20:5520:55, 7 June 2024diffhist+1 m
Coati
"its nickname 'the hog-nosed raccoon'" -> 'its nickname, the "hog-nosed raccoon"'.currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
3 June 2024
20:0820:08, 3 June 2024diffhist−1 m
E. Jean Carroll
Forgot to mention that in the last edit, I also changed "reputedly" to "reportedly". Just removing an extra space in this edit.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:2321:23, 2 June 2024diffhist+12 m
Historical rankings of presidents of the United States
Added comma after "Trump easily had the worst showing". "continued a recent rehabilitation of Ulysses Grant, with George W. Bush improving, Obama remaining high, and Trump with the fourth lowest ranking" -> "showed a continued recent rehabilitation of Ulysses Grant, showed George W. Bush improving, Obama remaining high, and Trump with the fourth lowest ranking". And more commas.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:1421:14, 2 June 2024diffhist−8
Fingering (sexual act)
Added "Consensual" in "Consensual fingering is generally considered safe sex", since the rest of the section is about assault. "How digital penetration without consent is classified legally" -> "How digital penetration ''without'' consent is legally classified". Added comma after "Australia", and "in the United States— depending on the state/jurisdiction" -> "in many United States jurisdictions".currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:0521:05, 2 June 2024diffhist0 m
E. Jean Carroll
With that interstitial in there, changing "describe" to "refer to" in "refer to the sexual assault", to address slight ambiguity.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
20:5420:54, 2 June 2024diffhist+17 m
E. Jean Carroll
Forgot the mobile editor doesn't let you edit the whole article in source mode. Just adding "name=WaPo-finger" to ref here.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
20:4420:44, 2 June 2024diffhist+70
E. Jean Carroll
Added the "which" clause in "initially chose not to describe the sexual assault, which was later established to involve forcible digital penetration, as rape, instead describing it as a fight”. Will dupe the cite for that in my next edit.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
20:3620:36, 2 June 2024diffhist+1 m
E. Jean Carroll
While not as key as the 3rd one, which I also added to the sentence, added the 2nd comma in 'In June 2023, Trump counter-sued Carroll for defamation, after she told CNN "yes he did" rape her, in response to a question about the jury not finding him liable for that offense'.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
20:3020:30, 2 June 2024diffhist+177
E. Jean Carroll
Punctuation and spacing fixes per WP:MOS. Added ((clarify |reason=Are the two main clauses of this sentence analagous, or being contrasted against each other? Without visiting the source(s), it's not clear.)).Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
27 May 2024
05:4805:48, 27 May 2024diffhist+55
Dinohippus
Added the parenthetical explanation of "dished" in "like ''Equus'', it did not have a dished face (i.e. the head profile did not have a concave section)". Could also consider linking over to Arabian horse here.currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:4221:42, 26 May 2024diffhist+27 m
Positive Christianity
" which saw great danger to Germany from the "new religion".((sfn|Berben|1975|pp=139–141)) The Catholic Church also denounced the creed's ideology that contained idolatry of race, people, the state in the 1937 papal encyclical ''Mit brennender Sorge''" -> ", whose members saw great danger to Germany from the "new religion" being imposed on it.((sfn|Berben|1975|pp=139–141)) In the 1937 papal encyclical ''Mit brennender Sorge'', the Catholic Church also denounced that the ideology con...".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:1221:12, 26 May 2024diffhist+23 m
Von Economo neuron
In lead, added the wiktionary link (there's no good Wikipedia target) to "the ramification that ''transmits'' signals". Not good to immediately hit the reader with a radically different usage of "ramification" than they've heard all their lives ("ramifications of decisions" should really be listed as sense 1 now). Personally, I think it'd be better to use a different term in the lead and wait to use that one till the body, to avoid sub-sub-parentheticals, but...currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
19 May 2024
01:1501:15, 19 May 2024diffhist+5
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
→In humans: Changed «Other» to «Underlying» in «Underlying conditions contributing to the diagnosis of Klüver–Bucy syndrome include». Again, I have to rely on SMEs to make sure I'm not mischaracterizing this one, since I don't have access to the cite.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
00:2500:25, 19 May 2024diffhist+15 m
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
→In popular culture: «Klüver–Bucy syndrome was featured in the ''Radiolab'' episode "Blame". In the lead story, the show looked into a man who developed Klüver–Bucy» → «Klüver–Bucy syndrome was featured in the lead story of the ''Radiolab'' episode "Blame". The show looked into a man who developed Klüver–Bucy». «Klüver–Bucy syndrome was also featured in the episode» → «In fiction, the Klüver–Bucy syndrome has been featured in the episode».Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
12:1012:10, 18 May 2024diffhist+1 m
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
Added the comma between the two very different presentations of docility: "characterized by exhibiting diminished fear responses, or reacting with unusually low aggression".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
12:0512:05, 18 May 2024diffhist0
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
Closer to the original wording, and less likely to be a mischaracterization: "Other conditions are sometimes misdiagnosed as Klüver–Bucy syndrome, including" -> "Other conditions contributing to the diagnosis of Klüver–Bucy syndrome include".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
11:4711:47, 18 May 2024diffhist+17
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
"This topic still remains controversial as complete Klüver–Bucy syndrome is rare in humans especially compared to monkeys" -> "This topic still remains controversial, in part because complete Klüver–Bucy syndrome is rare in humans, particularly compared to monkeys". That "complete" wasn't meaningful, was it...?Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
11:4311:43, 18 May 2024diffhist+15 m
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
In lead, "Pathology on the syndrome is still controversial” -> "The underlying pathology of the syndrome is still controversial".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
11:2311:23, 18 May 2024diffhist−2 m
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
Fixed sentence to be less of a non-statement: "The underlying conditions that lead to Klüver–Bucy syndrome can have an effect on the pattern of symptoms observed" -> "Depending on which underlying conditions lead to Klüver–Bucy syndrome, the pattern of symptoms observed can vary".Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
11:1511:15, 18 May 2024diffhist+23
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
"Other conditions may also contribute to a diagnosis of" -> "Other conditions are sometimes misdiagnosed as". "changes in temporal lobe is identified as a cause for aberrant sexual and hyper-sexual behaviors" -> "changes in the temporal lobe are commonly identified as a cause for hyper-sexuality, and other aberrant sexual behaviors". Added commas and "an". I don't have access to the cite, so hopefully I'm not mischaracterizing while fixing the English problems.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
10:4110:41, 18 May 2024diffhist+4 m
Klüver–Bucy syndrome
"with Norman Geschwind's theory and Muller theory offering different explanations" -> "with ''Muller theory'' and Norman Geschwind's theory...", as otherwise it looks like an English error. Could also say "so-called" instead of using italics, but that phrase can be misconstrued.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit