fact you, I'd like to direct you towards [[WP:AUTOBIO|the autobiography policy]]. Please read it carefully, and also read through [[WP:PROUD|why an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. You'll also want to read the [[WP:COIE|conflict of interest]] page and follow the instructions to declare your conflict of interest.
:I hope that's helped you; if you choose to continue with either this draft or joining the wider Wikipedia community to work on other articles, I wish you happy editing! [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:52, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::Hi StartGrammarTime, thank you for your response. I'm clarifying some point though. I understand everything you said regarding the first part of your reply; however, there are a couple of things you should know in order to have a clearer picture.
::Ref.4 I think you're mistaken. At any moment it's sayin "Martinez wrote the article". It is literally an interview supporting the claims.
::Ref 5 and 6 are specific support of the claim they come from. The only way is to show the diplomas from the website the were originated.
::Ref.8 isn't just a list of people, Ricardo is in that list but there is no direct link to him, rather it has to be scrolled and search but he is in there, again, as a support of the claim of sponsorship from that brand which is very relevant in the musician's world.
::Ref.9 Effectively doesn't mention the person because it doesn't have an artist section. However, it's mentioned within the Hartke citation that Hartke owns Michael Kelly and in fact, in the Hartke citation it says specifically that the person uses "Michael Kelly Basses".
::The ref. 10 and 11 in fact were written by the companies referring in the citation and rather than promotion, the citations are intended to support the statement where they come from which is the fact that those companies promote the person and that's significant achievement in the musician's world (I don't know if you are aware of that).
::The other references were intended to support the fact that Ricardo indeed participated in those recordings that certainly were recipients of the awards it's stated they won.
::The rest of the information you pin point is accurate regarding the articles and section you suggest to read. I just pointed out these points specifically that I think you should know. [[User:Rijomamo|Rijomamo]] ([[User talk:Rijomamo|talk]]) 07:32, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::((ping|Rijomamo)) My responces:
:::*Ref 4: [[WP:PRIMARY|Anything a subject says, writes, films, commissions, semaphores, interpretive-dances, etc. is useless for both notability and for any biographical claim that can be contested.]] Interviews fall into the "Whatever a subject says" territory.
:::*Ref 5/6: We don't cite diplomas full stop ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]/[[WP:PRIMARY|gov't document]]). If you want to verify those claims you need a newspaper article or biography that explicitly says so.
:::*Ref 8: [[WP:MILL|Sponsorships mean nothing for notability]]. Any musician of some renown is going to have some form of sponsorship, even if it's just [[Mass Effect 2|"This is my favourite <foo> in town"]].
:::*Ref 9: A distinction without a difference. [[WP:RSCONTEXT|A source that does not so much as mention a subject cannot be used as a source for that subject.]]
:::*Ref 10/11: There's two problems with that. One, [[WP:SPS|we don't cite PR]] (no editorial oversight/connexion to subject). Two, anything written by any entity the subject is professionally associated/involved with is tantamount to being written by the subject themselves.
:::*The other references: Unless he is ''specifically'' listed on the awards these are all effectively notability-by-osmosis claims - essentially, that he's notable because he's attached himself to another notable entity. [[WP:WAX|We do not accept that argument]]; you need to prove he is notable ''regardless of his collaborations.''
:::—[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 08:27, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 04:08, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Spongebobguy2 ==
((Lafc|username=Spongebobguy2|ts=04:08, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:List_of_unofficial_Five_Nights_at_Freddy's_media))
I tried to style it after the "List of unofficial Sonic the Hedgehog media" but the fail the submission I've made sure to use sources known as reliable by wikipidia and picked well known fan media am I still to broad with my sources and selection? [[User:Spongebobguy2|Spongebobguy2]] ([[User talk:Spongebobguy2|talk]]) 04:08, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:The page did not look like it was finished when it was declined and it still has sentences that do not have punctuation. Everything on the list needs to have a source. [[User:Reconrabbit|<span style="color:#6BAD2D">Recon</span>]][[User talk:Reconrabbit|<span style="color:#2F3833">rabbit</span>]] 17:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 05:22, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Akachukwu Vitalis ==
((Lafc|username=Akachukwu Vitalis|ts=05:22, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Agwa))
I am seeking guidance in ensuring that the article is formatted correctly and that all sources are cited accurately. [[User:Akachukwu Vitalis|Akachukwu Vitalis]] ([[User talk:Akachukwu Vitalis|talk]]) 05:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Akachukwu Vitalis|Akachukwu Vitalis]] please read [[WP:CITE]]. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 07:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 07:47, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Rullanjar ==
((Lafc|username=Rullanjar|ts=07:47, 23 June 2024|draft=User:Rullanjar/sandbox))
The article I submitted is the same one I wrote for another website (medium.com). Do I still need to revise it? [[User:Rullanjar|Rullanjar]] ([[User talk:Rullanjar|talk]]) 07:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:((u|Rullanjar)) Fixed your link to go to the correct location. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 07:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:You cannot simply copy word for word text that you wrote elsewhere to here, this is a copyright violation(even if you are the writer) unless the text was explicitly released with a licence allowing its reuse by anyone for any purpose with attribution(which your text was not).  Original text is preferred anyway- text that summarizes what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage choose on their own to say about the (in this case) musical group, showing how it meets the [[WP:BAND|special Wikipedia definition of a notable musical group]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:02, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::(Or, in simpler terms, we can't use text that was published under all-rights-reserved standard copyright because it is fundamentally incompatible with Wikipedia's [[WP:CC-BY-SA|copyright]] [[WP:FDL|licencing]].) —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 09:00, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 12:08, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Nakhungu Mukopi ==
((Lafc|username=Nakhungu Mukopi|ts=12:08, 23 June 2024|draft=User:Nakhungu_Mukopi/sandbox))
i need reasons why my article was rejected for submission
 [[User:Nakhungu Mukopi|Nakhungu Mukopi]] ([[User talk:Nakhungu Mukopi|talk]]) 12:08, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Nakhungu Mukopi|Nakhungu Mukopi]] because it is pure [[WP:SPAM|spam]] and will be deleted soon. <span style="font-family:monospace;">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]]) 12:09, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::what do you mean it's pure spam? [[User:Nakhungu Mukopi|Nakhungu Mukopi]] ([[User talk:Nakhungu Mukopi|talk]]) 12:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::The submission is littered with promotional text like ((tq|Committed to developing local talent, she has a keen eye for recognizing and fostering potential to benefit her business empire and the Kenyan economy.)) <span style="font-family:monospace;">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]]) 12:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::::Thank you for your feedback , so what would you recommend instead for it to be published? [[User:Nakhungu Mukopi|Nakhungu Mukopi]] ([[User talk:Nakhungu Mukopi|talk]]) 12:19, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::@[[User:Nakhungu Mukopi|Nakhungu Mukopi]]: this draft will not be published, it will be deleted. If you wish to write a new draft about this person, you need to do so by summarising (in your own words, but without any additional 'spin' or embellishment) what independent and reliable secondary sources have said about her. This draft cites no such sources (or in fact, any sources at all). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:21, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::# Find places where people with no connection with the subject have chosen, off their own bat, to write about the subject at some length and been published in reliable places. Ignore anything written, published or commissioned by the subject or their associates, and anything based on an interview or press release. 
:::::# Forget everything you personally know about the subject. 
:::::# Write a summary of what those sources say about the subject, citing the sources appropriately.
:::::[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:17, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 13:20, 23 June 2024 review of submission by TheNuggeteer ==
((Lafc|username=TheNuggeteer|ts=13:20, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Bigkis Pinoy Movement))
I got my draft rejected for non-notability, but I dont think this is non-notable/non-reliable, is this topic reliable/notable or not? [[User:TheNuggeteer|TheNuggeteer]] ([[User talk:TheNuggeteer|talk]]) 13:20, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:Your draft has not been ''rejected'' (which would mean the end of the process) but ''declined''. The decline notice is not saying that the party is non-notable, but says that the draft does not yet cite adequate sources to establish that it is [[WP:NORG|notable]] ''in the special sense used by Wikipedia''. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 13:24, 23 June 2024 review of submission by 5.62.145.144 ==
((Lafc|username=5.62.145.144|ts=13:24, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Ayanish_Province_Of_Ayan))
shut it you have no advice over me [[Special:Contributions/5.62.145.144|5.62.145.144]] ([[User talk:5.62.145.144|talk]]) 13:24, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:So why did you ask a question here? <span style="font-family:monospace;">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]]) 13:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::I AM NOT SHAPED LIKE A FERRIS WHEEL
::-CaseOh [[Special:Contributions/5.62.145.144|5.62.145.144]] ([[User talk:5.62.145.144|talk]]) 13:37, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Is this neccessary? [[User:TheNuggeteer|TheNuggeteer]] ([[User talk:TheNuggeteer|talk]]) 13:38, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:Huh? [[User:TheNuggeteer|TheNuggeteer]] ([[User talk:TheNuggeteer|talk]]) 13:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::idk lol. just my C O U N T R Y [[Special:Contributions/5.62.145.144|5.62.145.144]] ([[User talk:5.62.145.144|talk]]) 13:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Sadly, as a geofiction guru myself, I've long learned the hard way too: Worldbuilding is frowned upon across WP (even in userspace); see also [[WP:FAKEARTICLE]]. [[WP:Alternative outlets|There are different other avenues]] to discuss/showcase your creation--[https://reddit.com/r/worldbuilding Reddit], [https://worldbuilding.stackexchange.com StackExchange], [https://cartographersguild.com Cartographers' Guild], your own blog (if you do have one), maybe [https://meta.miraheze.org/wiki/Special:RequestWiki a Miraheze wiki of your own] (like I already have)...the list goes on. Should you come back in July (when your block expires), we encourage you to take up editing pages on real-world places and subjects, and creating material that adheres to [[WP:Notability]] and [[WP:Reliable sources]]. --[[User:Slgrandson|Slgrandson]] <small>([[User talk:Slgrandson|How's my]] [[Special:Contributions/Slgrandson|egg-throwing coleslaw?]])</small> 02:09, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 14:31, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Pentpark2019 ==
((Lafc|username=Pentpark2019|ts=14:31, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Arthur_L_Aidala))
Hello, this page was recently rejected. I was curious to get more thoughts on the sources I had provided on the talk page [[Draft talk:Arthur L Aidala]]. Any help is appreciated. I have already declared my conflict of interest at my user page.  [[User:Pentpark2019|Pentpark2019]] ([[User talk:Pentpark2019|talk]]) 14:31, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:((u|Pentpark2019)) The draft was declined, not rejected. Rejected has a specific meaning in the draft submission process, that a draft may not be resubmitted.  Declined means that a draft may be resubmitted.
:The draft does little more than document his media appearances.  A Wikipedia article about a person must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] '''with significant coverage''' have chosen on their own to say about the person, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. "Significant coverage" is that which goes beyond merely documenting facts about the person, it goes into detail about what the source says is important/significant/influential about the person.  Has Mr. Aidala had a particular influence on the legal field?  Created new legal theories or strategies?  Argued notable cases before SCOTUS?  Things like that. Merely appearing on TV does not confer notability. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:What is the general nature of your conflict of interest? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:12, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:37, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Sudheer Mattaparthi ==
((Lafc|username=Sudheer Mattaparthi|ts=16:37, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Vellachintalagudem))
My Wikipedia article(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vellachintalagudem) was not approved. Could you please tell me what changes are needed to get it approved? [[User:Sudheer Mattaparthi|Sudheer Mattaparthi]] ([[User talk:Sudheer Mattaparthi|talk]]) 16:37, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:You need to provide sources for ALL the information not just the census figures. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 16:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
::Using "((tq|beautiful village))" in the ''very first sentence alone'' won't cut it per [[WP:PUFFERY]], either. --[[User:Slgrandson|Slgrandson]] <small>([[User talk:Slgrandson|How's my]] [[Special:Contributions/Slgrandson|egg-throwing coleslaw?]])</small> 00:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 20:15, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Nicholas Cusanus ==
((Lafc|username=Nicholas Cusanus|ts=20:15, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Stephan van Erp))
I am trying to create a new article, but it keeps on being rejected. The last time because of unreliable sources. The page (on a university professor) contains sources and references to university and publisher’s pages, so I am not quite sure what the reviewer could possible mean, because it was not specified. How to move forward? Every time I change something, I have to wait for months for a new version to be reviewed. [[User:Nicholas Cusanus|Nicholas Cusanus]] ([[User talk:Nicholas Cusanus|talk]]) 20:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:I'm afraid that you are having a similar experience to most of the hundreds and hundreds and hundreds of new editors who plunge straight away into the challenging task of trying to create a new article, before they have spent a few weeks or months learning how Wikipedia works. 
:My advice is always to not even think of creating a new article until you have direct practical experience of the meaning and application of fundamental principles such as [[WP:verifiability|verifiability]], [[WP:42|reliable independent sources]], [[WP:neutral point of view|neutral point of view]], and [[WP:notability|notability]]. 
:What I will say is that ((HD/WINI)) [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:30, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
:Hi @[[User:Nicholas Cusanus|Nicholas Cusanus]], let's see if I can help make sense of it. You're writing about an academic, so you need to establish notability (in Wikipedia terms) via either [[WP:NPROF]] or [[WP:GNG]]. 
:I'm going to assume you're attempting to use NPROF, because that's usually much easier for an academic than GNG. There's a list of criteria on the NPROF page, and interestingly, I see that one of them (#5) states "The person has held a distinguished professor appointment at a major institution of higher education and research, a named chair appointment that indicates a comparable level of achievement, or an equivalent position in countries where named chairs are uncommon". In your draft, I also see what appear to be two named chairs, and as an Australian I think it could be argued that ACU is indeed a major institution of higher education and research. Maybe I'm completely wrong, but that does make me think he might meet criteria 5, and that your only problem here is finding non-primary sources. But then it does seem like secondary sources usually aren't interested in people becoming chairs (fair enough, it's not super exciting news). 
:It might be worthwhile either waiting to see if someone with more experience comes along to help answer your question here, making a comment on your draft that you're relying on NPROF criteria 5, or politely asking the most recent reviewer whether they could clarify the problem with sourcing. [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 04:47, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 23:50, 23 June 2024 review of submission by Carolynpethick ==
((Lafc|username=Carolynpethick|ts=23:50, 23 June 2024|draft=Draft:Carolyn_Pethick))
I need assistance for Carolyn's Wikipedia page [[User:Carolynpethick|Carolynpethick]] ([[User talk:Carolynpethick|talk]]) 23:50, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

