06:2906:29, 13 July 2011diffhist−67
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→Demographics: not enough room for multiple population figures - the current one is reliable because it comes from the publisher of the official statistic, the U.S. Census
06:2706:27, 13 July 2011diffhist+7
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→Energy: every word counts, and mentioning the name of the specific incident is not appropriate - remember, the entire presidencies of Kennedy and Johnson are combined into a single sentence!
06:2506:25, 13 July 2011diffhist−286
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→Transportation: Added highway info to replace marginally-useful info on breakdown by car type - ratio of sedans to SUVs is more microscopic than the country's transportation backbone
09:2309:23, 8 July 2011diffhist+14
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→Foreign relations: Reduce POV - America has large GNI that must be contextualized, and private giving doesn't need to be compared with public giving ("in contrast" is a value judgment)
09:1709:17, 8 July 2011diffhist−251
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→Military: (1) Remove statements possibly intended to introduce POV by excessive comparison (2) Put commander-in-chief statement in better location
08:4708:47, 8 July 2011diffhist−48
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→Religion: Converting ARIS references to Pew references (consistency for current data, so figures add up to 100% and there's no picking-and-choosing data), while ARIS is used for comparative trends
08:3208:32, 8 July 2011diffhist+58
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→Religion: Including historical data alongside current figures risks POV - instead, include trends in a separate sentence analyzing overall religious shifts
07:3307:33, 8 July 2011diffhist−53
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→Food: economy of space: explaining the marketing tactics used to popularize certain drinks is not within the scope of this article