00:1400:14, 13 December 2016diffhist+1,641
Jonah Lehrer
Completed citn for NYT review of latest book. Note, citn formats are consistently "Senior, Jennifer" and "April 8, 2016." Note, paragrph mvd fr 'Other projects' (covering rprted news of unpublished work) to 'In print, since the book is in print.
12 December 2016
23:5223:52, 12 December 2016diffhist+762
Jonah Lehrer
This is essentially reversion of one Safehaven edit. Daily news source makes no mention of Masters from Rhodes. Source generally supports edit, but not specifically, whereas early text while clunky, was accurate to source. Original returned.
23:4423:44, 12 December 2016diffhist+299
Jonah Lehrer
Filled in 2 bare reference(s) with reFill FILLED TWO URL-ONLY CITATIONS. PLEASE DO NOT BEGIN, AGAIN, TO ADD INFORMATION WITHOUT SOURCES, OR SOURCES AS URL ONLY. FOLLOW THE PATTERNS LAID DOWN BY EARLIER EDITORS. TY.
20:0820:08, 21 November 2016diffhist+342
Patrick Soon-Shiong
He is a naturalised American citizen, according to Forbes and other reports. Added current academic appointments and current CEO position before foundations, etc.
19:4519:45, 21 November 2016diffhist+67
Patrick Soon-Shiong
Making it easier to remove the unsourced sentences from the lead. Simplified Lakers statement in lead, moving details and citation into main body.
22:2922:29, 18 April 2016diffhist−146
Jonah Lehrer
Filled in 2 bare reference(s) with reFill First pass correction of repeating Kakutanu reference, and filling of two URL only citations.
22:1622:16, 18 April 2016diffhist+656
Jonah Lehrer
Supporting and clarifying New Yorker work, from source. Removing weak unnecessary third citation. Adding quote to citation. Removed UCLA Decision-Making Group wikilink
22:0522:05, 18 April 2016diffhist+1,138
Jonah Lehrer
Corrected Associated Press-Daily Mail (former NYT) citation. Checked and made all NYT citations uniform in format. Corrected Benartzi spelling. Removed Gawker Finnegan citation as poor source, opinion.