:To refrain @[[User:CanonNi|CanonNi]]'s AFC-rejection summary: ((tq|"Promotional [[WP:AUTOBIO|autobiography]]. 3 previous declines.")) WP offers userpages that you can use to express yourself in the context of your activity/goals/pursuits hereon. Remember, taking it to article or draft space is highly discouraged; see also [[WP:COI]] (which you must have disclosed beforehand). --[[User:Slgrandson|Slgrandson]] <small>([[User talk:Slgrandson|How's my]] [[Special:Contributions/Slgrandson|egg-throwing coleslaw?]])</small> 00:02, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

= June 24 =

== 00:49, 24 June 2024 review of submission by CG214 ==
((Lafc|username=CG214|ts=00:49, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Hell_Is_a_World_Without_You))
Hey there, just wanted to learn more about why this draft article was denied?

According to the article "Wikipedia:Notability (books)":

"A book is '''presumed notable, and to generally merit an article''', if it verifiably meets through reliable sources, '''one or more of the following criteria''': The book has been the subject of two or more non-trivial published works appearing in sources that are independent of the book itself. This can include published works in all forms, such as newspaper '''articles''', other books, television documentaries, '''bestseller lists''', and '''reviews'''."

As linked in the draft article, this book has been reviewed in full by the highly prominent Kirkus Reviews and Publishers Weekly, plus several other independent book reviewers, while also being the sole focus of full articles by Christianity Today, Religion Dispatches, and Sojourners. It's also appeared on the bestseller list maintained by USA Today and been the subject of discussion by a number of figures who themselves are the subject of Wikipedia articles.

At minimum, it's been the subject of not just two or more non-trivial published works, but five or more. [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 00:49, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:CG214|CG214]] I haven't looked at all the sources yet, but the reviews don't seem reliable. [https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/jason-kirk/hell-is-a-world-without-you/ The Kirkus Review] is part of their [https://www.kirkusreviews.com/indie-reviews/ indie review program], which, if I understand it correctly, is ''purchased'' by the author. [https://booklife.com/project/hell-is-a-world-without-you-89860 The Booklife review] isn't promising either, as it is [https://booklife.com/about-us/review-submission-guidelines.html paid for by the author]. Are there any other reliable sources that ''aren't'' paid for? <span style="font-family:monospace;">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]]) 10:55, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::As mentioned above, the draft article includes several reviews/articles that weren't part of any indie-specific program. Additionally, [[Kirkus Reviews]] isn't in the business of including paid-for reviews in its print edition simply because they were paid for, nor does it award recommendation accolades to books simply because they were paid for. [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 12:00, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:CG214|CG214]]: yes, it's true that there are Kirkus, ''Christianity Today'', and Booklife (''Publishers Weekly'') reviews, and those may be enough to satisfy [[WP:NBOOK]]. It's also true that these are buried amongst 25 other sources, most of which are primary (interviews, podcasts, the author's own website). If I had to guess, I'd say it's probably a case of too much content and too many sources hiding the good stuff. But that's just my guess, so I'm pinging the reviewer ((u|SafariScribe)) for comments. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:55, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::Should I trim the section about the book's writing process? I included that section because I was following a Wikipedia template for articles on books. [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 12:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Ah, looks like SafariScribe removed a couple of paragraphs that had lots of links to Twitter. Guessing those were the cluttery links? [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 13:18, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::::That was me, not SafariScribe :) yes, most of those were me. I removed the review links from the EL section (as most of those were already inline), and some of the twitter sourcing as this doesn't meet our requirements - with the hope this makes it easier to review! [[User:Mdann52|Mdann52]] ([[User talk:Mdann52|talk]]) 16:18, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::Thank you! [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 00:30, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:Mdann52|Mdann52]] did a wonderful clean up. @[[User:CG214|CG214]], I have cleaned up finally and moved your draft to article space. Please beware of our [[WP:RS|ways of verifying contents through reliable sources]]. Apple podcast from a non notable host or itself is not reliable and usually contains (like an interview) something an author or person will say about themselves or their products. Cheers for adding one to Wikipedia, as we hope you do create good articles as you've matched a foot into that. <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:#800080;">[[User:SafariScribe|Safari Scribe]]</span><sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">[[Special:Contributions/SafariScribe|'''''Edits!''''']] [[User talk:SafariScribe|'''''Talk!''''']]</sup> 18:57, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::Thank you, and I'll keep that in mind! [[User:CG214|CG214]] ([[User talk:CG214|talk]]) 00:30, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
:Oh! Thanks for the ping. Though the article may meet [[WP:NBOOK]], I don't see the sources supporting certain facts as some of them reads like novel announcements and advert . Welp,  I found only few reviews from heavily dependent unreliable ones. I will only do a favour of cleaning up the draft since I see the submitter is really [[WP:HERE|here to build an Encyclopedia]]. @[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]], don't you think so? <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:#800080;">[[User:SafariScribe|Safari Scribe]]</span><sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">[[Special:Contributions/SafariScribe|'''''Edits!''''']] [[User talk:SafariScribe|'''''Talk!''''']]</sup> 11:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 03:11, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Angela RSM Stone Forest ==
((Lafc|username=Angela RSM Stone Forest|ts=03:11, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:RSM_Singapore_Stone_Forest))
Dear Helpdesk Assistant,

My article was rejected due to ''This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.'' 

