00:4100:41, 11 June 2024diffhist+77
Paul Gosar
attacking AOC -> killing AOC. Now please strap in, this is where the nitpicking comes. It's an important distinction that Gosar's video showed him killing, not just attacking a colleague. But if we write "killing a character with AOC's face", readers'll think of something far worse than the video (which was already bad enough to get him censured & kicked off committees). And if we writer "killing a monster with AOC's face" they'll think of a giant boar or something. So giant it is.current
13:3013:30, 30 April 2024diffhist+71
AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip
Italicized The Guardian. Rephrased the bit in == Lavender == about identification of targets as legitimate. It paraphrased uncomfortably close and stopped to give and define the IDF term for the process (incrimination). What it is is important, what name the IDF uses about it isn't. (Is the rephrased text too harsh?)
21:4421:44, 5 April 2024diffhist+75
AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip
Tweaked lead to not connect the dots more than NPR did. This is nitpicking, but it oughta be nitpicking, we're writing an encyclopedia here. Added section headings for Lavender. I'm not pleased to be bloating them up with "allegedly", but otherwise readers might get the impression these are things generals give interviews about, not whistleblower reports.
18:4818:48, 4 April 2024diffhist+6,722
Bombing of the Gaza Strip
→Lavender: this bit about the preset kill limits is the least on-topic, more about general shenanigans in the area than about AI specifically, and I'd be open to argument on whether we should cover them at all, but I'm including them since they're shenanigans that AI made possible and thus relevant to its use.
16:2716:27, 4 April 2024diffhist+6,750
Bombing of the Gaza Strip
→Lavender: Added preferential targeting at home, and IDF's response. A bit less on topic than the part above it, but still relevant information about how AI-assisted targeting is used in Gaza.