07:2407:24, 16 May 2024diffhist−1,384
Waiting staff
→Tipping in the United States: Rephrasing; some content was aspirational (regarding expectations), some was not really accurate or relevant (service charges are not necessarily for the benefit of waitstaff). Reducing regional bias by genericizing section.
09:0309:03, 1 May 2024diffhist−116
Aisultan Nazarbayev
→Football career: Removed text. Seems inconceivable that this both is true and belongs here. Citation links to dead resource; could only find truncated archival copy that didn't support this fact. Doesn't sound like a British award; surprising that he would be eligible. (Unclear why this text existed in the first revision of this article, with a citation only added by another editor later. Surely would have seemed obviously out of place, given zero apparent relation to sporting career.)
02:3402:34, 30 March 2024diffhist+198
Lake Merritt
Using reference to add information. Citation still needed for the florid description of wildlife and the visitors' reactions.