The list was promoted by SchroCat 08:17, 16 February 2015 [1].
Abhishek Bachchan filmography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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I am nominating this for featured list because the filmography gives a good summary of Abhishek Bachchan's extensive career in the Hindi film industry. I expect constructive comments from the reviewers. This is my 1st FLC so please don't be too harsh to me. All helpful comments on improvement are welcome Jim Carter (from public cyber) 10:54, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from FrankBoy (Buzz) 13:17, 12 February 2015 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comment - The filmography's lead is really long. If you compare this to featured filmographies, such as Shah Rukh Khan, Hrithik Roshan, Leonardo DiCaprio, they are way shorter. I think you can reduce it by removing nominations as this is a filmography, not an award page and restrict the awards to the most notable ones, such as Filmfare and National Award. It says "with Kapoor as Naaz". Really? I mean is it that necessary to talk about Kareena's character in the film as if this is the article about the film. Remove some films from the lead and include notable ones. Mention his hits with some flops (notable ones), but not all. Also, there are some strong claims that need reliable sources, such as it says "Guru received extremely positive reviews". By providing two reviews of certain critics do not prove that it received "extremely" positive reviews. Plus, remove some critics' reviews and box-office performance.--FrankBoy (Buzz) 13:34, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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It was quite in a poor shape when this FLC was created but thanks to Cowlibob who helped Jim improving the list. All of the issues that I raised have been resolved barring overlinking in references; however, that's not an issue and and that is something that varies from user to user. That anyways does not stop me to Support. Good job Jim Carter! --FrankBoy (Buzz) 13:17, 12 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 17:18, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply] |
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I'm not going to sugar coat it, this list requires some serious work.
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For others: <ref>((cite web|url=http://www.cnbc.com/id/39981442/Bollywood_s_Top_Earning_Celebrities?slide=5/|title=Bollywood's Top-Earning Celebrities|publisher=CNBC|date=|accessdate=25 January 2015))</ref> - (Fixed)
Cowlibob (talk) 11:26, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Resolved comments from -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 03:36, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply] |
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*"However, he followed this with appearances in a string of films which performed poorly at the box office".. would mean that Refugee was a success, which is not the case.
From what I can see, the prose needs quite a bit of work. There is a significant lack of flow between your sentences; they seem like a listing of one film after another with little additional value. I don't want to discourage you, but a peer-review would probably be beneficial before an FLC nom. Cheers! -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 06:14, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Krimuk90: Jim Carter sorted some and I've sorted some of the other points above. Could you please point out what's wrong with ref 12? Also with India Today as I thought IndiaToday.in was it's online arm. Could you point out some good quality pics ones of him from recent times on Commons? My googlefu failed me. I'm not taking over just ensuring it's in good standing as I've put some effort into it, I'm certainly not taking it to its conclusion as I'm shortly going to be leaving Wikipedia for a while. Cowlibob (talk) 10:26, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Support: I've made a further round of copy/edits, and it looks good to me now. -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 03:36, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Jim Carter: You can use this as a source as it clearly shows it was the highest grossing film of all time (at the time of its release). — Ssven2 speak 2 me 15:09, 11 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Support — Ssven2 speak 2 me 10:53, 12 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]