Would you please advise which part of the article needs further adjustment? Thank you! [[User:Angela RSM Stone Forest|Angela RSM Stone Forest]] ([[User talk:Angela RSM Stone Forest|talk]]) 03:11, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:<small>'''Helpdesk Assistant'? I guess that's me...''</small>
:@[[User:Angela RSM Stone Forest|Angela RSM Stone Forest]]: the entire draft is written in a promotional manner, and appears to be the company telling the world about itself. We have no interest in that; you can save such content for your own website. Wikipedia articles should simply summarise what independent and reliable secondary sources have said. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::Dear Helpdesk Assistant, thank you for the prompt response. I will tailor the content to meet the guideline. [[User:Angela RSM Stone Forest|Angela RSM Stone Forest]] ([[User talk:Angela RSM Stone Forest|talk]]) 05:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 13:21, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Wkln ==
((Lafc|username=Wkln|ts=13:21, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Scandia_(theme_parks)))
This draft was rejected because the article already exists in article space, and I was encouraged to merge it into the main article. The problem is how I have a [[WP:COI]] with the subject of this article, which means I'm not at liberty to do so without permission. Can someone look at it and determine if it can be posted before my draft gets deleted? [[User:Wkln|Wkln]] ([[User talk:Wkln|talk]]) 13:21, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Wkln|Wkln]]: we can only have one article on a given topic, that's why this cannot be accepted.
:You may make edit requests on the published article's talk page, using the ((tl|Edit COI)) template. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:24, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::((ping|Wkln)) I've done a partial merge of your edits to the main article, with some cleanup and citation changes, including the relevant attribution. If this is an issue, please let me know. [[User:Mdann52|Mdann52]] ([[User talk:Mdann52|talk]]) 16:50, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 14:54, 24 June 2024 review of submission by A Guy Like Ivan ==
((Lafc|username=A Guy Like Ivan|ts=14:54, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Saint_Barth_Executive))
I'm a little confused why my draft was rejected. Did I not include enough citations, or were the existing ones not adequate?  [[User:A Guy Like Ivan|A Guy Like Ivan]] ([[User talk:A Guy Like Ivan|talk]]) 14:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:A Guy Like Ivan|A Guy Like Ivan]] Much of the sources are the subject's [[WP:PRIMARY|own website]]. You need to provide [[WP:SECONDARY|other sourcing]] with [[WP:RS|reliable]] [[WP:SIGCOV|significant coverage of the topic]]. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 15:52, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::understood. I think it should be better now. [[User:A Guy Like Ivan|A Guy Like Ivan]] ([[User talk:A Guy Like Ivan|talk]]) 17:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 15:28, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Afiddle ==
((Lafc|username=Afiddle|ts=15:28, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Mary Beth Goodman))
Unsure why my article was declined, didn’t see specific comments left by the reviewer (unless I’m just missing them!) [[User:Afiddle|Afiddle]] ([[User talk:Afiddle|talk]]) 15:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Afiddle|Afiddle]]: the actual decline ''reasons'' are given in the grey box(es) inside the large pink one. Please study them carefully, including following all the links in them, which elaborate more on the issues. (If the reviewer provides additional, optional ''comments'', they would appear below the pink box, but in this case there weren't any.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:52, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::Hi—Thanks for the quick response! I suppose I’m more confused because I ''didn’t'' see any more specific comments beyond “Not formal enough” and “seems like an advertisement,” which I hadn’t picked up on while writing/reviewing at all. 
::Would love if you/someone else would be able or willing to talk through the finer points of that, because I’m not entirely sure where I’d begin in adjusting things (even having clicked through the linked terms in the grey boxes themselves).
::Thanks again! [[User:Afiddle|Afiddle]] ([[User talk:Afiddle|talk]]) 20:34, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Hi @[[User:Afiddle|Afiddle]], it can be very difficult to spot promotional writing when you're the one doing it, and especially if you're unused to writing Wikipedia articles! Your aim here is to make the text a collection of facts, and only facts. Trim sentences down so that only the most vital information is there. Never add any contention that is not in your source. Never use words like "vital", "leader", "key role", and others along those lines unless the source is using identical or near-identical words, and even then you should probably quote the source in order to use them - these are considered [[WP:PEACOCK|peacock]] terms and not allowed. 
:::I'll grab some sentences at random:
:::•"She is a former American government official, a global development and foreign affairs policymaker" - the source says she is "a senior member of the State Department’s vaccine diplomacy office who has worked for years on global health, anti-corruption and economic programs during Democratic administrations". So you can say she's a former American government official, but the source does not say she is a global development and foreign affairs policymaker. You could say her focus has been on global health, anti-corruption and economic programs.
:::•Further down: "Following the Addis Ababa negotiations, Goodman participated in the U.N. negotiations for the 2030 Agenda for Sustainable Development." But the source does not mention her at all; you can't say this without a source that agrees with you.
:::•"Goodman also played a key role in the U.S. Government’s response to the Panama Papers, and represented the U.S. at the U.K.’s 2016 Anti-Corruption Forum." The link does not work, so you need to find a new source or an archived version of the current source, or else remove this too.
:::•"Goodman led the negotiations between the U.S. and the Chinese governments to partner on joint international development goals. This resulted in the groundbreaking 2015 Memorandum of Understanding on U.S.-China Development Cooperation." This link also doesn't work, but I did find an archived version. The source is a government memorandum, which we can't use to establish notability, and it also doesn't mention her name at all. These are pretty big claims so you need an impeccable secondary source, such as a reputable newspaper, that specifically says both that Goodman led the negotiations and uses the word "groundbreaking" to describe the memorandum. The reference is also an external link rather than an inline citation, so you would need to fix that when you find a source.
:::•"In the last six months of the Obama Administration, Goodman assisted President Obama in efforts to secure major commitments on international development. The culmination of these efforts was the White House Summit on Global Development: Real Lives, Real Outcomes, held in July 2016." Again the source doesn't mention her name and is a government press release in any case. You need a secondary source that confirms everything in those sentences.
:::Basically, because this is a [[WP:BLP]] (biography of a living person), you need to source every single statement you write. Every source you have needs to fit the [[Wikipedia:42|golden rule]]: '''significant coverage''' in '''reliable sources''' that are '''independent of the topic'''. I'm sure you won't be surprised to hear that because of this, BLPs are the hardest articles to create!
:::If I were in your shoes, I would go over the entire draft sentence by sentence, making sure every claim has a good source, and that the draft never claims anything that is not stated in the source. It's a big job, but if you want to continue, take your time: there's [[Wikipedia:NORUSH|no rush]] and no deadlines. As long as you edit the draft at least once every six months, it won't be deleted and you can keep on trucking. I hope that's helped! Good luck and happy editing! [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 02:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:56, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Abeeha Awais ==
((Lafc|username=Abeeha Awais|ts=16:56, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Russell_Dalgleish))
can you please suggest me how can i improve its notability?
 [[User:Abeeha Awais|Abeeha Awais]] ([[User talk:Abeeha Awais|talk]]) 16:56, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Abeeha Awais)) There is nothing you, the subject, or anyone associated with either can directly do to help with notability. Any sources written at the behest of the subject are [[WP:SPS|tainted]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:46, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

