06:1506:15, 15 April 2011diffhist+44
Banqueting House
The paragraph went from James I, the builder of the banqueting house, to talking about henrietta maria, is queen, and the dances she held there. this implies that she was the wife of James I, but she was in fact the wife of Charles I, James' son.
01:5001:50, 3 December 2010diffhist+49
Ancient Roman architecture
The sentence was wrong, sentimental, vague, and opinionated. Mine is factual, clear, and elegant. (ie: rome is obviously western, and 'celestial glory', and 'several'))