05:5205:52, 27 December 2009diffhist−78
Indiana
Fixed a few grammatical problems in intro to improve readability. Took out a reference to Hoosier Hysteria which seems inappropriate for the basic intro, should be relegated to sports section
05:4805:48, 27 December 2009diffhist+27
Indiana
Small correction: article said Indiana had 'one major city' but Indiana has several cities with populations of more than 100,000, fixed the sentence to make it more accurate
06:1206:12, 24 December 2009diffhist−3,777
Oman
→Food: Deleted most of this section as it was so POV, so full of original research and so clearly lifted from a tourist guide it wasn't salvageable. Saved a little bit, though.
05:5505:55, 24 December 2009diffhist−9
Oman
→Tourism: fixes some grammar problems. A lot more needs to be done here; this is all unsourced and still seems to be straight out of a tourist brochure
05:5305:53, 24 December 2009diffhist−188
Oman
→Tourism: Removed more blatantly POV sentences, also took out some things that seemed to be straight from a tourist brochure. Seems almost like someone was writing this to draw in tourists