== 18:55, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Sarandasatsangi ==
((Lafc|username=Sarandasatsangi|ts=18:55, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:Systems Society of India))
1. " your username suggests you have a relationship with the organization." What sense is made by this sentence, How can someone judge me based on my user name, Do not have a little professionalism. can you proof how I have a relationship with that organization. based on my username? 
2. SSI  organizes NSC with topmost national institutes including IITs, details of these conferences on their website is given and attached. what reliability do not you got, on top national institute website.
3.SSI is an independent and pioneer organization of system science, their focuses  are research , conferences, books , research paper based on system science research, its not an ancient organization that you searching for in depth data. 
4. I created this page because SSI is a national organization , educational, research institute, that it is going to transform human life and solve world problem through research and systems approach.  [[User:Sarandasatsangi|Sarandasatsangi]] ([[User talk:Sarandasatsangi|talk]]) 18:55, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Sarandasatsangi)) In order:
:# Would someone with a name similar to yours be mentioned in the draft in any capacity? [[WP:Conflict of interest|Maybe as its founder, as listed in the infobox?]] [[WP:PAID|Yes.]]
:# We don't cite government sources ([[WP:PRIMARY|gov't document]]). We prefer secondary sources.
:# We're looking for evidence that the organisation [[WP:NORG|has been written about for more than just doing basic organisation things]]. This argument also reinforces the suspicions of you being associated with the organisation.
:# [[WP:Spam|Resorting to trying to advertize your organisation is an argument that will always lose.]]
:—[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:41, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
::There are so many people in India having similarly with my name. Your claim is baseless and I am an undergraduate student not an advertiser. I thought this as an important topic that's why I created.Now you made me an advertiser, but don't worry, from now I will never edit or create any wiki page. I was not knowing the fact that I will become an advertiser by creating wikipage.Thanks  a lot to wiki team.no Need to reply my message , I just get the way of your response already.Thank you. [[User:Sarandasatsangi|Sarandasatsangi]] ([[User talk:Sarandasatsangi|talk]]) 04:17, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
:::I did not "[make] you an advertiser", you did that yourself in bullet 4 of what you wrote above. At the very least, you're [[WP:Conflict of interest|too connected to the subject (despite your protestations)]] to be able to actually write this article neutrally. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 16:15, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 20:34, 24 June 2024 review of submission by Greenbeetroot ==
((Lafc|username=Greenbeetroot|ts=20:34, 24 June 2024|draft=Draft:The_Ebor_Singers))
How can I change it so that is is a plausible encyclopedic article? [[User:Greenbeetroot|Greenbeetroot]] ([[User talk:Greenbeetroot|talk]]) 20:34, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Greenbeetroot)) Start by finding [[WP:THREE|three in-depth, independent sources with editorial oversight]], then ''write an article from scratch'' based on whatever information those sources explicitly provide. We do not accept plagiarised text. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 20:36, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

= June 25 =

== 04:38, 25 June 2024 review of submission by Whithhh ==
((Lafc|username=Whithhh|ts=04:38, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:S._Joe_Qin))
How do I successfully submit a page? How many references should I add? [[User:Whithhh|Whithhh]] ([[User talk:Whithhh|talk]]) 04:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Whithhh|Whithhh]]: you need as many references (citations) as are required to comprehensively support the contents. Which source the personal details shown in the infobox? What about the educational background of the (entirely unreferenced) 2nd paragraph? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:45, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 10:23, 25 June 2024 review of submission by Sudheer Mattaparthi ==
((Lafc|username=Sudheer Mattaparthi|ts=10:23, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Vellachintalagudem))
I have incorporated some changes on the article . Could you please let me know in detail what exactly you are looking here.
 [[User:Sudheer Mattaparthi|Sudheer Mattaparthi]] ([[User talk:Sudheer Mattaparthi|talk]]) 10:23, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Sudheer Mattaparthi|Sudheer Mattaparthi]]: we want to know where all that information is coming from, and how it can be verified. You currently have one single source, cited once at the very end where the citation supports nothing. See [[WP:REFB]] for advice on referencing. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 12:01, 25 June 2024 review of submission by GS1921 ==
((Lafc|username=GS1921|ts=12:01, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Jolyon_Naegele))
Please, be so kind and review a little bit changed page. If it has mistakes, please, could you specify it for me. Thank you very, very much for help. [[User:GS1921|GS1921]] ([[User talk:GS1921|talk]]) 12:01, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:GS1921|GS1921]]: we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk; if you believe you've addressed the decline reasons sufficiently, you can resubmit the draft, and a reviewer will assess it some point. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:10, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
:PS: This draft was declined for lack of evidence of [[WP:notability|notability]], which essentially depends on the sources. It looks like you have since removed three sources, without adding any news ones. Does it not stand to reason, therefore, that there is still not enough evidence of notability, and possibly less so than before? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:15, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 15:05, 25 June 2024 review of submission by Flamemadragon ==
((Lafc|username=Flamemadragon|ts=15:05, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Cage_Titans_FC))
My submission was declined and I don't understand why. The two issues were credibility and notability. On credibility, I referenced Tapology, one of the mainstream MMA record websites. On notability, there is a page for CES MMA, which is debately a less notable MMA promotion than Cage Titans (based on my experience as an MMA journalist in New England).  [[User:Flamemadragon|Flamemadragon]] ([[User talk:Flamemadragon|talk]]) 15:05, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Flamemadragon|Flamemadragon]]: this draft is  far from acceptable, and could have been declined for a number of reasons.
:You list (without even citing) a single source, Tapology, which seems to be at least partly user-generated, with no indication of editorial oversight, fact-checking practices, etc.; I would consequently question how reliable it is, regardless of whether it is "mainstream" or not. Besides, that source doesn't seem to provide any real information, and doesn't therefore support the contents of this draft. Please feel free to correct me on that, if I got it wrong; I only had a quick look at the source.
:In any case, a single source is nowhere near enough to establish [[WP:notability|notability]], which is another reason this draft could have been declined for. We need to see significant coverage in multiple secondary sources (newspapers, magazines, TV or radio programmes, etc.) that are reliable and entirely independent of the subject. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:26, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
::Tapology's information is gathered from accounts of MMA promotions, fighters, and coaches, when is then moderated through a team. I went through all of Cage Titan's events on Tapology to figure out who the current champion of each division is as well as the day they became champion and their # of defenses.  Each of the listed fighters' tapology pages also shows their fights for Cage Titans as well as the higher promotions they fought for. Should I cite each of their individual tapology pages? I can also attempt to find articles about some of the fighters moving up to the bigger leagues if that works better.
::Most of the champion information isn't readily available anywhere (as Cage Titans's own champion page is greatly outdated), which is why I wanted to establish an article showing said information after scouring the Tapology pages. I also established championship history from looking through Tapology that I'm waiting to get confirmed with Cage Titans. Optimally I would like to add that to this article in a similar way that CES MMA has a championship history on their article.
::However given all this, do you think it might just be better for me to post an article on a journalism website rather than Wikipedia? My only qualm with posting on a journalism website is that articles are usually time locked, and it would be harder to find it say a year from now as opposed to Wikipedia that more time-permanent articles. [[User:Flamemadragon|Flamemadragon]] ([[User talk:Flamemadragon|talk]]) 15:55, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Flamemadragon|Flamemadragon]]: putting aside everything else, the main question is can you find sufficient sources meeting the [[WP:GNG]] standard, to establish that this subject is notable? Notability is a core requirement for inclusion in Wikipedia, and without demonstrating it it isn't possible to publish an article on this subject, no matter what. Therefore this whole matter hinges on sources. Tapology (even if for the sake of the argument we accept it as reliable) isn't alone enough. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:04, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:02, 25 June 2024 review of submission by NGraywolf ==
((Lafc|username=NGraywolf|ts=16:02, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Buffi_Jacobs))
How can I delete my draft?
I jumped too fast and need to start over! [[User:NGraywolf|NGraywolf]] ([[User talk:NGraywolf|talk]]) 16:02, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:NGraywolf|NGraywolf]]: as you're the only editor of it, you can just blank the page or place the ((tl|Db-g7)) speedy deletion template on it, and an administrator will come around and delete it (only admins can do that). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:52, 25 June 2024 review of submission by E11e99 ==
((Lafc|username=E11e99|ts=16:52, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Mining_Indaba))
I would be very grateful if I could please get some assistance and clarity around identifying the "peacock" terms used in this article and why the references are not considered appropriate?
many thanks and kind regards,
elle [[User:E11e99|e11e99]] ([[User talk:E11e99|talk]]) 16:52, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 19:57, 25 June 2024 review of submission by Volodymyr Dudnik ==
((Lafc|username=Volodymyr Dudnik|ts=19:57, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:Dnipro_Academy_of_Continuing_Education))
I have already supplemented the article several times and provided all possible categories and links, maybe I am missing something important or making some mistake. I really don't see how the article could be improved. I am asking for help. [[User:Volodymyr Dudnik|Volodymyr Dudnik]] ([[User talk:Volodymyr Dudnik|talk]]) 19:57, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Volodymyr Dudnik)) Your draft has swathes of text that is completely unsourced. Four sources for an article of this size is not enough. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 21:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 20:20, 25 June 2024 review of submission by Devlimon ==
((Lafc|username=Devlimon|ts=20:20, 25 June 2024|draft=Metropolitan Atlanta Astrological Society))
Article submission was rejected based on not having enough reliable sources. Would a link to the organization's active status be considered a reliable source? Or their website?  [[User:Devlimon|Devlimon]] ([[User talk:Devlimon|talk]]) 20:20, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

:No. To show that the organisation is sufficiently notable for an article you need to reference what ''other people'' say about it. See [[WP:NORG]]: you need multiple independent reliable sources with significant coverage of the organisation. [[User:Mgp28|Mgp28]] ([[User talk:Mgp28|talk]]) 20:40, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

== 20:28, 25 June 2024 review of submission by MaryGaulke ==
((Lafc|username=MaryGaulke|ts=20:28, 25 June 2024|draft=Draft:John_Oyler))
Hi! This draft was rejected for failing [[WP:GNG]]. I submitted this as a COI editor for Oyler's company BeiGene, so just hoping for a little clarity – Oyler has been the focus of what I believe is substantive coverage in [https://www.lifescienceleader.com/doc/how-and-why-john-oyler-built-beigene-0001 Life Science Leader], [https://www.scmp.com/tech/science-research/article/2115495/ceo-china-oncology-start-beigene-toils-bring-drugs-fruition South China Morning Post], and [https://www.pharmexec.com/view/a-vision-of-affordability Pharma Exec]. Are these publications too niche to meet [[WP:NBIO]]? I appreciate any guidance to inform my future work. Thank you! [[User:MaryGaulke|Mary Gaulke]] ([[User talk:MaryGaulke|talk]]) 20:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

