14:2614:26, 9 October 2010diffhist−319
Yahweh
Controversy is mentioned, and the prior edit exaggerated Wikipedia policy and fails to provide citations: see talk
23:2723:27, 5 October 2010diffhist+2,088
Yahweh
Lede should avoid OR and unsupported assertions, accurately summarize article as a whole, attribute viewpoints, and avoid the appearance that controversial assertions enjoy widespread consensus.
30 September 2010
13:4813:48, 30 September 2010diffhist−59
Yahweh
Lede cleanup. Spelling is language specific, pronunciation is not. Good writing uses paragraphs. The first sentence should define the subject before controversy is mentioned.
14:2414:24, 15 September 2010diffhist+812
Yahweh
Per WP:Lede: Lede should adaquately summarize article, and appropriate lede length for this article is 4 paragraphs
17:1617:16, 18 January 2010diffhist+28,753
Yahweh
Re-added historical section to provide opportunity for making references verifiable with page numbers: see talk