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Lappenbusch was hired by the school as assistant line coach in 1931., not immediately apparent to the layman that this is referencing American football
mass produced should have a dash in it
of the day including Frank Leahy of Notre Dame. comma before including
I'm not sure the first 2 sentences are encyclopedic. Anyway to merge them or summarize them in a more encyclopedia way? The way the yare written almost seem like "fun facts"
I deleted the second sentence. I slightly reworded the first one - I kind of like it, but I can remove it if you want.
Could you distinguish that it is football without using a section header? Typically we don't have a single sub-header like this.
As for as I'm aware that's how its done for college coaches of multiple sports, but I could change it to perhaps "Head football coaching record" if you'd like.
I'm sorry, I'm not exactly understanding what you're asking me to do - could you elaborate? I'm not exactly sure adding "Source:" after and died in September 1996 in Enumclaw, Washington would make sense.
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