= June 26 =

== 02:41, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Noprita ==
((Lafc|username=Noprita|ts=02:41, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Journal of Communication & Public Relations (JCPR)))
Halo, may I know why this declined? and what can I do to make that page better as Wikipedia standard page? [[User:Noprita|Noprita]] ([[User talk:Noprita|talk]]) 02:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Noprita)) [[WP:Reliable sources|No sources]], [[WP:Notability (academic journals)|no article]], [[WP:Verifiability|no debate]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 02:44, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::Halo Jeske,
::I put the references link that JCPR indexed already
:: == JCPR's References ==
::# [https://portal.issn.org/resource/ISSN/2809-9087 ISSN Portal]
::# [https://garuda.kemdikbud.go.id/journal/view/36031 Garuda Kemendikbud RI]
::# [https://www.scilit.net/publishers/15131 Scilit]
::# [https://app.dimensions.ai/discover/publication?search_mode=content&and_facet_source_title=jour.1428953 Dimensions]
::# [https://lspr.academia.edu/JCPRLSPR Academia]
::# [https://www.linkedin.com/company/journal-of-communication-public-relations/?originalSubdomain=id LinkedIn]
::and I write the short about JCPR:
::The '''[https://journal.lspr.edu/index.php/jcpr Journal of Communication & Public Relations (JCPR)]''' is a [[Peer review|peer-review]] international [[academic  journal]] published by [https://www.lspr.ac.id/ LSPR Institute of Communication & Business]. Issued twice a year, [https://scholar.google.co.id/citations?hl=en&user=x0zaPk8AAAAJ JCPR] focuses on both theoretical development and practical research in [[communication studies]] and [[public relations]] studies. The journal's first edition was published in 2021 by [https://omp.lspr.edu/index.php/omp LSPR Publishing], covering various areas including [[organizational communication]], [[development communication]], [[reputation management]], government public relations, [[media relations]], [[corporate communication]], [[Marketing communications|marketing communication]], and public affairs communication.
::How many words does Wikipedia require to create one page? [[User:Noprita|Noprita]] ([[User talk:Noprita|talk]]) 02:55, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::((ping|Noprita)) Anything that merely indexes the journal is useless for notability ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]) and LinkedIn is worthless as a source full stop ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). The heading of that section also implies something ''very'' different than what you think it does (specifically, that JCPR themselves use those as its sources, instead of the article citing them). —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 03:12, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:Jéské Couriano|Jéské Couriano]] Do you mean that to create a page on Wikipedia, it must have coverage in the mass media? [[User:Noprita|Noprita]] ([[User talk:Noprita|talk]]) 03:17, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::You need to have sources - which are more likely to be in the realm of academia/more specialised sources than the mass media - that show that it meets one of the three criteria listed at [[WP:Notability (academic journals)]]:
:::::# That it is considered influential in its subject area;
:::::# That it is widely cited by other reliable sources;
:::::# That it has some historical importance in its subject area.
:::::Sources that only index it do not help meet any of these criteria. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 03:23, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 03:03, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Sdsbran ==
((Lafc|username=Sdsbran|ts=03:03, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft: Walz Tetrick Advertising))
Would like further explanation of why my article was denied because it is contrary to Wikipedia's purpose. I want to learn more, not debate. Thank you very much.  [[User:Sdsbran|Sdsbran]] ([[User talk:Sdsbran|talk]]) 03:03, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Sdsbran)) The lists of services and [[WP:WAX|notable clients]] should be removed wholesale. Aside from that, the draft overall reads like it was intended for potential investors, not Mitty from Kansas City. What is your connexion to Walz Tetrick Advertizing? —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 03:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you for the fast response. I do not work for the company - I am retired, and a writer - the CEO hired me to write this for his company. [[User:Sdsbran|Sdsbran]] ([[User talk:Sdsbran|talk]]) 03:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::"The CEO hired me to write this for his company" is tantamount to working for the company. You are also obligated to [[WP:PAID|'''''disclose''''']] this on [[Special:MyPage|your Wikipedia userpage]] per our Terms of Use. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 03:24, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Related to [[WP:When your boss tells you to edit Wikipedia]]. (User has been blocked as a promo account.) --[[User:Slgrandson|Slgrandson]] <small>([[User talk:Slgrandson|How's my]] [[Special:Contributions/Slgrandson|egg-throwing coleslaw?]])</small> 20:25, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 04:11, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Kim alice film ==
((Lafc|username=Kim alice film|ts=04:11, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Wash_My_Soul_In_The_River's_Flow))
Hello, I have made some new edits today (26 June 2024) to my submission Draft:Wash My Soul In The River's Flow. This is my first wiki submission so I just want to check the latest revision has been submitted correctly. I can't work out where it tells me that the latest submission is in and awaiting review. All help that I've been given so far is greatly appreciated. 
 [[User:Kim alice film|Kim alice film]] ([[User talk:Kim alice film|talk]]) 04:11, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:Hi @[[User:Kim alice film|Kim alice film]]: you have made one edit to this draft today, but haven't submitted it yet; you need to click on the blue 'resubmit' button (when you're ready). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:32, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::Thanks @[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] for your help with this. Much appreciated. [[User:Kim alice film|Kim alice film]] ([[User talk:Kim alice film|talk]]) 11:54, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 06:30, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Sivaanandgr ==
((Lafc|username=Sivaanandgr|ts=06:30, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Om_Namasivaya_Charitable_Trust))
How to improve my articles [[User:Sivaanandgr|Sivaanandgr]] ([[User talk:Sivaanandgr|talk]]) 06:30, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Sivaanandgr|Sivaanandgr]]: this draft has been rejected and is awaiting speedy deletion. I don't believe that you have any articles. For advice on article creation, see [[WP:YFA]]. For general advice on editing Wikipedia, try the [[WP:Teahouse|Teahouse]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 06:37, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Kingofstyle ==
((Lafc|username=Kingofstyle|ts=06:37, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Kingofstyle))
more what should be improved in article
 [[User:Kingofstyle|Kingofstyle]] ([[User talk:Kingofstyle|talk]]) 06:37, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Kingofstyle|Kingofstyle]]: this draft has been rejected and is awaiting speedy deletion. Please don't write about yourself, see [[WP:AUTOBIO]], which explains why. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 08:50, 26 June 2024 review of submission by KingMaker69 ==
((Lafc|username=KingMaker69|ts=08:50, 26 June 2024|draft=draft: Encrypta))
need help and suggestion for pulbiation of the article [[User:KingMaker69|KingMaker69]] ([[User talk:KingMaker69|talk]]) 08:50, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|KingMaker69)) Try again, this time [[WP:Spam|without writing an investors' brochure]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 08:54, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::((ping|KingMaker69)) Your second attempt is still promotional, but not unsalvageably so. The problem it has now is that it's been written [[WP:Writing Wikipedia articles backward|backwards]], citing no sources. Everything beyond the "History and background" section needs to go as promotional/irrelevant. (The "Concluding Notes" section wouldn't fit here even if it were neutrally written; we're an [[WP:Wikipedia is an encyclopedia|encyclopaedia]], not [[WP:No original research|a college essay]].) —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:16, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::((ping|KingMaker69)) We don't cite Wikipedia ([[WP:CIRCULAR|circular reference]]). If you're trying to link to another page, use <nowiki>[[double square braces]]</nowiki>. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:42, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::noted.. [[User:KingMaker69|KingMaker69]] ([[User talk:KingMaker69|talk]]) 18:04, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:KingMaker69|KingMaker69]] I've requested speedy deletion, again, it's still written like an advertisement brochure - totally inappropriate for Wikipedia. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:23, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 10:52, 26 June 2024 review of submission by ParulP0206 ==
((Lafc|username=ParulP0206|ts=10:52, 26 June 2024|draft= Draft : Petrolink Services))
Hi Marcus,
I recently submitted an article on Petrolink services, which was rejected with feedback indicating that it was not adequately supported by reliable sources and that it seemed to be a test edit rather than an article worthy of an encyclopedia.

1. I took all the sources available to support this topic. Should I wait for more sources to become available, or are there specific types of sources I should focus on?
2. Could the formatting or length of the article have contributed to the rejection? I intentionally did not include detailed descriptions of their products and services to avoid appearing promotional.

