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According to architectural critic Russell Sturgis, this was done not only to give the impression of an "applied facade", but also to hide the fact that the two streets met at an obtuse angle. Remove second comma (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)
One of the periods is supposed to be for the initial in the name Cipriani S.A., while the other period is supposed to denote the end of the sentence. But MOS:CONSECUTIVE recommends one period here, so I've fixed it. Epicgenius (talk) 13:17, 6 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Bowery Historic District, an NRHP district, in 2013, Certainly there has to be a way to say this with fewer nested appositives/commas.
8: This 1893 New York Times article is called a bunch of times:
100 x 100 foot area Y
Old houses on the site Y
Basement is granite up to the water table Y
Roofs of tile except for the banking room "dome" Y
"Time with his hour glass and scythe, on one side, and Industry on the other..." Y
Portico with four columns Y
Safes Y
Directors' room Y
"Mycenean marble" Y
President's office in the rear Y
$500,000 cost estimate Y
13: 1888 bank manual p.23, bank opened in second building on March 13, 1853 Y
15: Offline source, White & White.
24: Greenberg as owner; hosts weddings and bar mitzvahs; $4 million cost; opened October 2002. Those check out. After the building was converted into an event venue in 2002, a seating area was placed one story above the main banking room. The second half of this sentence is not checking out to this source; presumably another one covers it?
Oops, I meant to cite the second half of this sentence to the USA Today article (previously [86]). Further down, [24] and [86] were placed next to each other, so I accidentally copied one instead of the other. I've fixed that now. Epicgenius (talk) 13:17, 6 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
38: New York Tribune article (cannot read, but citation metadata is correct)
60: Bowery Bank had 155,000 depositors in 1923 Y
64: Daily News correction that offices remained at existing site Y
81: Millard had started renovations; support of Wu's plans; community concern over a "cabaret" Y
91: Curbed NY article on the building going to auction Y
101: LPC hearings. This article alone does not mention the Bowery, but co-sited ref 102 does. Y
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