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Reviewer: ZooBlazer (talk · contribs ) 05:08, 14 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
Hello, I'll be happy to handle this review. I'll hopefully get through the article tomorrow and post my initial thoughts then.
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Overall, I think the article is in pretty good shape. There are some minor things I came across when going through the article and I did my best to organize by the sections they're in. -- Zoo (talk ) 17:26, 14 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
Can you find a source for the anthem being pre-recorded so that you can replace the hidden note in the infobox?
Add halftime show info to replace hidden note if possible
Change dominating to defeating . It's more neutral, even if it wasn't a close game.
CFP organizers announced that they would move the release of final rankings --> add "the" before final
You may want to update ref #8 to this as the current ref link is for 2023
I suggest maybe updating the total attendance ref to this . It both confirms the attendance listed in the article, as well as stating that the attendance was 23% of capacity which can be updated in the same section of the article which currently states the percent was approximately 20%.
Add a space between the game summary and 1st half subsections.
Alabama started their next drive well, with a 12-yard pass --> Alabama started their next drive with a 12-yard pass
Alabama scored even more quickly on this drive --> Alabama scored even quicker on this drive
Ohio State ended their final drive of the first half --> can just say final drive of the half, since the section is about the first half
I'd recommend archiving the refs. One ref is already marked as dead (#7) and needs replaced, or if there is an archive available from before the link went down, just add that.
Not absolutely necessary, but I suggest Wikilinking the sites for the refs where available. Ex: Sports Illustrated
The official website link is no longer related to the game
@PCN02WPS : Are you going to be able to make the edits? I'd hate to have to fail this when it's so close to passing. -- Zoo (talk ) 18:46, 20 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
@ZooBlazer I believe everything is taken care of, ready for another look. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs ) 21:02, 20 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
@PCN02WPS Everything looks good except ref #9 (formerly 7) is still dead and didn't get an archive. Fix that and I'll pass the article. -- Zoo (talk ) 21:11, 20 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
@ZooBlazer Totally missed that one - it's been taken care of now. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs ) 19:28, 21 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
@PCN02WPS Everything looks good now. Passing. Congrats! -- Zoo (talk ) 20:04, 21 March 2023 (UTC) [ reply ]
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