I would greatly appreciate your guidance on how I can improve the submission to meet Wikipedia's standards.  [[User:ParulP0206|ParulP0206]] ([[User talk:ParulP0206|talk]]) 10:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:ParulP0206|ParulP0206]]: I'm not Marcus, but I'll reply while waiting. Your draft [[Draft:Petrolink]] has been deleted as promotional. You have also been issued a warning against trying to use Wikipedia for promotion, please heed it. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:07, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 11:18, 26 June 2024 review of submission by PaulDRamkissoon ==
((Lafc|username=PaulDRamkissoon|ts=11:18, 26 June 2024|draft=10:39, 26 June 2024 diff hist +206 User:PaulDRamkissoon/sandbox Submitting using AfC-submit-wizard Tag: Disambiguation links added))
I had added my company page and it was rejected without anyway of resubmitting, I would like to know what needs to be done to get approval? [[User:PaulDRamkissoon|PaulDRamkissoon]] ([[User talk:PaulDRamkissoon|talk]]) 11:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

I would like to know what needs to be edited in my article so that it can be approved. [[User:PaulDRamkissoon|PaulDRamkissoon]] ([[User talk:PaulDRamkissoon|talk]]) 11:23, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:PaulDRamkissoon|PaulDRamkissoon]]: please don't start multiple threads.
:Your draft was rejected as promotional, and speedily deleted for the same reason. Wikipedia is not to be used for promotion of any kind. Also, you clearly have a conflict of interest, which you must disclose if you intend to attempt this again (which I would strongly advise against, in any case). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:04, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 11:33, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Arahi991 ==
((Lafc|username=Arahi991|ts=11:33, 26 June 2024|draft=Del Mar Energy))
Dear moderator, please look at the article
1. American company
2. Staged the story  
3. Unique
You can approve, if you need information I will add it [[User:Arahi991|Arahi991]] ([[User talk:Arahi991|talk]]) 11:33, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((courtesy link|Draft:Del Mar Energy Company))
:@[[User:Arahi991|Arahi991]]: I've no idea what ((tq|"1. American company 2. Staged the story 3. Unique")) means, let alone has to do with anything, but this draft was rejected and will therefore not be considered further.
:Incidentally, do you have a connection with ((no ping|Solyankich)), who recently created [[Draft:Del Mar Energy]]? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:59, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 12:07, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Al Right ==
((Lafc|username=Al Right|ts=12:07, 26 June 2024|draft=Scharmien Zandi))
We try to make a english version of the austrian-kurdisch musician and artist Scharmien Zandi. can you help us to verify the draft. thank you [[User:Al Right|Al Right]] ([[User talk:Al Right|talk]]) 12:07, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:There is a Dutch page of [[:de:|Sharmien Zandi]]. You can translate it. For the English Wikipedia, you need to understand and establish [[WP:NBIO|notability of Sharmien Zandi]] with [[WP:RS|reliable references about the subject person]] with [[WP:THREE|minimal criterion]] to meet [[WP:GNG|three mandatory nobility criterion]]. For further interest [[WP:RS|please check about reliability criterion]]. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 16:25, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 12:33, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Mistymoon222 ==
((Lafc|username=Mistymoon222|ts=12:33, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Michaela Cook))
Hi there,

I've recently submitted my first article and I am questioning whether my English is correct. 

Does anyone know if there are guidelines as to what English region needs to be used?

For example, I wrote the article in English (UK) so words will be spelt like 'recognise' as opposed to 'recognize'. Do you think this will be an issue?

Thank you very much! Hope you're having an awesome day.  [[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]] ([[User talk:Mistymoon222|talk]]) 12:33, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]]: if she's Australian, then Australian English would seem appropriate. That said, if you naturally write in British English, I don't think it would be reasonable to expect you to 'fake' Aussie English. In any case, none of this has any bearing on the draft's chances of being accepted, so don't worry about it too much. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::Ahh ok that makes sense - thank you again for your time (and answering so quickly)! [[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]] ([[User talk:Mistymoon222|talk]]) 12:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::((ping|Mistymoon222)) All that really matters with regards to the [[WP:ENGVAR|dialect of English used]] is that it is consistent throughout the article. While it is standard practice to use the dialect most associated with a given subject this is not a hard rule, and it's something that could very well be handled when/if the draft is accepted. The reviewers aren't going to ding a draft for ENGVAR unless it's bouncing between dialects like a drunken polyglot. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 15:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::::That makes perfect sense, thank you!
::::If you (or anyone) else is available for a few more questions, I would be very grateful.
::::I‘ve recently had my first article reviewed (for this page, Draft:Michaela Cook) and it’s been unaccepted due to unreliable sources. I am still learning (I read hundreds of similar Wiki’s to study their constructs so I could best create this and others I’m drafting within the guidelines) so would it please be possible for you to tell me which sources are deemed unreliable on this page? 
::::Also, are articles behind a newspaper paywall not accepted either? The articles were included in the print copy of the newspaper, so would it be best to include the hard copy sourcing (incl. page numbers etc)?
::::Thank you again for your time!  [[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]] ([[User talk:Mistymoon222|talk]]) 21:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::@[[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]], as an Aussie myself, our spellings are basically British anyway - colour, recognise, etc - so no need to worry about that bit.
:::::Paywalls are fine but can be hard for reviewers to properly assess - so if you have non-paywalled sources as well that makes things easier.
:::::Some short notes on sources to start you off: you are trying to establish that Cook is [[WP:NOTABLE]] in the very specific Wikipedia meaning of the term. Your sources must fit [[WP:42]], our 'golden rule' - more info at those two links.
:::::In general: LinkedIn can't be used. Interviews can only be used for really basic facts, like her birthdate or birthplace. Anything that only mentions her as part of a list of performers is also not going to help for notability. What you really want to find is articles that people have written about her, without any input from her, and for no reason other that they're interested in her (ie not by a company who she works with, or an employee of hers, and so on). I'll be happy to come back and review your current sources later if no one else has done so, but I'm out of time for Wiki right now - so good luck, happy editing, and perhaps we'll talk again! [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 04:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::::::Firstly, thank you so much for your time and linking further information!! Secondly, your explanation was really helpful and I’m about to pour over those links! If you by any chance can review a few of the sources and give me an example of what ones are reliable out of the ones there, I would be extremely thankful! I went through and added the ISSN numbers of publications and as much sourcing info as I could find as well. I didn’t realise you could tick extra boxes if you had extra information lol. Ps our spellings are the best! Thank you again and no stress if you’re unable to review any sources! [[User:Mistymoon222|Mistymoon222]] ([[User talk:Mistymoon222|talk]]) 12:04, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 17:08, 26 June 2024 review of submission by MuseumOfSilence ==
((Lafc|username=MuseumOfSilence|ts=17:08, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Mark_John_Ostrowski))
Could someone please review this entry which has been waiting review for over 3 months?

The article submission has not been reviewed after correcting it completely.

Thanks for your help,

Museum Of Silence [[User:MuseumOfSilence|MuseumOfSilence]] ([[User talk:MuseumOfSilence|talk]]) 17:08, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|MuseumOfSilence)) This reads more like a curriculum vitae. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:11, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 18:37, 26 June 2024 review of submission by 2407:D000:B:32C1:5854:24A:AF52:88E8 ==
((Lafc|username=2407:D000:B:32C1:5854:24A:AF52:88E8|ts=18:37, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Tropical_forests_in_Pakistan))
where do i write the text [[Special:Contributions/2407:D000:B:32C1:5854:24A:AF52:88E8|2407:D000:B:32C1:5854:24A:AF52:88E8]] ([[User talk:2407:D000:B:32C1:5854:24A:AF52:88E8|talk]]) 18:37, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:You write the text in the draft, and pick "publish" (which means "save", but was changed for legal reasons, to remind editors that everything in Wikipedia is public). 
:Make sure you don't write your draft [[WP:BACKWARDS|BACKWARDS]], because that will waste your time and other people's. 
:Also consider whether you are duplicating information in [[Flora of Pakistan]], or adding information which does not justify a separate article but should be added to that article. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

== 18:44, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Rainbowdoor ==
((Lafc|username=Rainbowdoor|ts=18:44, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Actuaries_Institute))
I tried carefully to avoid promotional language and I don't see this article as substantially different in regards to promotional language to similar articles for actuarial organisations such as Society of Actuaries and Institute and Faculty of Actuaries which have been accepted, but clearly I don't understand. So, I would appreciate your advice on specific words/phrases/sentences or the overall approach that are considered promotional and what changes I might make. Actuaries Institute is a major professional organisation in Australia and, in my opinion, deserves a Wikipedia entry. Your assistance to create an entry which meets Wikipedia guidelines would be greatly appreciated. [[User:Rainbowdoor|Rainbowdoor]] ([[User talk:Rainbowdoor|talk]]) 18:44, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Rainbowdoor)) [[Society of Actuaries]] (first edit [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Society_of_Actuaries&oldid=1540925 Oct 08, 2003]) and [[Institute and Faculty of Actuaries]] (first edit [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Institute_and_Faculty_of_Actuaries&oldid=376748476 Aug 02, 2010]) both [[User:Jéské Couriano/A brief history of AfC|predate the drafting process entirely]] and were never formally reviewed or accepted. We don't cite government sources ([[WP:PRIMARY|gov't document]]) and cites to the subject themselves are useless for [[WP:NORG|notability]] ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:01, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:Hello, Rainbowdoor. Your draft reads as what the Institue wants people to know about itself. (And this impression is backed up by most of the references being either closely associated with the institute, or barely mentioning it). 
:Baldly, Wikipedia isn't interested - at all - in what the Institute wants people to know. What Wikipedia is interested in (almost exclusively) is what people who have no connection with the Institute have chosen to write about it and been published in reliable sources. Almost the whole article should be based on such sources - and if little independent material has been written about the Institute, then it simply won't meet Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:NORG|notability]], and no article is possible. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 19:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:Furthermore, I have reason to believe that you have a [[WP:conflict of interest|conflict of interest]] in writing about the Institute (I am aware that you changed your username, and I suggest you remove the welcome messages from your User Talk page that addressed you by  your original username - you are allowed to remove messages from your user talk page, see [[WP:User talk pages|User talk pages]] - but the rename is recorded and public). 
:The COI does not forbid you from working on this draft, but you ought to declare it. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:12, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you ColinFine. That's very helpful. You are correct that I changed my username some years ago but only because Wikipedia gave advice that usernames should be anonymous. Otherwise, I wouldn't have. I'm happy to declare that I am a Fellow of Institute of Actuaries of Australia but would also like to note that I am a volunteer and have no financial interest in seeing the article published. How do I do that? [[User:Rainbowdoor|Rainbowdoor]] ([[User talk:Rainbowdoor|talk]]) 22:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
:::((ping|Rainbowdoor)) See [[WP:PAID]]. (Whether you or paid or volunteering is immaterial; you still stand to gain from writing an article about the organisation, and so must disclose all the same.) —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 07:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::Actually, I disagree with Jeske here - I think being a Fellow of the institute means you certainly have a COI, but, I would not regard you as coming within [[WP:PAID]], unless you were actively working as part of the institute's admin or governance. But I would still advise disclosure on your user page. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 09:51, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 22:26, 26 June 2024 review of submission by Grizly1960 ==
((Lafc|username=Grizly1960|ts=22:26, 26 June 2024|draft=Draft:Territorial_center_of_recruitment_and_social_support))
Hello! How can improve this article? [[User:Grizly1960|Grizly1960]] ([[User talk:Grizly1960|talk]]) 22:26, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

