21:4821:48, 24 September 2015diffhist+80
MDR
→Other: As is standard in wikipedia, returning a phrase to the list that does not have its own article, but that appears within a WP article, allowing the disambiguation to direct to the article wherein the term appears. Le Prof
21:3421:34, 23 September 2015diffhist+133
Design of experiments
→History: Am stating implicitly, calling dubious, what is implied by having primary source-derived story in history section of article on DsOE. THIS SECTION NEEDS CITATION SAYING AN EXPERT JUDGES THIS TO BE EARLY DOE, OR IT NEEDS REMOVED. Le Prof
05:0905:09, 21 September 2015diffhist+138
George Edalji
Removing primary sources tag, because seeming primary source was a journal article. Indicating page number and general citation attention needed.
04:5304:53, 21 September 2015diffhist+275
George Edalji
Corrected/completed the Konnikova "Mastermind" citation, again noting lack go page numbers., completed Times (London) 1934 citation, and repaired ITV deadlink, to complete work on current citations. Le Prof
04:0604:06, 21 September 2015diffhist+598
George Edalji
Checked and touched up Birmingham City Council citation, repaired link to 1903 Star citation, added second Star citation to further reading.
03:0803:08, 21 September 2015diffhist+114
George Edalji
Corrected and completed the Risinger citation, and combined all redundant citations. Because page rage violates policy -- it is >90 pp. -- the page needed tag is added to each inline citation. ALso corrected format of Further reading. Le Prof
02:4902:49, 21 September 2015diffhist+294
George Edalji
Completed Peter Costello citation, fully adding all missing information. Since page range is about 40 pp., per WP guidelines, adding ((page needed)) tag to call for specific narrow page ranges. Le Prof
01:0601:06, 21 September 2015diffhist−511
George Edalji
To eliminate many redundant Weaver citations, created one standard complete citation, and converted the remaining to rp page formats, marking one without indicated page numbers,
21:1421:14, 19 September 2015diffhist+185
Web page
Article is not encyclopedic. Sections contain a median of 0 (zero) inline citations per SECTION (0 ≤ n ≤ 2). Almost all information is original research, and unverifiable. Sections are tagged as appropriate, and entire article is given refimprove tag.
20:4420:44, 13 September 2015diffhist+107
Lajos Kossuth
→Failure: More WP editors' OR: Of the 3 paragraphs, approx 20 lines, there is but 1 stated (poor) source—meaning, not that all this material derives from the 1893 Musical Times article, rather that it derives from an editor as "one source"
20:3920:39, 13 September 2015diffhist+56
Lajos Kossuth
→Entry into national politics: Of the 4 paragraphs, approx 25 lines, there is but 1 stated (poor) source—meaning, not that all this material derives from Kossuth encycl entry, rather that it derives from the "one source" of the WP editors' OR
07:0307:03, 13 September 2015diffhist+2,513
Survivor (film)
No new material added, just: (i) added 5 missing citations, to The National, Rotten Tomatoes, meteoritic, and to two mentioned specific additional reviews, and (ii) moved all reception information into the correct section. Cheers.
22:2922:29, 12 September 2015diffhist+3,872
Henry Augustus Lukeman
Completed addition of Dearinger material. Note many sourced text additions were difficult to reconcile with earlier unsourced content. Prose "It is… reported" was used to leave in unsourced earlier text, while making clear added text is verifiable.