:You can improve it by starting again, basing it on [[WP:IS|independent]] published sources. Almost nothing published by the centre or by the Ukrainian government is of any relevance for this article. 
:((HD/WINI)) [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 09:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::Thanks, supplemented the article with independent sources, and information from such. [[User:Grizly1960|Grizly1960]] ([[User talk:Grizly1960|talk]]) 15:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::The section '''Highlighting of activities''' seems to be [[Wikipedia:UNDUE|pushing an agenda.]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 15:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

= June 27 =

== 00:19:36, 27 June 2024 review of submission by MauriceAgerOfficial ==
((Lafc|username=MauriceAgerOfficial|ts=00:19:36, 27 June 2024|accepted=Sam_Froling))
 I represent Maurice Ager & we would like to update his wiki 

[[User:MauriceAgerOfficial|MauriceAgerOfficial]] ([[User talk:MauriceAgerOfficial|talk]]) 00:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:MauriceAgerOfficial|MauriceAgerOfficial]]: I think you've come to the wrong help desk, this is for new article drafts undergoing the AfC review process, which [[Maurice Ager]] (or for that matter, [[Sam Froling]]) isn't.
:However, now that you're here, I need to tell you that you have a conflict of interest (COI), which must be disclosed before you do any further editing. I have posted a paid-editing query on your talk page, please read and respond to it. Note also that you are ''not'' allowed to edit directly articles to which your COI applies, you must instead make edit requests via the article talk page using the ((tl|Edit COI)) template. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:28, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 02:09, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Livvin1 ==
((Lafc|username=Livvin1|ts=02:09, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Nico_Norena))
This draft has been rejected several times. I made all necessary changes—there are quite literally no other sources I can use. He is a food influencer in which the only information I will get is from previous interviews and reliable sources (podcasts, The New York Times, Forbes etc.). All sources I've used are credible. I've seen all of these used in other wiki pages for celebs as well, so I'm not really sure why this is continually rejected. I'd really appreciate any specific help that will get this pushed through. [[User:Livvin1|Livvin1]] ([[User talk:Livvin1|talk]]) 02:09, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Livvin1|Livvin1]]: firstly, this draft hasn't been rejected (which would mean the end of the road), only declined (which means you can resubmit, once you've addressed the decline reasons).
:Secondly, what other articles may exist, and how they may be sourced, is not the point: we are assessing this draft, and that is done by reference to the currently applicable guidelines and policies, not by comparing to other articles. See [[WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS]].
:You say ((tq|"interviews and reliable sources (podcasts, The New York Times, Forbes etc.).")) Interviews are not independent (or usually reliable), as they are the subject talking. Podcasts aren't much better. Forbes may be reliable, but usually isn't; see [[WP:FORBESCON]]. It seems that there is something of a gap between what you consider to be an acceptable source for the purposes of establishing notability, and what three experienced reviewers (with 300,000+ edits under their collective belt) think. As it is, I'm minded to side with the latter, but note that I haven't done a proper source analysis.
:If, as you say, there aren't better sources available, then it probably isn't possible to have this published. [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:21, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 04:41, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Virgilio lauro ==
((Lafc|username=Virgilio lauro|ts=04:41, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Michael_Q._Trucks))
Hello, good evening. How are you? I want to thank you in advance for your time and advice.

The reason for my message is to ask about the article I am creating about the musical artist Michael Q. Trucks.

I have already made several modifications to the draft and removed all the self-references that you kindly pointed out to me. I also revised the US NAVY honors, as I suppose they have no place in a musician's profile. Additionally, I adjusted the tone of the article to be more neutral and used references from reliable sources to avoid a lack of credibility.

Could you please review if all the information and additions are correct?

I am very interested in following all the guidelines to comply with your standards.

Thank you very much once again.

Virgilio [[User:Virgilio lauro|Virgilio lauro]] ([[User talk:Virgilio lauro|talk]]) 04:41, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Virgilio lauro|Virgilio lauro]]: we don't do on-demand reviews here at the help desk. However, having taken a quick look at your draft, the previous decline reasons are still there: it present no evidence that the subject is notable, and the whole thing is written in a promotional manner. Additionally, the referencing is wholly inadequate, eg. the entire 'Early life and education' section is unreferenced, and much of what is referenced is done so using unreliable sources. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:10, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::Ah, yes. I get it. Thank you very much for your comments. They really help me to include the necessary information to make it relevant for the platform. I appreciate your time and considerations.
::Best, Virgilio [[User:Virgilio lauro|Virgilio lauro]] ([[User talk:Virgilio lauro|talk]]) 07:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 07:08, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Sumanrsb2 ==
((Lafc|username=Sumanrsb2|ts=07:08, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Lovekesh_Kataria))
This article which I have published is related to one of the popular Indian youtube and a contestor of popular OTT Show broadcasted on JIO Cinema named Bigg Boss. Allmost all the contestor have a Wikipedia page. kindly help in publishing it or help me in improving it. Allmost 100 relevant news article available on internet regarding this. [[User:Sumanrsb2|Sumanrsb2]] ([[User talk:Sumanrsb2|talk]]) 07:08, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Sumanrsb2)) Any reality show contestants - including and ''especially'' contestants on ''[[Big Brother (franchise)|Big Brother]]'' and its variants (of which ''Bigg Boss'' is one) - need to be found notable [[WP:BLP1E|independent of their reality show appearances]] due to them being designed to distort or exaggerate players' personality flaws for drama. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 07:15, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::Please define what notable means to you. having coverage in more than 50 relevant news article is not a criteria of notability ? Being contestor of a Popular OTT show is not a crtiteria for notability ? If you need I can cite all those news article related to this [[User:Sumanrsb2|Sumanrsb2]] ([[User talk:Sumanrsb2|talk]]) 07:22, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Sumanrsb2|Sumanrsb2]]: the general notability guideline is given at [[WP:GNG]], please study it carefully. That is the one that reviewers usually work to (unless there is a special guideline that applies instead).
:::And yes, ((tq|"having coverage in more than 50 relevant news article")) ''may'' prove notability, but it depends on more than just the number of sources; their quality matters just as much, as the GNG guideline makes clear. Besides, your draft does not cite 50 or 100 articles, it cites four sources (of varying quality) in total. Our job is not to go hunting for sources, that is entirely the responsibility of the draft authors and proponents; we merely review what is cited in the draft.
:::Having said which, please do ''not'' cite 50 or 100 articles, as that would be pure [[WP:REFBOMBING]] and as such counterproductive. Find the best 3-5 sources (per the GNG criteria), and summarise their coverage. That gives you both the appropriate content and the necessary proof of notability in one go. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:45, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::::Done the same despite you guys nominated for deletion. Its worth for Wikipedia. Kindly approve [[User:Sumanrsb2|Sumanrsb2]] ([[User talk:Sumanrsb2|talk]]) 09:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::@[[User:Sumanrsb2|Sumanrsb2]]: you're only making matters worse by creating multiple versions of this. The published article has been nominated for deletion, and rightly so. Your draft will not be approved while there is no evidence of notability, and certainly not if you don't actually submit it for review. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 09:51, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:::::((ping|Sumanrsb2)) Your only sources are a YouTube channel ([[WP:SPS|no editorial oversight]]) and three news stories about his appearance on a ''Bigg Boss'' season. The sourcing on the version I looked at yesterday had seven ''Bigg Boss''-focussed sources. As I said above, [[WP:BLP1E|you need to show he is notable ''outside'' of the reality show]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 16:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 07:16, 27 June 2024 review of submission by KBN College(Autonomous) ==
((Lafc|username=KBN College(Autonomous)|ts=07:16, 27 June 2024|draft=User:KBN_College(Autonomous)/sandbox))
I have given general information about college in vijayawada
but you are saying it seems like advertising , i have been added courses they offer , infrastructure , land area etc... i think it is an information about the college

please guide if anything wrong in my page post [[User:KBN College(Autonomous)|KBN College(Autonomous)]] ([[User talk:KBN College(Autonomous)|talk]]) 07:16, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:(User blocked, draft G11'd.) [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:46, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 07:21, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Caspal ==
((Lafc|username=Caspal|ts=07:21, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Chassé_Theater))
goodmorning, I've translated the dutch article form the Chassé Theater in Breda. the original had no references at all so when my translation was moved to draft I added different (dutch) references. now I also found some English. I have no idea what the criteria for wiki references are . the explanation in the draft description is 'to English' for me and I don't understand them. How can I summit the article about this theater to wiki. [[User:Caspal|Caspal]] ([[User talk:Caspal|talk]]) 07:21, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Caspal)) [[WP:THREE]] gives a good rule of thumb. Note that we accept non-English sources, offline sources, and offline non-English sources, so where and in what language the source is written is irrelevant. What matters is that the sources are independent of the subject and its surrogates, discuss the subject at length, and have strong editorial oversight with competent fact-checking processes. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 07:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Caspal|Caspal]]: yes, I rather suspected it may have been a translation. You need to attribute the original article as the source, see [[WP:HOWTRANS]].
:For future reference, please bear in mind that the English-language Wikipedia has higher standards for referencing and notability than most if not all other language versions. It often happens that the sources cited in the original article are insufficient for publication here. For that reason, I would recommend that before even starting to translate, you check whether the sources meet our requirements, and if not, whether you can find more and better sources. If you cannot, then there is no point in proceeding further, as you are likely to be wasting your time and effort. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 09:49, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Roggenrol ==
((Lafc|username=Roggenrol|ts=09:49, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Arsen Tomsky))
Can you review my draft, please? I don't get what's wrong with it exactly. [[User:Roggenrol|Roggenrol]] ([[User talk:Roggenrol|talk]]) 09:49, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Roggenrol|Roggenrol]]: the draft ''was'' reviewed, and consequently declined, for lack of [[WP:notability|notability]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:14, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 14:17, 27 June 2024 review of submission by STContributor ==
((Lafc|username=STContributor|ts=14:17, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Steptoe_&_Johnson))
Hello,

I recently saw my submitted draft, Steptoe & Johnson, was declined and the Wikipedia article, "Steptoe LLP" was noted as the subject already existing. Steptoe & Johnson is a separate firm/entity from Steptoe LLP (even though part of their name is shared) which is why I thought the article would be helpful to distinguish the two law firms. 

Can you let me know how I can make this more clear so that the article submission can be reconsidered for publication?  [[User:STContributor|STContributor]] ([[User talk:STContributor|talk]]) 14:17, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:No. You can't. Because you are trying to create a duplicate of [[Steptoe LLP]]. [[User:Twinkle1990|Twinkle1990]] ([[User talk:Twinkle1990|talk]]) 15:09, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 14:21, 27 June 2024 review of submission by DhruvvMehra ==
((Lafc|username=DhruvvMehra|ts=14:21, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Designer_Mindz))
Dear Wikipedia Administrator,

I am writing to contest the speedy deletion tag placed on Draft
Mindz. I believe the concerns raised under section G11 regarding promotional content can be addressed through necessary revisions to ensure compliance with Wikipedia's guidelines.

Specifically, I have edited the draft to focus on encyclopedic information about Designer Mindz, highlighting its history, services, and notable achievements in a neutral tone. The revisions aim to provide verifiable and sourced content that adheres to Wikipedia's standards.

I kindly request a review of the updated draft to reconsider its deletion. I am committed to ensuring that the page meets Wikipedia's policies on neutrality and notability.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
DhruvvMehra [[User:DhruvvMehra|DhruvvMehra]] ([[User talk:DhruvvMehra|talk]]) 14:21, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:DhruvvMehra|DhruvvMehra]] It's pure spam and will shortly be deleted. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:DhruvvMehra|DhruvvMehra]]: you have been warned already against trying to use Wikipedia to promote your business. You're getting close to being blocked. You also haven't made the required paid-editing disclosure (that I can find, at least); please make that as your very next edit. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:28, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:36, 27 June 2024 review of submission by SandyTee ==
((Lafc|username=SandyTee|ts=16:36, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft Vincenzo cavallo))
what does "one of the sources is a 404" mean? [[User:SandyTee|SandyTee]] ([[User talk:SandyTee|talk]]) 16:36, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:SandyTee|SandyTee]]: [[HTTP 404]] = page/file not found. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:40, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 16:44, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Taevchoi ==
((Lafc|username=Taevchoi|ts=16:44, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:T_Money_(rapper)))
Article was rejected, but I would like to argue that T-Money is notable enough for his own Wikipedia article and I urge you to reconsider. Looking at the discussion in the articles for deletion for the page that was live in 2016, I can tell that a huge concern was the absence of reliable sources. Furthermore, user Innisfree987 was trying to get in contact with the editor to help improve the page before it was deleted, but it seems they were not able to get in contact. I'd like to quote user Innisfree987, "Certainly if editor or others come back to work on it and can provide more sources, then great. Working with Dr. Dre and MTV on hiphop in the '80s is potentially a very important piece of music history; we just need the WP account of it to meet verifiability standards." I agree that the original Wikipedia article for T-Money was poorly written by a first time Wikipedia editor. As a first time editor myself, I initially thought all the article needed was more sources. Through the feedback of my peers, such as user Utopes and those at Teahouse, I realized the cadence and the integrity of the sources needed work as well. I also agree that T-Money's contribution to 80s hip-hop is rather significant to hip-hop history as a whole, especially since Original Concept was an early group signed to Def Jam. And outside of his group, he made a name for himself through hosting Yo! MTV Raps. I believe that T-Money qualifies for his own article because he meets numbers 1 and 10 of the guidelines. He is an important piece of Hip-Hop history, more specifically New York, which is the birthplace of hiphop. The sources I included in my draft are much stronger and more credible than the sources that were included in the 2016 draft. I am eager to hear your thoughts and consideration. [[User:Taevchoi|Taevchoi]] ([[User talk:Taevchoi|talk]]) 16:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:Furthermore, I have been working with the Teahouse members diligently for months regarding this draft, and no one ever voiced or had concerns that the draft would be rejected all together. More specifically, User Utopes was hopeful that my draft would be approved due to my improvements in the edits. The feedback I received was heavily about writing in an encyclopedic tone, which I am still learning to grasp. Thanks! [[User:Taevchoi|Taevchoi]] ([[User talk:Taevchoi|talk]]) 16:47, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Taevchoi|Taevchoi]]: sorry to hear you feel (I think?) like you've been mislead. The Teahouse crowd were probably trying to encourage and guide you, but as they (many of them, at least) don't do the actual reviewing, they don't necessarily look at drafts with the same critical eye and go into the same detail as AfC reviewers do. Also, they can't foresee the future, and what a draft eventually turns into.
:If you wish to appeal against the rejection, you need to approach the rejecting reviewer directly. Just be sure to build your case on policy-based arguments, pointing out clearly which notability criteria your draft meets, and what evidence supports that.
:You do also have the option, given that your account is autoconfirmed, of moving the draft into the mainspace yourself, as the AfC process is in most cases voluntary. I wouldn't necessarily ''recommend'' that you do that, because there was no doubt a good reason why the draft was rejected, but it is technically an option nevertheless. Just be aware that if New Page Patrol sends the article back to drafts, or worse moves to delete it, this will make it that much more difficult to have an article on this subject accepted in the future. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you so much, @[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]]! Appreciate your help! [[User:Taevchoi|Taevchoi]] ([[User talk:Taevchoi|talk]]) 23:59, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 17:02, 27 June 2024 review of submission by Seandavidfebre ==
((Lafc|username=Seandavidfebre|ts=17:02, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Sean_David_Febre))
Wikipedia Support Team,

I am writing to seek guidance on publishing a new Wikipedia page for Sean Febre, an entrepreneur and podcaster known for co-founding Febre Frameworks and co-hosting the Happy Hour Holidaze podcast.

I have drafted the article and gathered reliable sources, but I want to ensure it meets Wikipedia's notability and content guidelines. Could you please provide advice on the best steps to take to get this page published?

Thank you for your assistance. [[User:Seandavidfebre|Seandavidfebre]] ([[User talk:Seandavidfebre|talk]]) 17:02, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|Seandavidfebre)) Aside from this being (almost certainly) an [[WP:Autobiography|autobiography]], [[WP:PRIMARY|anything the subject writes, says, films, commissions, semaphores, interpretive-dances, etc.]] is useless for [[WP:Notability|notability]] and for [[WP:Biographies of living persons|biographical claims]]. Your "sources" are links to the homepages for his firm and his podcast. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:20, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
::Gave 'm my incredibly helpful deletion notice. [[User:Deepfriedokra|&#45;-  Deepfriedokra]] ([[User talk:Deepfriedokra|talk]]) 17:38, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 17:09, 27 June 2024 review of submission by SkibidiFarage ==
((Lafc|username=SkibidiFarage|ts=17:09, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Skibidi_Biden))
why [[User:SkibidiFarage|SkibidiFarage]] ([[User talk:SkibidiFarage|talk]]) 17:09, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

:((ping|SkibidiFarage)) Because we don't have articles on random one-off meme mutations unless [[WP:N|they've been reported on by multiple other outlets]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:17, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

== 20:25, 27 June 2024 review of submission by TheElectricEclectic ==
((Lafc|username=TheElectricEclectic|ts=20:25, 27 June 2024|draft=Draft:Yacco_Vijn))
This is a notable creative artist from The Netherlands in both music and digital communications. [[User:TheElectricEclectic|TheElectricEclectic]] ([[User talk:TheElectricEclectic|talk]]) 20:25, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

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